*Love and Hate2*NTL on pg 151 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
waiting for the next part...


but actuallly i don't like mayank's character..
but it's okay..
may be the demand of the story..
i am really looking forward to it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
plezz cont sis, em waiting eagerly 4 next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Api update kaha hai??? i thought u forgot again to PM me...😆..Issilye takajhaki kar rahi hoon ke update kiya ya nahi..lolz...
Update soon oki..
Love u loads api..🤗

PS: im missing u...😒...How r u api??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maris sis..
please update soon...
we are egarly wating for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
i m updating in few hours...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Writer Note

Thank you so much everyone for liking the concept🤗and for ur beautiful comments🤗really means a lot to me..
@sujata..about ur comment..yup!!Mayank character is quite similar to first one but not completely as i said earlier this story is totally changed,there is lots more in the story,you will see in coming parts😛
All..sorry for delay 😳🤗i will try to give updates regularly..plz keep reading the stroy..
love y all🤗
Maria..
Remember me in your prayers..
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Love and Hate 2

"Mayank she is my daughter,Nupur..is ki Shaadi hai"he happily introduced her giving her a side hug while Mayank was lost he did not remember what Shiv Bhushan was telling him, he knew just one thing he wanted to touch her..

"Mayank"

Mayank startled at the voice of Shiv and drifted his eyes towards him; "huh!!"he was embarrassed by his loss of control,

"Mayank,She is my sweet daughter Nupur,my jaan and Nupur,he is Mayank ,Sharma's son"Shiv said giving Nupur quick peck on forehead and smiled giving their introduction, "oh hi Nupur" coming out of his trail of thoughts Mayank tried to control himself and forwarded his hand, "hi Mayank" but in spite shaking hands with him she gave him just casual smile and swung round to face her father without noticing the anger which her ignorance had spread inside him, "dad you didn't tell me how's it looking *showing heena*"she rolled her eyes lifting her head a bit to seeing his response, "its looking beautiful "he exclaimed while grinning. "But I am not able to see Neev names in your heena"she blushed hard to hear his name and lowered her eyes.

Mayank who was already boiling in anger to not getting her attention now feeling more frustrated to see her blushing and smiling at her soon to be husband's name.

"Oh!!I think Papa, Reena *girl who was applying heena on her hand*forgot to write his name," she disappointedly lifted her head after not finding Neev names on her hands. "Let me remind her" she said trying to hide her blush under her beautiful smile and moved back towards the sitting area in the hall where the girls were applying heena on each others hand.

"Shiv.. Please come here" someone called him and and he looked at Mayank , "I will be back,you enjoy" he excused Mayank and left him alone standing there.

Struggling with his desires Mayank was trying hard to compose himself after seeing such a captivating beauty in front of his eyes Although he was not the type of person who would accepted someone has guts to take the peace of his heart,he had been spending nights with many girls but no one could keep him interested in her after spending one night with him,In fact he never wanted anything with a girl beyond getting laid.

But there was something in that girl which had took peace of his heart and had raised strange thirst inside him that he could not help but starring her from head to toe, his wild imagination was motivating his feelings.

"Its Neev call"

Her melodious voice brought him back to his imaginations and he saw her, placing her cell phone with her ear lobe she was climbing stairs enjoying the teasing glances of her friends.

Mayank knew he could not hold himself more. So he knew he had to did something to solace his desires.

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"Neev, i am sorry ,actually i was in hall and Reena was applying heena on my hands that's why I could not attend your call"Nupur said almost in pleading tone slamming the door behind her,

"It's not fair Nupur,i was calling you from the past half an hour"Neev complained "i am sorry baba, i'll not repeat my mistake again,please"she pouted this time and Neev smiled imagining cute expressions on her face while pouting.

" I am missing you Nupur"

And his next words had fluttered her heart, her lips curled into beautiful smile and blush crept over her face enhancing her beauty,

"i am missing you too "she whispered holding her breath in shyness which brought grin on Neev face ,"and i love you and now what you say"

She blushed hard to listen his teasing tone; she understood what he was demanding,

"i..."She stopped in mid way to hear the crack sound of the door."i think someone has entered in the room" bye"

"But Nupurrr"he tried to protest but she cut the call as their parents had restricted their meetings or phone talks before marriage. "Bye Neev"she cut the call and about to turn around when she shuddered to feel someone's breathed at the nape of her neck. "Who is..."Nupur swung round and stopped in mid way to see Mayank standing in her room so close to her,

"You!!!"Taking aback at his unexpected presence in her room Nupur lifted her eyes at him giving him shocking expressions. "Yup!!!i am Mayank your father had introduced me but I think you did not pay attention to his words, so I thought to introduce myself to you" he leaned down on her taking steps towards her and Nupur leaned back feeling a bit scared to feel strange aggressiveness in his tone but then she composed herself and tried to hide her nervousness and looked back at him, "Mr. i am less interested to know about you" she frowned as she felt urge to slap him hard but then concealing her anger; she managed to ask, " Anyways what are you doing here? It's my room" but unfortunately, he had been recognized the terror in her eyes to see him in her room, his lips curled into a evil smile to see her frightened, "I know it's your room that's why I came here as I wanted to meet with a beautiful girl alone"he forwarded his hand to remove the tiny strand of her hair leaning on her but she shrugged his hand, "Excuse me, keep maintain distance, you are a guest in our house that's why i am giving you respect and bearing your rubbish talks but its not mean I will let you to cross your limit Mr.Mayank,"She took a deep breath to calm herself ,she did not want to make any scene as there were guest gathered in her house for her sangeet ceremony so, she tried to ignore his aggressive behavior " Anyways i am interested in your talks or in you not .so please give me a way so i go downstairs" tried to ignore further talk Nupur took steps towards the door but Mayank grabbed her wrist and Nupur turned around look at him with widened eyes in shock but before she could manage to say something at his unexpected act she felt herself pulling towards him, her breath caught in her throat and she placed her hands on his chest to creating distance between their bodies, "no one ever tried to ignore me, how can you do this Ms.Nupur?" he said gazing at her and Nupur shivered to see aggressiveness in his tone and tried to pull herself back but she knew it was not an easy task as he was holding her tightly, a tear escaped from the corner of her eye as she felt helpless under his grip, "please let me go or else I will call someone" her choking voice escaped from her lips and Mayank smiled "you can't Ms Nupur as if anyone came here and saw us alone in the room you can guess what they might think about us"Nupur lifted her head and looked at his face who was grinning now,she lifted her hand to slap him but Mayank held her hand, "Well girls usually give me something else when I wrap them in my arms"he smirked and looked at her lips leaning down on her face and Nupur tried to push him back giving him a disgusted look. "I want to remind you I am not like of those girls whom you met before and if you not let me go I will call everyone here and I will tell them how disgusted person you are"She again gave him disgusted look tried to free herself, "as I earlier said you can't do this Nupur,"Mayank leaned over her and Nupur moved her face aside to feel his breath near to her face ,Mayank caressed her skin with his knuckle and Nupur tried to swat his hand away , "what do you want to me?" she turned her face towards him, "break this marriage"

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here is next part..i hope u ll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Mindblowing update..
Mayank is really jerk and the Last line...
please update soon,very curious to know what will happen next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
fabulous job mari

again an amazing update
u r superb

keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Mindblowing update api...
Uff how disgusting mayank's intention is...Goshh im really scared now...I hope he wont do anything that will make him repent in future...
And haan the marriage is bound to break one or another day so us mein mujhe koi prb nahi hai...😆
Cont soon api with a bada wala update plz...
Love u loads...🤗

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