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absolutely STUNNING .. loved loved loved the whole lot Especially the last letter from Arnav!

Ohhh beautifully written... At least I predict sum tin which matches to reality 😉

Thanx for the pm

that was so beautiful and sad...

That was so nice! I loved the ending! It was indeed a fairy tale though started with a sad note!!

Payal's letter - the way Khushi had considered Payal as her sister..Payal wouldn't level up to it even if she had wanted to...even after all of this...she still had not regretted anything that Khushi had done to save her sister's marriage!
The way you had describes the aarti scene and how she hadn't given Khushi the prasaad because she failed to tell her the reason behind the marriage was just sooo sad..
"...or mistrust"! To tell her to have a happy life inspite of their indiffernces was really sad!

Akash's letter - talking about the Calender Photoshoot and to make him realize that silence can hurt one when they are in most need of it was just incredibly written!!

Anjali's letter - finally she sees that she had always let everybody treat her like a freaking kid who wasn't ready to face the 'cruel' world and to be in a bubble that had supposedly secured her from the misconception and to be in an illusion. And who would always seek help from her family. And at the sight of her crying, everybody would pamper her until everything was according to her.

Khushi said it all!! Making her realize that she is too dependent on her bro and that was the only reason why he had married her! To not make his sister face the world she was not ready for!! because he wouldn't want to scar her!
And then the sindoor...to make her see the irony! About how she herself was a hypocrite by neglecting her beliefs and making Khushi feel like she was at fault. Anjali still in an illusion of perfect marriage, perfect family, and to have a perfect life!! Never bothering to get rid of her denial and see what reality holds for her!!

Garima's letter - awww!!!! That was SOOO sadd!!!! Man...when she said that I forgot that this wasn't my real home...and they had reminded that to her..=|

Mami's letter - WOW I never really thought of that...I always just assumed her to be nothing but weird..but you cracked her soo well!!! like how she never fit in and then came these two...Payal and Khushi...she wanted them to suffer like she had in a way!! Loved it man!!! Now it makes Sooo much more sense to why she is like that...well written man!!!

Arnav's letter - his saying that he doesn't deserve to shed any tears...</3.
And then him walking towards the dresser which held his letter from Khushi...I was honestly expecting a lonnnggg letter...and to see those three words was just heart wrenching!! It said it all...LOVED HIS LETTER sooo damn much!!!

The praying - My FAVORITE chapter!!! oohhh goshh...!!! "I'm praying". I am seriously left speechless right now..!!! I cant think straight...!!! Loved every single word that you had portrayed..!!! It's just incredible!! I felt like I was holding my breath when inwas reading this <33

The last chapter... Awww how cute <3. You are soo right though..that we see Khushi having a heart to forgive and to forget!!


Loved this!!! Just SOOO awesome..(;

I cried from through all the letters... thanks. Awesome.

👏 oh god.. it's sooo touching... 😭 khushi died... it's really heart wrenching... i really feel totally broken when i read such os and ff's . i atually see the reality of life through it- death . just loved the way you potrated the feelings.. i could actually feel it through my heart.. it was as if i was at the place of each person and cry my heart out as how i would i feel if someone soo dear would leave me... and arnav's letter -- well i would have recieved i would have actually almost died... 💔

I had tears in my eyes reading Khushi's letter. What a heart wrenching yet beautiful letter :) reminded me of the first time I read The Notebook. Stories like this don't happen yet when they are written in this manner, my heart can't help but hope with the mightiest hope that one day I shall find someone like this for myself. It's a mark of a talented writer if he or she can bring about such desires in someone's heart :) Thank you!

I loved it. I cant believe its the same person who's writing Temporary Insanity. I cried this time too.