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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

awesome update loved it wrote a better comment but some how i deleted it any way wanted khushi to vent more on grima feel she got away to easily would have loved her to really give it to her thanks for the pm

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

You know if I was to take a guess, I would wager that the last letter would be to Shyam - the man who,from a rather strange & twisted perspective, did less harm by her than Arnav has, despite being a liar and a cheat! I would think his would be the last letter!

Garima's letter made me sad and touched a nerve somewhere with the adoption thingi..wonder if at some point in time, all children who have been adopted feel this way, at some situational circumstances?

But perhaps my favourite letter so far - it so wonderfully encapsulated the old and the new Khushi. The joys and innocence of the old one and the wariness and fatalistic acceptance of the new one! Acceptance that she was yet not one of them - very piognant!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Great concept, great letters.. Keep them coming! :)

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Nmyra

I know what you mean i felt a bit of hesitancy making Khushi so blatant in her bitterness , but i wanted a clear difference between payal and anji, payal she grew up with, her expectations are more from her, and as for anji notice she's more upset abt how Arnav is afftected than herself, also here in this ficlet Anji knows about Shyam, not just suspects ... _hugs_ for taking the time out to analyze ur a gem!!!😳

It would be sacrilege to not give a lovely piece of work the merit and respect it deserves! No let me rephrase that! To not give it the respect and thought that it deserves! Hugs!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Omg wow... I loved both the letters... and yes Maasi has ma in it... they say the reason mom's sister is called maasi is because is ma jaisi... Go Khushi... I loved how you are portraying her character as a grown up rather than a happy go lucky teen... well done pls pls continue soon... I can guess her last letter is to DM :P

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Last letter not to Arnav...good...we ll know sooner what Khushi has written to him..:D

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

uh oh! that wasnt too bad .. she is regretting for taking the liberty of calling them amma, babuji.. i dont mostly like garima anyways..

Great update!!!! what last letter isnt for arnav? then?? dont tell me she wrote to OP HP JP 🤣

But loving this series.. update soon :)

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Girl,Bauji sounds Punjabi,KKG calls Shashi Babuji. You don't want that glitch in perfect update. I honestly felt bad for Garima in today's episode. She's not as insensitive as I initially thought and it hurts her equally to see her daughter in pain and she does consider KKG as her daughter.

I initially enjoyed the letters as they showed KKG's angst against the stupid members of the family but the reactions of Payal,Anjali and especially Akash today made me think that these people might just stand by Khushi when the truth comes out. After reading Garima's letter where she addresses her as Maasi is just heartbreaking.

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mali

@mali

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Again, you have me in tears.

the part where she writes, that she had forgotten that it wasn't home, that she didn't belong, that it was charity, it blew me away.

she makes it very clear that she knows all they care about is Payal. Not once does she write about how much she has done for the family. It's because she did with love and not obligation or charity.

that she doesn't leave a letter for Babuji shows he was the only one there for her, the only who truly trusted and appreciated her.

please continue, this is absolutely amazing!

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ipkknd37

@ipkknd37

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

All u r letters r wonderful 👏. Those letters have made Khushi strong. I read ur comment stating some1 said Khushi was out of character in her letter to Anjali. But I felt right. Khushi is not d 1 to not call a spade a spade. even if that weren't d case she has changed after the horrific xperience. So I personally think that letter was true to her character.

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