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Posted: 13 years ago
it was fabulous i am speechless
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was amazing and too cute loved it tons
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awsme update..
atlast smriti knows dat rey is not a bad boy n dat her impresion about rey was completely wrong..
plz update soon..waiting to know whats gonna hapen next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update dear!!!!😊

reallly luved it to the extremest. core..!!!❤️

outstanding ...Fab wrk !!!👏

luved the part where smriti hears reyam conversation !!!!👍🏼

i hope she thinks out well fr kriyaansh !🤔

sooo plsss do continue sooon nd PM me !😳
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first of all very soory i did not read it then ...
now that i have read it let me tell u how i felt AWESOME and PERFECT
finally rey gets a good image before smriti... and smriti is doubting her decision ...
Neelima, Rahul and Sonia.. thnx to them for saving rey... and as always luved reyam convo... waiting for smriti and rey meeting ...do update soon and... next time i will surely be on time
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry ..
Pata hai bahut late hun ..
But bilkul time nahi tha ..
Well, better late than never .. 😛

But I hope you remember I was the first one to hit the like button ! 😛

Baaki sab ki tarah main yeh nahi kahungi ki finally you updated. 😛
'Cause mujhe donoin cheezein pata tha. Ki aap update kyun nahi kar rahi aur kab karogi ! 😉

Firstly, Thanks a lot for mentioning my name ! 😊
And no thanks. Itna toh chalta hai na dosti mein ! 😆
But haan hug chalega ! 😛 🤗

Now give yourself a tight slap from my side. You know, ek dum zor waala. 😡
Paagal ho chuki ho aap. Aankh kholke padhe na comments. ( I read all just now. )
Pehle yeh bol bol kar ro rahi thi ki acha nahi lagega. And jab sab ko pasand aa gaya tab bhi tension le rahi ho ! Piece ho aap bhi ! 😛

Coming to the update.
Like I said before, I love it.
This is my favorite chapter. Sach mein. This was the most important one and cleared up the misunderstandings to quite a level.
I really like that part where ReYam were talking and Smriti was hearing from behind. 😛
Aha, am so excited. Rey grand ma knows and loves Kria. Jaldi se unka bhi ek part dikha do na ! Lol ! 😆
Hm. Rey's words were so deep yet so simple. They brought tears in my eyes. Kuddos to you for such a fab update ! 😃
In all mast tha. But I wanna kill that Smriti. I mean infatuation - really ? Paagal ho gayi hai woh and over-protective bhi ! 😛
And there you end at a bad time ! Kya ending thi I mean. At least Precap ka first point toh cover kar de te. But aap toh aap ho. 😡
Ab bas jaldi se ek bada sa happy sa update de do. 😛

And after that I'm expecting a note soon ! 😛

Love you a lot for updating and this wonderful update. It was awesome and some lines brought tears in my eyes. Huggies to you !! 🤗 🤗

Keep up the good work and updating faster ! 😉
- Lots of love, Devil !! 😉 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...that was too cute!!update soon...n plz plz pm me! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
unres!! finally😛

Note: I know u guys r highly pissed off at me, but i was seriously stuck as to how to proceed.

It is a boring update but it is highly important.

Before i forget i would like to give a big thanks and hug 🤗to aditi (angelic_aditi) and kritzz (kritid3lover) for helping me out.


aww! you are most welcome jaan!😃🤗



The Orphanage

Orphanage had been a favourite place for kriyansh for the long time. Kriya being the only child used to visit their to enjoy the company of the children there. Hence she never felt sad foe being a single child. He found the sibling love she longed for among those children. Children adored her. That was the place where Kriya became high-spirited as she was now. Rey's family had been funding the place for long time. His gradma loved spending time with the children there. Rey whenever he came to Dehradun would visit there to revisit his childhood. He would also become a child there. The orphanage was set up by a lady named Neelima and is now run by her children Rahul and his wife Sonia. Neelima is good friends with Rey's grandma. Smriti respects her a lot and always seek her advice. She even has good relation with Rey's grandma. Neelima has seen both Kriyansh growing up and is fond of them. Smriti is good friends with Rahul and Sonia. Rey's grandma also knows Kriya and loves her a lot.

haila! rey's grandma knows kria? 😲

Smriti decides to take Kriya to orphanage hoping she might become happy for sometime. She forces Kriya a lot but Kriya denies everytime giving a silly excuse. The fact was Kriya was could no longer a plaster a smile on her face for so long. As alone she was finding it very difficult to smile in front of her mother and now inn front of children she was not that strong. She feigned tiredness. Smriti also decided to give her some more time. But she was getting worried for her daughter. She wanted her daughter back.she then decides to go to orphanage to seek counsel from Neelima, Rahul and Sonia.


chalo smriti ko apni beti ka dard to dikhai diya..serial mein toh andhi hai!!😡


Meanwhile Rey decides to go to orphanage to relive his childhood so that he can think afresh to implement his plan which he had no idea of but just knew that he had to bring a smile on Kriya's face by convincing her mother to give her permission for everything. He remembered his grandma's words of not doing anything and having faith in Universeji. "Universiji" he thought. He was having a feeling that his grans knew about Kriya. He shrugs the thought away and goes to the orphanage.


awww...rey's grandma also believes in universe ji! out of the world!


Smriti reaches there before. He visits all the children but children were sad as their di didn't come to meet them. They went away feeling sad. Smriti felt helpless as her daughter was having a rough phase in her life. meanwhile she goes and meets the trio and discuss about life. she start telling them about Kriya about she is sad and dejected. She feels hurt as her daughter is hiding her tears aways from her. Rahul and Sonia ask her about her sudden return from Mumbai. Smriti narrates the whole incident. Rahul and Sonia feels that she took a decision in haste. Smriti gets a call and she excuses herself. Neelima, Rahul and Sonia discuss about Smriti's decision.


discussion kya karna hai, smriti is wrong and kria is right..period. bechare bachhe dukhi hogae..😭


R&S: ma aapko nhi lagta Smriti ne zyada hi sakht condition rakh di Kriya ke saamne.


meko lagta hai!!


N: haan main jaanti hun. Ek maahone ke naate ek hadh tak sahi bhi thi kyunki aaj kal ke ladkon ka bharosa nhi hai lekin...


haan zamana bhi kharab hi hai..🤣


R: Maa theek hai lekin use ek baar Kriya ke bare mein sochna toh chahiye tha na. Maanta hun usne dance ke liye jhuth bola lekin yeh pehli baar toh nhi than a. Jo bhi kaho woh kuch zyada hi sakht ho gayi


ekdum sahi bola bande ne!😉


S: haan ma. Woh abhi bacchii hai. Maana usne jhuth kaha lekin usne aisa kuch koi bada galat kaam toh nhi kar diya. Fir smriti hi toh batati rehti thi ki kriya wahan kitna accha perform kar rhi thi har cheez mein. Jab bhi main usse baat krti woh kriya ko leke kitna khush rehti.

N: main jaanti hun lekin tum lig toh jaante ho na woh kriya ke liye kitni protective hai. Uske case mein woh apni koi bhi baat pe atal nhi rehti. Use yahi dar rehta hai ki kriya ke saath kuch galat na ho jaaye. Lekin smriti yeh nhi samajhti ki kriya jab tak giiregi nhi sambhalegi kaise... humein usse baat krni hogi.

Meanwhile smriti comes. They are about to talk to her but then children starts shouting in happiness and then gets silent. Every1 gets tensed and goes in the garden where they were playing. They call a small girl to enquire.

R: beta kya huya tum log aise chillaye kyun aur fir ekdum se shaant kyun ho gaye.

G: baba leyansh bhaiya aaye hain. ( she lisps.)

And she goes. The trio heave a sign of relief and starts smiling. Smriti is confused.

S: yeh kaun hai. ( she doesn't knows Rey's full name)

So: kuch nhi reyansh aaya huya hai issliye bacche excited hain.

S: yeh kaun hai jisse bacche itna pyar krte hain.

N: bahut pyaara ladka hai. Sharati hai lekin dil se itna accha hai. Sabhi bacche use bahut pasand krte hain. Maine bachpan se use dekha hai. Usse zyada sweet koi nhi ho sakta.


rey se zyada sweet koi ho hi nai sakta!!


S: lagta aapko bahut pasand hain.

N: woh hai hi itna accha hai. Upar se lagta hai jaise bahut bigda huya hai lekin andar se utna hi pyaara hai. Dil ka bahut saaf ahi.

R: smriti humein Kriya ke bare mein kuch baat krni thi.

S: haan bolo.

So: smriti tumne uske saath kuch zyada hi strict ho gayi thi. Theek hai main maanti hun ki usne tumse jhuth bola lekin iska matlab yeh nhi kit um use aise sab kuch chudvake yahan le aao.

S: baat sirf itni sin hi. Agar usne dance ke liye sirf jhuth bola toh main maanti lekin woh ladka woh cassanova types dikhta hai and uske andaaz bhi ujhe pasandd nhi tha.

N: lekin beta yeh Kriya ki zindagi hai. Use iske bare mein faisla lene do. Vaise bhi kriya un ladkiyon mein se nhi hai jo aise ladkon ke jaal mein fas jaaye aur saath hi woh apni sharton pe jeti hain so seedhi si baat hai usne kuch soch samajh ke hi uss ladke se dosti ki hogi. Aur fir tumhi toh kehti ho ki kitab ko uske cover se nhi judge krna chahiye. Tumhe kaise pata woh ladka galat hi hain. Tum kitni baar mili ho usse.

S: common aunty. Kriya meri beti hain. Main uss ladke se do baar mil chuki hun. Ek baar jail mein aur ghar mein ( narrates the whole incident). Ab aap hi batayiye main kaise maan lun woh sahi hain.

N: beta paristhitiyan bhi toh galat hoti haina. Har insaan se galti hoti hain lekin iska matlab yeh nhi ki hum uss insaan ke bare mein bina jaane ek opinion bana len. Aur tum hi toh kehti ho ki insaan ko ek baar mein aprakhna galat hain.

S: par... ( thinks hether she was right or not in judging Rey. It was true that she never did give Rey a single chance. She already had formulated an opinion about him. the small voice that was inside her that she had constantly subdued was coming up. After all kriya was her daughter and she had taught her to judge people and given kriya bein a headstrong girl she wudn't fall for some1 like Rey so easily. So was she wrong???)

Meanwhile every1 turn to see children playing happily with Rey. Rey was also enjoying to the fullest. He had his back turned towards the 4 so Smriti cudn't actually see him. she asks the trio

S: bachein kitne khush. Maine unhe itna khush kabhi nhi dekha.

So: sahi hain. Reyansh kea ate hi sab itne khush ho jaate hain.

N: vaise woh hain bhi bahut pyaara

R: jab main usse pehli baar mila tha toh laga tha ki bahut arrogant hain lekin use janne ke baad pata chala ki woh kitna accha hain.

Meanwhile rey is busy with the kids. He doesn't know that he is being watched. All the four are smiling seeing them play and suddenly Rey turns. Smriti is flabbergasted.

S: ( shocked) ye hain Reyaansh...

So: toh hum kya keh rha hain tab se... off course yahi hain. Kya Smriti.

S: par...

N: kya huya beta..

S: yahi toh woh ladka hain jiske bare mein main abhi bata rhi thi. Mera matlab Rey..

N: agar yeh vahi ladka hai toh kriya ne sahi insaan ke saath rishta banaya.mujhe nhi lagta ki isse accha uske liye koi ho sakta hai.

S: lekin iski harkatein. I mean yeh aise kaise..

R: smriti hum yahi toh keh rhe the ki tumhe ek baar use mauka toh dena chahiye tha. Main manta hun Rey ko dekh ke koi bhi insaan pehle yahi sochega jo tumne socha and jis circumstance mein tumhari mulaqat huyi vahan toh misunderstanding hona obvious tha. Lekin tumhe ek mauka toh dena chahiye. Humein bhi pehle yehi laga tha ki Rey is a brat- u know ameer baap ka bigada huya beta. Haan thoda-sa badmaash ahi lekin iska dil sone ka hai...

So: and wud u believe it yeh hamesha aata aur hum isse ladkiyon ke bare mein chedte toh he wud say ki he wants the perfect one jo use pasand kare na ki uske status ko. U know old ' school thots.. we used to laugh at it. Becoz uske bahut hi aadarshwadi vichar the.


aadarshwaadi vichaar! aur kitni hindi jhaadegi!?🤣


S: but... okay mujhe time chahiye thoda...

All three: okay.. lekin job hi faisla lo soch- samajh ke lena

Smriti goes from there thinking what she saw now and what she had seen before. If she thought about the situation leaving everything aside about the first meet she had actually never actually given a chance to Rey. After that meet she always had thought about him as a spoilt kid, plus whatever happened at the house it was just becoz of that previous meet.

Meanwhile Swayam calls Rey and rey comes side and talks to him and smriti sees and moves aside as already everything was little jumbled up..

R: haan swayam bol..

Sw: how r u. Acche se pahuch gaya tu...

R: haan yaar. Main chhota baccha thodi nah un.

Sw: okay kahan hain tu?

R: abhi main orphanage mein hun. Bacchon ke saath khel rha hun. Kbhi-2 lagta hain sabko apne saath le jaaun.. they r so sweet. Koi inhe kaise chod sakta hain...

Smriti smiles listening to it.

S: mila usse.

R: haan bhi aur nhi bhi..

S: matlab...

R:maine kal kriya ko dekha hai...

Smriti gets alerted. She thinks that rey had come there for her daughter. She gets angry that her daughter still maintained relation with her.

R: i mean kal jab main meadow gaya that oh wahan bhi aayi thi.

S: toh tune usse baat kyun nhi ki.

R: nhi maine usse baat nhi ki. Woh jis haal mein thi mera mann toh bahut tha lekin main jaanta tha ki agar main uske saamne gya toh woh kamzor pad jayegi and kuch ulta-seedha kar baithegi.

S: kya matlab

R: ( in sad voice): swayam woh puri tarah tut gayi hain. Woh sirf apni mom ke liye ji rhi hain. Woh meri baatcutter nhi rhi. Iss tarah maine use aaj tak nhi dekha. Main kitna chahta tha ki main uske paas jaun aur uske saare dukh lelun lekin main yeh bhi jaanta hun ki uske dukh ki vajah bhi main hi hun. Woh issliye dukhi hai kyunki usne mujh dukh pahuchaya. Am here helpless.

Smriti is sad feeling that she forced her daughter into it.

Sw: tu kya krna chahta hai.

R: maine zyada nhi socha hai. Lekin have decided that ki main uski smile wapas lake rhunga. Tu jaanta haina woh meri life hai ( smriti shocked to hear it). Jab tak main uski smile vaapas lane ka tareeka nhi dhundh leta main usse nhi milunga. I know it wud be difficult lekin jab maine itne din uske bina guzare hain thode se aur guzarunga. I want to make sure that i bring all the happiness in her life and she can achieve everything she wants.

S: tu krega kaise

R: main uski mom ko manaunga. I will make sure that aunty whole-heartedly use har cheez ke liye izazat dede so that use kbhi jhuth na bolna pade. I don't know main yeh sab kaise karunga lekin main uski smile vaapas laye bina yahan se nhi jaunga. I love her. I cannot see her like this. Agar aunty mujhe consent na bhi de then also i'll make sure uski life mein itni happiness aaye ki use meri kami mehsoos na ho.

Smriti is touched hearing it. She feels sorry for what she did lekin is still little skeptical about their love as she is scared that it might not turn out to be infatuation.

She decides something..

Precap:

1. Smriti's Decision

2. Smriti & Rey meet

3. Kriyansh almost meet

Guys bear with me kriyansh jaldi se reunite ho jaayenge i promise. Sorry for making u wait long. Will update within this week promise...


all in all a nice and sweet chapter..no adventure as such but rey ki tareef sunke acha laga and finally smriti ko akal aa gai! reyam conversation was as cute as always! sorry aur bada comment nai kar sakti...dimaag hi nai chal raha..😛


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awesome update waiting for d next one...😊
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let me start
luved the orphanage part very much

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