Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 64

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

loved it fiza ...

specialy the CUPID ...u must have done thesis on love n relationship 😛
beautifuly explained the problems between them

pure ff mai bas usmai n nupur pe hi pyar araha hai 😆

felt bad for mayank but still he deserve it ...

nupur to pehlesehi sadu thi but it she had not buried her love yet inside her shell .


woh kiya hai na meri girlfriend ko heart shape k kuch bhi dayna pasnad nhi hai'.she finds it cheap

this line was funny n somewhere resemble me .
i wonder tere sare herois kisi na kisi tarha mujhe kyun resemble karti hai .😲

cont soon

thnks alot dear

may aur relationship per thesis...lolz... bus phir log hasy gay...
thnku so much n my glad tht u can now understand things

lol...
tumhara ghusaa km hi hoa hai acha na ho ..tu agay k kuch updates achy se samhj pao gi

problm meri nupurs mein nhi problm yeah k tu mjh se kuch zayda hi milti hai...aur is ff ki nupur ki bht saray aspect kahina na kahin mujh se milty hain...

i hate heartshape wali chesy just cant stand them... islyn...
per haan mjh mein nupur jitna patience nhi hai...mein frst time per hi acha khasa suna ker sab bol tayti..itna nhi rekhti mein ksis ka bhi

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice part :)

thnks alot

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Nice update.

thnkuuu

Originally posted by: Irum.

For NUPUR I would say:

Runj se khugar hua insaan to mit jaata hai runj
Mushkilein mujh par padi itni ke aasaan ho gayi

For Mayank:

Koi dil ho jo suljhaye mere dil ki uljhan

Main ne khud khoye hain rishte

Khud hi todhe hain bandhan

Anna ki chandni se jal gaya mera aangan

Anna k haath khilona banna mera jeevan

Main bhi bharpoor tha rishtoon se Mohabbat se

Kabhi mujhe ko chaha tha kisi ne badi chahat se

Ab akela hoon jese neela gagan

thanks alot dear
beautifully described both..lovely

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

beautiful part,...

somewhere like her bossy look, and change of bossy to beautiful, as when she was at children home

loved this aditya,.. he is such a flirt and cute too,...

BABY,... i mean seriously baby,... this make me laugh in this sad update,...

gud to see he was getting all the past memories with her,...

and loved the way you describe mayank's situations his feelings throughout nupur's message

there past valentine night was beautiful

totally agree with the cupid,,,...

loved your note,...

you are best in expressing things,... loved your writing,...

hope to see some good in next part...

thanks alot dear...
lol... it has been extrem sad parts so koi tu light moments rekhy plus i dont want to show tht she has any regeret abt anything in her life... she has taken it as camed...

thanku soo much for liking my writing thanks alot...

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

beautiful update fiza!
<3 it!

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

wonderful update

thku

hope mayank can understand now what actually he did to nupur. plz reunite mayur

fiza heart touching update tha and i loved it

big big hug for u for this beautiful update 🤗🤗🤗

awesome updt fiza
loved the way you made mayank realize his mistake through vikram ,riya & rahul ..but hating nupur's family more..waiting for the next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm

amazing part

thnk god.. mayank is realizing now!