Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 58

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww my poor nupur...
ufff
yeh mayur na...
kuch nhi bol sakti main...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

awww my poor nupur...

ufff
yeh mayur na...
kuch nhi bol sakti main...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u



sorry dear... i just can say tht
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Posted: 13 years ago


thnks

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

last two updates was really,.. really,...what to say yaar,..

feeling really bad for nupur,...
and how could he didn't even respond to her mails in these six months,...
waiting for the next update,...
continue soon,...




i am sorry to make u feel like that..
sigh i know tht.. yet it happen


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raginisharma





sorry nah... ab tu tum progloue se relate ker sakti ho k nhi...
thnks fro ur strting line.. my god asa hoi na jay...
itna tu jaldi update ker rahi hoon mein...
will cont ASAP

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nyx-

Aakhir aap ne mohabbat ko jhuka hi diya...sigh! I guess you followed your original plan of portraying Nupur's side yet again giving us all a blind eye towards Mayank. In this part..you showed Mayank's concern during her flight..his worries, his fears abt her safe departure..what didn't make sense to me that just at that minute when the message came thru why wouldn't he even look at it?? Whats the harm there? He could have not reply or respond but why not read it? Was he not thinking abt her? worried sick ..trying to burn everything around him? So he managed to control that strong urge of love just by snap of his finger in miliseconds?? Is it ever possible?? If he was THAT MUCH angry at her, he wouldn't even give a damn abt her flight or the late night see offs...and if his anger did overcome his love for her then he could at least read that message! Confusing this part was...care to justify?


manti ho khani hai per is k yeah matlab hi k har baar muhabbat jity gi.. hum kai baar muhabat ko haratay hai jhukatay hai... he did read her text didnt he.. and sumwhere he knew wht tht email has... her address and wasy to contact her... and tht he doesnt wants to do... whn ur belives of all times are much more than wht is cuming in ur life..its isnt that easy to accept it... wht he belives he belives and he want that feeling to be zerox of wht he belives...
care cant get off ur head just withing millisec as u said... she reached and he knew tht... yet he will not take the frst step again he was determine... he dont find any of his mistake in anything...


Now Nupur's wait and his failure (for whatever reason) to respond. For a moment and for argument sake let me assume that Mayank's ego came in between and he let 6 months pass by just like that! Lets take Nupur's view then! As throughout the story it seemed like she was the one who gave up or compromised or made efforts out of her comfort zone to get into this relationship and SHE was the one who was acting all mature to make this work with Mayank. Wasn't she the one who let her guards off and let him thru? Wasn't she the one who fought against all the odds within her to trust him and love him from the core of her heart? She gave it all...didn't she? Trusted him..had faith in him that he will love her forever and so seriously believed that he will never betray her. So 6 MONTHS passes by and not once she thinks if Mayank is still alive? How come it never even crossed her mind just once that he might be going thru more pain and suffering than her as she very much knew how much he loved her (him being expressive and all)! Why couldn't she pick up that phone and try to talk to him or perhaps ask a friend abt him! Seriously if Nupur returns to see Mayank in hospital or in his death bed if not dead already can she ever forgive herself?


i think correction needed..its isnt his failure it is his choice not to respond... to let it go.. oh really i m sorry but pls be reasaonable ... koi itna bhi mahana nhi hai..na hi khuda hai na hi fairshta k ek insaan sab kuch keray jay keray jay keray jay ...aur samny wala har baar sorry bhi na bolay aur phir wohi baat dohray... phir bhi woh us k pass jay... n than ap us k selfish kaho..my god... i think u are sumwhere in belives of mayank... is ko realtionship nhi kahty... relatiohsip sirf pyar se nhi chalta... us mein effort dana parta hai... zindagi hai .. us k mein kai haszar chessay soch samhj ker face kerni hoti hai..
asa mayank ny kyun nhi socha ..su ko pata tha k woh aniexty ki patient hai.. margai hai tu.. us ko farak parta hai... khabi us ko kisis chees se farak parta hai ... why she is always questions... why he isnt...

I dunno Fiza ji...you kept on commenting on readers' feedback that you were showing reality. You know what reality of love is now-a-days! A small argument at the popcorn counter announcing a break-up, hit on her best friend in the cinema theater to make her jealous and then either kiss n make up or find yourself someone else the very next day. Mohabbat aisi nahi hoti..k waqti taur pe jata liya aur phir I am fed up with you kehke ghayeb hogaye. There are names for these kinda "drive-thru" relationships..crush, infatuation, few nights stand, "only physcial" etc etc. If you can't trust the person, his love, the moments he spent with you, the promises he made...and that faith you have that he will love you forever..than Nupur is a bigger fool here who has actually betrayed herself. So what now? If all that in past was a big lie and not real, She will live her life knowing that she was used rather than being loved? OR if she truly believes that he actually loved her then please teach her that love does not end or die in a lifetime, 6 months is nothing! Teach her to be a little less selfish for a change and think abt him. That's when she will understand Mayank more...and perhaps she can truly be in love. Mohabbat...yun hi sahi..





i think here mayank need to be a little less selfish.. its absoulety unfair to call nupur selfish.. abssoulty unfair... she has always thought abt him... him n only him.. when he will strt giving a thought to her... she said it send her details if u want to contact u can... she can begg her love ...

above all i belive u might not...relationship does not only stand on love... jab zindagi ki choti choti haqeeqatein samny ati hai nah tu pyar asay hi kahin bhag jata hai... jab ap apny pyar mein woh koi talsh kerny lagtay hoo jo image apny kahin khud mein bana rekha tha..

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Posted: 13 years ago
plz plz fiza sab thik kar do. nupur kab tak tolerate karega mayank ki dhoke ko. plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

API!!!!!!!!!!!
Awww...mere liye..😳 u r the BEST API...
Thank u sooo much API...🤗
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

Awesome update...
loved ur writing...👏
it was Beautifully written once again...⭐️
n d best part was u again described all the feelings sooo Beatifully i loved it...
Sigh!!!!!!! so dey actually broke up...Sigh!
though dey both can't live without eachother still dey r living without each other...
dat really hurts...Sigh!
Gosh!!!!! iss Mayank ka kya karu...
yes! possessive hona chahiye bt ek hadd tak naki ap apne possessiveness ki wajah se apne relationship ki band bajwa dou...Sigh!
usse ab tak nhi pata ke uski problem kya hain n usne asa kya kiya...arey usne itni bar koshish ki n kaha bhi ke agar Mayank ne ek bar bulaya toh woh wapas ajayegi n still usne usko nhi bulaya...n upar se kahe phirta hain ke she broke up!!!!!!! this is the limit!!!!
unn dono ne kya haal bana liya hain apna...Sigh!!!!
n d last part...SIGH!!!!!!!
god!!!! it make me teary...Sigh!
Nupur ab bhi usse kitna pyar karti hain n kahin na kahin uska wait bhi...DEEP SIGH!!!!!
it was sooo heart wrenching... :'(
i jst hope ke iss bar Mayank apni galti plzzz samjh le...Sigh!
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: i agree with what u said in -Nyx- reply...it was Mayank who became selfish as he wants his lover to be exactly like how he want n even forgot that the same thing goes to Him too...😳

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mayank and nupur both are in pain. mayank is the biggest igoistic person.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-


API!!!!!!!!!!!
apko pata hain apse mera Dil ka nata hain...By God!!!!!!
main pichle 1ghante se try kar rahi thi ke mera net kam kar jaye as yeh connect hi nhi ho raha tha...n upar se aj ap update karne wali thi...
n after my Kari-tapassa... maine abhi net connect kiya n dekha ke abhi apka PM bhi aya...😳
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

res!!!!!!!!😳

Awww...i jst saw d 1st line...mere liye...😳
Thank u sooo much API...🤗



aww...
chalo sahi time per connect hogaya nah kafi hai...
enjoy..halky kafi bekar update hai...
lov ya

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Posted: 13 years ago
Very heart wrenching update.Both r suffering 2 much.:( i hope this party will bring them closer.Bt i want mayank 2 understand nupur..Poor nupur.

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