Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: -Anila-
API...
yeh kya kiya apne...🥺
dis time Mayank crossed all his limits...
God!!!!!!!!!!! 6MONTHS!!!!!!!!! 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LONG!!!!!!! MONTHS!!!!!!!!!
He didn't even bother to check her mails or msgs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! call karna toh durr ki baat!!!!
how cud he!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dis time i hv to say dat he doesn't Deserve Nupur!!!!!!!!!!
hw can He!! wen he isn't bother to know abt her hereabouts n not even check wht she wrote to Him...Sigh!!!!

i know its terrible its extremly terrible.. yet it had happen.. i am soory abt that ..yet it was meant to happen..
i felt Terrible for Nupur...
so dis time woh apne Dil ke darwazey iss kadar band kar degi ke ab woh chahe bhi toh nhi khol paye...Sigh!!!!!!

ek insaan ny buhat muskil se apni guards down kiaya tha.. per us k yaqeen k nobody wil stnd by her jeeta tu ab k woh aur kya keray ga
i nvr ever!!! thought ke iss ff mein even last update ke baad bhi iss update mein asa kuch parhne ko milega!!
i mean i though ke he will be upset den may b he will come to Her...
bt yeha toh he didn't even bother to open her E-Mails...

shayd asa islyn k mein ny khabi nupur mayank k break nhi dekhya.. kya kero mjhy sad ending nhi pasand..kam se kam kahani mein tu yeah haq meray pass hai tu kyun dkehoo.. but at time reality dekhna zaroori hai

asi kaunsi kam mein busy hain ya asa kaunsa zidd ya Ego hain usse jo usne ek bar bhi Nupur se baat karne ki koshish tak nhi ki...Sigh!
m horribly Upset wid dis Man...
n i really wonder ke kya sach mein apne jiss insaan ko madde nazar rakhte huye iss character ko banaya hain kya usne bhi asa hi kiya hain uss ladki ke sath!!! YA KHUDA!!! SIGH!!!!!!!!

zidd bhi hai ego bhi hai..thori bekhabri bhi hai ..
hmm mein ny ek insaan ko zehan mein rekhan hai..han magar mein ny kafi sary larko ko zehna mein rekh ker yeah stroy likhi thi... kyun k akasr mein ny dekha hai... asa hota hai...larki nibhti jati hai...larka sirf enjoy kerta hai... us ko ehassa hi nhi hota k woh kya kya kerjata hai...
mayank ny kya kiya kyun kya..yeah sab mein next few updates mein dekho gi for sure

dis time i want Nupur to Punish him hard!!!
waiting eagerly for Her comeback n to Face dat Man...
Beautifully written API...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

she donot need to punish her.. wht do u think .how mayank must be now

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: -Anila-

hay hay!!! Leap!!!!!!😲 dat means MN separation kya!!!!! nhi!!!!!🥺
ohhh-hooo bare busy sizy hain meri API...
kya baat hain...itne ghar ke kam...😉
kahin Aunty hamare liye jiju toh lane ka nhi soch rahe hain jo itne sare mehman ghar par aye huye hain...😳😆
hayeee...itna likh chuki hain ap den plzzz update kardo yaar...
m dying to read abt it...
Still Thank u API...
love u lodsss🤗🤗🤗

aray meray hi mamu hai yaar...lol..
aur jiju k liyan kuch nhi bana rahi ...aram se raho..for a change woh meray liyan kuch banay tu manoo😉..
Anty k plans maat pocho... kam ker jatay na unk plan tu bus hogaya tha kaam...

lay yeah tu kuch nhi hai pata hai Parichey kinta likha hai... 15 chapters tak...but us mein aj mein MN add ker rahi thi... aur present bhi barhany ki try ker rahi hoon

MY k tu end bhi soch liya mein ny... bus beech k kcuh missing hai... i want k ramdaz se pehly tak hojay... as phir time milna muskil hai aur mein fiction likhna bhi avoid kerti hoo.. so

its okay dear..
lov ya too

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go
I read Maria's comment and Lmao , mine are totally opposite !!!
Fiza , you are making us think and thats the sign of amazing writer .

Coming to update .. i felt so bad for Nupur , poor gurl .

I actualy didnt think there is Nupur's fault at any point . Becoz from the very start she announced her priorities and restrictions , it was Mayank who promised to stand by her at every moment , But he cant eventolerate her wishes , then forget about anything.

A relationship goes smooth when both hands are together , if one gives-up holding the other one holds it tight but it should not be only one person trying to put efforts , even that someone is human .

thanku so much dear... its al becuase of u all that i can write sumthing diffrent and just not usual too...

i know tht is actually the case... Nupur's fault is there but a very slight one.. not that can cause extrem measures... Ruchi if u look around urself than u will find people n boys specially , before n after relation at extrem contrast ...
mjhy Hum tum k song larki kyun islyan bht pasand hai..the line " sab se alag ho yeah kah ker pass tumhary aay..aur kuch din mein kuch bhi alag sa us k na bhay..."
n tht is exactly the thing mostly happening aorund us.. we like to love an image in our mind beliving we will change the other.. n if that person is not changing.. she'he doent loves u at all.. and tht is excatly wht i realy wana all to see here...

that sumone is too human.. n tht sumone has also its identity...
thnks for liking n commenting and agreeing with my POv...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Dont know wat to say at all...
I think nupur changed her completely after mayank came to her life...The girl who used to be self centered nd self conscious left all her self respects and kept msging him nd mailing him even after his unreasonable accusations...
She always ws the first one who went to pacify him, always took the first step to maintain a healthy relationship but mayank thought this is the way it meant to be...relationship is two way process...we need to give efforts to get the same response from our partner but mayank never did that...
And this time i dnt want nupur to left her self esteem nd dignity just for the sake of love...If people cant understand her then they also dnt deserve her...
And dii u really outdid urself in this part...The way u described nupur's feelings wr bang on...each word reached to my heart nd made me cry...U wr really brilliant here..
Loved it...Cont soon..

i am sorry to make u cry dear really sorry...
i know Nupur did whtevr she can..still she did have slight fault yet she is too a human so ...
i absolutely agree with u and this is sumthing that mayank needs to realize...
n im so glad u all can think the way i want u too

thanku soo much dear... ur words for the writing ..thanks a ton... u honured me..
love ya
will cont ASAP

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
Its easy to walk alone in life but its so difficult to walk alone after u have accompanied by someone miles and miles...I can feel its too difficult for nupur to spend those 6 months in her loneliness...

I think there is a lack of efforts and understanding more on Mayank's side than Nupur...yet both r responsible...!

Lets c how Mayank's feelings come out to be...waiting for his POVs.
continue soon di.Fantastic update..beautifully written.

that is so true , so so true n its difficult to feel wht it actually mean to be alone than find a hand and than again to be alone... her 6 months were more waiting zone for her rather than just being alone.. the hopes never dye no matter wht u doo

i agree with u.. both r yet Mayank has more part in it...if just once he can let himself go..
thanks alot dear..thnku so much
will cont soon

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: clustersofstar
nupur ka har relation reat ki tarah hai wo jitna uss reat ko muthi mein band karne ki koshish karti hai wo unti hi phasal jati hai its time to let go usse ab muthi khul deni chaiye

bulkil sach kaha ..
islyan is baar us ny muthi khol di aur rait ko apny samny hath se phasalta hua dekha hai...
so ab us k hath kuch bhi nhi... so ab kuch khony k daar bhi nhi...sab kuch pehly jasa hai kheli hath kahli zindagi...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: raginisharma
fizzzaaa...

RaGINIII...marna maat dekhoo

mjhy koi bachooo

Originally posted by: kirti123
beautifully written as usual
felling bad for both
continue soon
😊

thanks alot dear
i m sorry abt it
will cont ASAP

Originally posted by: shafyyy
liked the update

thku

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
really sad for Nupur! 😒

sorry

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

last two updates was really,.. really,...what to say yaar,..

feeling really bad for nupur,...

and how could he didn't even respond to her mails in these six months,...

waiting for the next update,...

continue soon,...

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

i know this story going to be one of greatest all time ...phir bhi...😡 itna kun tadpaya meri nupsi ko...

now jald jald sab thik karo...

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-Nyx-

@-Nyx-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#570

Aakhir aap ne mohabbat ko jhuka hi diya...sigh! I guess you followed your original plan of portraying Nupur's side yet again giving us all a blind eye towards Mayank. In this part..you showed Mayank's concern during her flight..his worries, his fears abt her safe departure..what didn't make sense to me that just at that minute when the message came thru why wouldn't he even look at it?? Whats the harm there? He could have not reply or respond but why not read it? Was he not thinking abt her? worried sick ..trying to burn everything around him? So he managed to control that strong urge of love just by snap of his finger in miliseconds?? Is it ever possible?? If he was THAT MUCH angry at her, he wouldn't even give a damn abt her flight or the late night see offs...and if his anger did overcome his love for her then he could at least read that message! Confusing this part was...care to justify?

Now Nupur's wait and his failure (for whatever reason) to respond. For a moment and for argument sake let me assume that Mayank's ego came in between and he let 6 months pass by just like that! Lets take Nupur's view then! As throughout the story it seemed like she was the one who gave up or compromised or made efforts out of her comfort zone to get into this relationship and SHE was the one who was acting all mature to make this work with Mayank. Wasn't she the one who let her guards off and let him thru? Wasn't she the one who fought against all the odds within her to trust him and love him from the core of her heart? She gave it all...didn't she? Trusted him..had faith in him that he will love her forever and so seriously believed that he will never betray her. So 6 MONTHS passes by and not once she thinks if Mayank is still alive? How come it never even crossed her mind just once that he might be going thru more pain and suffering than her as she very much knew how much he loved her (him being expressive and all)! Why couldn't she pick up that phone and try to talk to him or perhaps ask a friend abt him! Seriously if Nupur returns to see Mayank in hospital or in his death bed if not dead already can she ever forgive herself?

I dunno Fiza ji...you kept on commenting on readers' feedback that you were showing reality. You know what reality of love is now-a-days! A small argument at the popcorn counter announcing a break-up, hit on her best friend in the cinema theater to make her jealous and then either kiss n make up or find yourself someone else the very next day. Mohabbat aisi nahi hoti..k waqti taur pe jata liya aur phir I am fed up with you kehke ghayeb hogaye. There are names for these kinda "drive-thru" relationships..crush, infatuation, few nights stand, "only physcial" etc etc. If you can't trust the person, his love, the moments he spent with you, the promises he made...and that faith you have that he will love you forever..than Nupur is a bigger fool here who has actually betrayed herself. So what now? If all that in past was a big lie and not real, She will live her life knowing that she was used rather than being loved? OR if she truly believes that he actually loved her then please teach her that love does not end or die in a lifetime, 6 months is nothing! Teach her to be a little less selfish for a change and think abt him. That's when she will understand Mayank more...and perhaps she can truly be in love. Mohabbat...yun hi sahi..

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