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@OmaRamdass

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Brilliant - felt every emotion

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awesome.. Loved it.. Thank you for pm

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Mythreaye

@Mythreaye

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Well written:-) loved the way you've written and loved the idea of Khushi writing a diary.. I felt like it was truly written by Khushi and loved this line ''hating u is choking on raw poison'' good going:-) keep writing more:-)

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GoGreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

need to see arnav POV...

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Loved it... hope we get to see a glimpse of your diary on the show! 😊

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

res!!!

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''Hating you is like choking on raw poison''

i appreciate u for using this powerful sentence👏 it was so apt!! such a powerful dialogues!! lovd it. u have captured khushi's true feelings very well!!! gud job!!!😊 thnxx for d pm!!!

Navya

Edited by shobrakapooor - 13 years ago

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

The title! Wow.
So apt. Its like everything that is there inn the letter is summed up in those four words!
Choking on raw poison. WOW.

I loved the way you have described her situation!
How it pains her that he didn't even think of asking for her side of the story even once?
How difficult could it have been to trust her?

And the end too...I can't love, but I can't hate either.
I want to forgive, but I can't.
Beautifully written! <3

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556195

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

oh that was just brilliant piece of writing! such a perfect one dear! 🤗 you wrote it beautifully and really felt bad for that girl.. his hero is only her villain isnt it?😆 awesome🤗 thanks a ton for the pm for such a beautiful OS! would love to read more from you🤗