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Part 36(A)
Ramaa stepped forward as amma introduced her to the Raizadas'.
Amma: Aur ee hai Sukumar ki patni aur humri bahu,Ramaa..
Ramaa(touching nani's feet): Parnaam naniji.
Nani: Saubhaagyavati bhava!Khoob khush rahiye!
She hugged Ramaa.
Nani: Aapse milkar humein bahut khushi hui!(hands her an envelope) Ee lijiye..
Ramaa: Ee kaa naniji?
Nani: Aapka nek!Aap halwa bahutai swaadisht banaaye rahi! Humre ghar maa bitiya k haath ki rasoi khaakar oo ko nek deve ka rivaaj hai,lijiye..
Ramaa turned to look at Sukumar,who nodded.
Ramaa(accepting the envelope): Bahut,bahut dhanyavaad!
Nani: Sach bataaye bitiya,aap ko dekhkar aur aapka halwa chakhkar humein humri bitiya Ratna ki yaad aa gayi..
Ramaa: Halwa toh itna kam bheje rahe Khusi k saath.. maaf kariyega,aaplogan k liye kam pada hoga..
Nani: Kauno baat naahi! Hum sab ek-ek chammach chakhe rahe. Aur Anjali bitiya ne tau humre bitwa aur bahuriya ki khaatir alag se dui chammach halwa bachaaye k fridge maa rakh diya hai! Oo log bides gaye hain aur kuch dino maa lautenge..
Ramaa: Ooko purana halwa kaahe khilaiyyega?Hum Khusi ko halwa banaane ki vidhi samjhaaye diye hain,oo garam-garam taaja halwa banaaye degi oo ki aur aap sab ki khaatir!Kaahe Khusi?
Khushi: Ji bhabhi,zaroor!
Nani: Oo tau banaaye denge par oo k haath maa aapk haath jaisan swaad naahi milega naa,ae hi liye!
Arnav: Nani aaplog baatein baithkar bhi kar sakte hain! Aap nahi baith rahi hain,isiliye sablog tabse khade huye hain!
Nani: Maaf kar dijiye,humra dhyaan naahi raha! Aaplog sab baithiye! Garimaji,aap sab ki pehchaan baithne k baad bhi karvaaye sakti hai naa?
Amma(smiles): Ji!
Ramaa: Aaplog baithiye,hum rasoi maa Khusi aur Payalia ki madad kar dete hain!
Anjali: Bilkul nahi! Aap humari mehmaan hain,hum aapse kaam kaise karva sakte hain?Aap baithiye naa,humein aapse dher saari baatein karni hai!
Paayal: Ha bhabhi,aap baithiye aur rasoi ki zara bhi chinta mat kariye! Khushi aur hum sab sambhaal lenge! Chal khushi!
Khushi: Ha bhabhi aap baithiye aur... chinta mat kariye! Sab ho jaayega!
She shows her the thumbs up sign.
Ramaa: Theek hai.
Anjali: Pani lijiye..
She extends a glass of water towards Ramaa.
Ramaa(thinks): Pata naahi nandoiji aur Khusi ka pilan kaam karega ki naahi? Munna k papa tau abhi tak naraaj hain.. Ka pata maanenge bhi ki naahi?
Kahin aur gusiya na jaaye!
Anjali: Pani lijiye naa..
Ramaa: Nahi,sukriya!
She chats with Anjali,while her mind is busy thinking of Khushi and Arnav's plan.
**********
Paayal: Khushi, zara malai kofta ko chakhkar dekho,humein isme namak kam lag raha hai..
Khushi: Ek minute jiji..Kheer me ubaal aa jaye,phir hum chakh lete hain.
Paayal: Theek hai aur a..
She stops when she sees Arnav coming to the kitchen.
Paayal: a.. hum.. di se milkar aate hain.
Arnav: No Paayal(smiles) thats okay! Tum yaheen raho. (to Khushi) Main bhaisaab ko aur sadusaab ko ghar dikhane lekar jaa raha hoon. Tum.. coffee banaakar upar le aaogi?
Khushi(getting the hint): Ji..abhi laaye!
Arnav: Thanks!
He leaves after that.
Paayal: Khushi,Arnavji ko aise dekhkar humein bahut khushi hui! Kitni jaldi woh sab k saath ghul-mil gaye hain naa?
Khushi: Ha jiji,hum bhi bahut khush hain!Achchha jiji,tum kheer ko sambhaal lo,hum Arnavji k liye coffee bana dete hain.
Paayal: Theek hai.Waise kheer banaane ki zaroorat nahi thi..Itni saari mithaiyaan toh hai hi..
Khushi: Ha,par naniji ne kaha toh hum mana kaise karte?
Paayal: So toh hai..
**********
Khushi(entering her bedroom): Arnavji,aapki coffee..
Arnav: Thanks!
Khushi: Aapko di ne neeche bulaya hai.Aur.. jijaji,aap neeche jaakar Seema ko thodi der sambhaal lete toh Sumi jiji Paayal jiji ki rasoi me thodi madad kar deti..
Chetan: Ha,ha.. kaahe nahi? Hum Sumi se kahe det hain,oo Paayal ki madad kar degi.
Khushi: Ji.. Shukriya! Arnavji,jaldi jaiyye,di.. rah dekh rahi hongi.
Arnav: Sure! Bhaisaab,excuse me.Main thodi der me aaya.
Sukumar: Ji..
Arnav and Khushi share a look after which Arnav leaves with Chetan.
Khushi waits till they're out of sight.
Khushi: Achchha hua bhaiyya ki humein ekaant me aapse baat karne ka mauka mil gaya!
She closes the door and then sits next to Sukumar on the bed.
Sukumar: Kaa baat hai Khusi?Tune darvajja kaahe band kiya?
Khushi: Bhaiyya,hum.. aapse kuch kehna chahte hain.. Hum yeh baat amma,babuji,buaji.. yahaan tak ki jiji se bhi nahi keh sakte..
Sukumar(worried): Aisi kaa baat hai? Bol..
Khushi(with a tormented expression): Hum.. hum.. Arnavji..
Sukumar: Kaa hua?Jijaji ne kuchho kaha kaa tujhse? Khulkar bata ,kaa baat hai?
Khushi(holds his hand): Hum... Arnavji k saath.. khush nahi hain!
Sukumar(shocked): Kaa?
Khushi(melodramatically): Ji bhaiyya.. Woh humara zara bhi khayaal nahi rakhte! Woh bilkul waise nahi hain jaise ki humne socha tha ki woh hain! Hum.. unse.. bahut naakhush hain!
Sukumar: Humka toh yakeen hi naahi ho raha hai?
Khushi(thinks): Achchha?Iska matlab tujhe thodi aur mehnat karni hogi,Khushi...
Sukumar: Tum dunno ko dekhkar tau aisa laagat hai jaisan tum ek duje k saath bahut sukhi hau! Aur jijaji toh tohra kitna dhyan rakhat hain,tohse kitna parem karat hain! Phir tu kaahe aisan kahe rahi hai?
Khushi: Sabko aisa hi lagta hai,bhaiyya! Oopar se dekhenge toh hum bahut sukhi nazar aayenge aapko.. par sirf hum jaante hain ki.. asliyat kya hai!
She closes her eyes & apologizes to God.
Khushi(thinks): Hey Devi Maiyya! Humein kshama kar dena! Hum apne pati k baare me ulta-pulta,bahut galat keh rahe hain.. Par kya karen? Bhabhi aur bhaiyya k liye humein yeh karna padega..
Sukumar: Kahin oo.. tujhpar.. kauno atyachar tau naahi karte hain naa? Maarna-peetna ya..
Khushi(shocked): Nahi,nahi! Arnavji waise nahi hain!
Sukumar: Toh phir tu unse naakhus kaahe hain?
Khushi: Hum.. unke vyavahaar se naakhush hain. Humari toh padi hi nahi hain unhe,bas kaam,kaam aur sirf kaam! Subha uthte hain,phir jogging par jaate hain,aakar nahaate hain,nashta karte hain aur daftar chale jaate hain!Phir shaam ko der se daftar se laut-te hain,TV dekhte huye coffee peete hain aur phir apna laptop lekar kaam karne baith jaate hain! Aur khana khaane k baad so jaate hain! humaare liye waqt hi nahi hain unke paas!
She sighs.
Khushi(thinks): Isse bada jhooth aur koi nahi ho sakta!
She resumes her sad story.
Khushi: Shaadi k pehle mahine me woh humara kitna dhyan rakhte the! Humein ghumaane le jaate the,Salmanji ki picture dikhane le jaate the, shopping karvaate the,humare saath poolside par taare ginte the.. humein bahut prem karte the! Par ab! Ab woh aisa kuch nahi karte! Jiji aur jijaji ko dekhiye! Unki shaadi ko ek saal se zyada ho gaya hai,par phir bhi,Aakash jijaji hamesha jiji ka khayaal rakhte hain. Office se jaldi aa jate hain aur jiji k saath khoob sara waqt bitaate hain!
She stops to take a deep breath.
Khushi: Hum yeh nahi chahte bhaiyya,ki Arnavji humein rozana shopping par ya picture dikhane le jaaye.Hum par khoob saare paise kharch karen ya humein keemti tohfe den.. Hum toh bas yeh chahte hain ki woh humare saath waqt bitaaye. Hum unki patni hain aur yeh toh humara haq hai! Kya yeh humein nahi milna chahiye?
Sukumar: Jaroor mile ki chaahi! Aur ee haq toh ko hum dilaayenge! Hum jijaji se baat karenge! Tu tanik bhi chinta mat kar bahin,tohra bhai hai naa! Hum tohri musqil hal kar denge!
Khushi: Bahut,bahut shukriya bhaiyya!
Sukumar: Ee k alaava tohko jijaji se kauno siqaayat hai?
Khushi: Nahi,bas yeh hi shiqaayat hai humari..
Sukumar heaves a sigh of relief.
Sukumar: devi Maiyya ki krupa hai! Pagaliya! (smacks her head) Itni si baatwa ki khaatir jijaji se naakhus thi!
Khushi: Yeh itni si baat nahi hai,bhaiyya! Aap mardon k liye,shaayad,hogi.Par hum auraton k liye yeh bahut badi baat hain! Pati ka pyaar aur pati ka waqt,yeh har aurat apne pati se chahti hai!
Sukumar nods.
Khushi: Agar Arnavji aapki baat na maane toh..?
Sukumar: Kaisan naahi maanenge?Humka poora viswas hai ki oo humri baatwa jaroor samjhenge!
Khushi: Arnavji bahut ziddi hai,bhaiyya! Agar unhone aapki baat na maani toh kya hoga?
Sukumar: Aisan kuchho naahi hoga! Tu vyarth hi chinta kar rahi hai,Khusi,ee sab mat soch!
Khushi: Theek hai.Lekin,maan lijiye,aisa hua toh aap unko apna udaaharan dena,bhaiyya.
Sukumar(confused):Humra udaaharan?
Khushi: Ji! Arnavji practical kism k insaan hain. Unhe sirf kuch kehne se baat nahi banegi.Agar aap unko apna udaaharan denge,ki aap bhabhi ko kitna khush rakhte hain! Shaadi k itne saalon baad bhi aap bhabhi se utna hi prem karte hain! Bhabhi ko aapse koi shiqaayat nahi hain,toh Arnavji baat ko zaroor samjhenge!
Realization hits Sukumar.
Sukumar(thinks): Hum apna udaaharan kaisan de sakat hai? Ramaa ko bhi tau humse ee hai siqaayat rahti hain ki hum oo ko samay naahi dete hain..
He looks at Khushi.
Sukumar(thinks): Jaisan Khusi ee batwaa ko laike jijaji se naakhus hai,waisan Ramaa bhi.. humse naakhus hogi..
Khushi: Kya hua bhaiyya? Kya soch rahe hain aap?
Sukumar: Naahi..kuchho naahi!
Khushi: Aap yaheen baithiye,hum Arnavji ko bhejte hain!
Sukumar nods & Khushi leaves.
******
She meets Arnav outside the room.
Khushi: Humara kaam ho gaya,ab aapki baari hai!
Arnav nods & goes inside the room.
Khushi(thinks): Ek baar bhaiyya aur bhabhi ka maamla sulajh jaaye,phir hum apne aur inke maamle par dhyan de payenge,Devi Maiyya..Woh maamla bhi hum aaj hi suljha kar rahenge,aapki kasam!
She goes downstairs.

Kindly ignore typos & mistakes. Translation in the post below. Part 36(B) in the post below that.
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Translation for Part 36(A)
Ramaa stepped forward as amma introduced her to the Raizadas'.
Amma: And this is Sukumar's wife & my daughter-in-law,Ramaa..
Ramaa(touching nani's feet): Parnaam naniji.
Nani: Saubhaagyavati bhava! May u b happy always!
She hugged Ramaa.
Nani: I'm really pleased to meet u!(hands her an envelope) This is for u..
Ramaa: What is this naniji?
Nani: Ur nek!U made delicious halwa! In r household,there's a tradition of giving nek to r bitiya after tasting the food made by her..
Ramaa turned to look at Sukumar,who nodded.
Ramaa(accepting the envelope): Thank u so much!
Nani: To tell u the truth,bitiya,upon tasting the halwa & now after seeing u,I'm reminded of my daughter,Ratna..
Ramaa: I'd sent very little halwa with Khusi. Forgive me,it must have been less for u all to even taste properly..
Nani: Doesnt matter! We all had a spoon each! And Anjali bitiya has kept 2 spoonfuls of it in the fridge for my bitwa & bahuriya! They're in Australia right now and will return in a few days' time..
Ramaa: Y will u give them stale halwa?I've taught Khusi how to make the halwa,exactly the way I made it! She'll make hot and fresh halwa for them as well as for u all! Wont u, Khusi?
Khushi: Yes,of course I will, bhabhi!
Nani: She'll make it,but that wont hav the skill of ur hands so it wont taste the same!
Arnav: Nani u'll can surely sit down and chat! Since u r not sitting,everybody has been standing since so long!
Nani: I'm so sorry! Please sit.. Garimaji,we can hav the introductions while sitting down!
Amma(smiles): Sure!
Ramaa: U'll sit,meanwhile I'll help Khusi & Payalia in the kitchen!
Anjali: Not at all! U r our guest,how can we let u work!?U please sit, I want to hav a long chat with u!
Paayal: Yes bhabhi,u sit and chat with di. And dont worry about the kitchen,I & Khushi will take care of it! Lets go,Khushi!
Khushi: Yes bhabhi,u hav a seat and.. dont worry,everything will b done!
She shows her the thumbs up sign.
Ramaa: Alright.
Anjali: Here,hav a glass of water.
She extends a glass of water towards her.
Ramaa(thinks): What if nandoiji n Khusi's pilan doesnt work? Munna k papa is still angry.. What if they r unable to convince him? He'll get all the more angry!
Anjali: Hav some water..
Ramaa: No,thanks!
She chats with Anjali,while her mind is busy thinking of Khushi and Arnav's plan.
**********
Paayal: Khushi, taste the malai kofta.. I think it has less salt..
Khushi: 1 minute jiji. Once the kheer is done,I'll taste it.
Paayal: Ok & a..
She stops when she sees Arnav coming to the kitchen.
Paayal: a..I'll.. go & meet di.
Arnav: No Paayal(smiles) thats okay! U stay here itself. (to Khushi) I'm taking bhaisaab & sadusaab to show r house.Will u.. bring my coffee upstairs?
Khushi(getting the hint): Sure!
Arnav: Thanks!
He leaves after that.
Paayal: Khushi,I'm so glad to see Arnavji like this! So good to see him mingling with all the guests!
Khushi: Yes jiji,even I'm glad!Ok,now jiji,u take care of the kheer,while I'll make Arnavji's coffee.
Paayal: Ok. Actually,there was no need for the kheer,as such there r so many sweets at home..
Khushi: Yes,but since naniji asked me to make it,I couldnt refuse her..
Paayal: I understand..
**********
Khushi(entering her bedroom): Arnavji,ur coffee..
Arnav: Thanks!
Khushi:Di has called u downstairs.And.. jijaji,if u take care of Seema for sometime, Sumi jiji will b able to help Paayal jiji in the kitchen..
Chetan: Ya,y not!? I'll inform Sumi,she'll help Paayal.
Khushi: Ok,thanks! Arnavji,go fast,di.. must b waiting..
Arnav: Sure! Bhaisaab,excuse me.I'll b back soon.
Sukumar: Ji..
Arnav and Khushi share a look after which Arnav leaves with Chetan.
Khushi waits till they're out of sight.
Khushi: Good that I got a chance to talk privately to u,bhaiyya!
She closes the door and then sits next to Sukumar on the bed.
Sukumar: What is the matter,Khusi?Y did u close the door?
Khushi: Bhaiyya,I want to.. tell u something.I cant tell this to amma,babuji,buaji.. not even to jiji..
Sukumar(worried): What is it that u cant tell anybody about it?..
Khushi(with a tormented expression): I.. I'm.. Arnavji..
Sukumar: What happened?Did Jijaji say something to u?Tell me frankly,what is the matter?
Khushi(holds his hand): I'm not.. happy with.. Arnavji!
Sukumar(shocked): What?
Khushi(melodramatically): Yes bhaiyya.. He doesnt take care of me! He's not how I thought he would b,before r wedding! I'm totally unhappy with him!
Sukumar: I cant believe this!
Khushi(thinks): He cant? That means u'll hav to work extra hard,Khushi...
Sukumar: After seeing u both,I thought u both r really happy with each other! And jijaji takes so good care of u! He loves u so much! Y r u saying this?
Khushi: Everybody thinks like that,bhaiyya! If u see from outside,u'll think we're really happy,but.. only I know how it is in reality!
She closes her eyes & apologizes to God.
Khushi(thinks): Hey Devi Maiyya! Plz forgive me! I'm talking nonsense about my husband! But what can I do? I'll hav to say this,for bhabhi & bhaiyya's sake..
Sukumar: I hope he doesnt... misbehave with u?Like.. beating u up or ..
Khushi(shocked): No,no! Arnavji is not like that!
Sukumar: Then y r u unhappy with him?
Khushi: I'm unhappy with.. his behaviour!He's just not bothered about me,the only thing he's bothered about is work,work and work! Once he gets up in the morning,he goes for a jog,has a bath once he's back and then he leaves for office after having breakfast! Once he's back from office,late in the evening,he has his coffee while watching TV and then sits with his laptop and office work! And goes off to the sleep after dinner! He has no time for me!
She sighs.
Khushi(thinks): This is the worst lie I've told!
She resumes her sad story.
Khushi: He was so caring in the first month after r marriage! He used to take me out for Salmanji's movies & for shopping!He would sit with me at the poolside and count stars!He loved me a lot back then! and now,he does nothing of that sort!Look at Jiji & jijaji! Its been more than a year since they got married,but Aakash jijaji takes very good care of jiji! He comes home early from Office & spends a lot of time with jiji!
She stops to take a deep breath.
Khushi: I dont want Arnavji to take me out for shopping n movies on a daily basis! Niether do I want him to spend his money on me & buy me expensive gifts!I just want him to spend some quality time with me! I'm his wife and this is my right! Should I not get what is my right?
Sukumar: You should! And I will make sure u get it! I'll talk to jijaji! U dont worry at all bahin,ur bhaiyya is there with u! I'll solve ur problem!
Khushi: Thank u so much bhaiyya!
Sukumar: Do u hav any other complaint with regards to jijaji?
Khushi: No,this is my only complaint!
Sukumar heaves a sigh of relief.
Sukumar: devi Maiyya is great! Crazy girl! (smacks her head) U were unhappy with jijaji coz of this small thing!
Khushi: Its not a small thing,bhaiyya! It may b,for u men.But for us women,this is a big issue! Every woman wants her husband's love and his time!
Sukumar nods.
Khushi: What if Arnavji doesnt listen to u..?
Sukumar: He will! I hav full faith in him,he'll surely understand me!
Khushi: Arnavji is really stubborn,bhaiyya! What if he doesnt listen to u? What will I do?
Sukumar: Nothing of that sort will happen! U just dont worry about it and dont let such bad thoughts enter ur mind!
Khushi: Ok.But suppose,sucha thing happens,u give him ur example,bhaiyya.
Sukumar(confused):My example?
Khushi: Yes! Arnavji is a practical type of person. If u just tell him something,he may not agree. But if u giv him ur own example, that bhabhi is so happy with u! U love her as much now as u used to love her back then,when u'd got married to her!Bhabhi has no complaints with u,so then.. Arnavji will definitely understand everything!
Realization hits Sukumar.
Sukumar(thinks): How can I give my example? Ramaa also has the same complaint,that I dont give enough time to her..
He looks at Khushi.
Sukumar(thinks): Like Khusi is unhappy with jijaji for this reason,Ramaa must b.. unhappy with me..
Khushi: What happened bhaiyya? What r u thinking?
Sukumar: No.. nothing!
Khushi: U sit here,I'll send Arnavji!
Sukumar nods & Khushi leaves.
******
She meets Arnav outside the room.
Khushi: My job is done,now its ur turn!
Arnav nods & goes inside the room.
Khushi(thinks): Once bhaiyya & bhabhi's matter is resolved,I will b able to concentrate on his & my matter,Devi Maiyya..I will resolve that matter tonight itself,I promise!
She goes downstairs.
Kindly ignore typos & mistakes. Part 36(B) in the post below.
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Part 36(B)
Ramaa's heart skips a beat as she sees Arnav descending the stairs alongwith Sukumar.
She looks expectantly at Arnav who gives her a smile and a reassuring nod.
Ramaa heaves a sigh of relief.
Sukumar: Jijaji,aap chaliye,hum aavat hai.
Arnav: Sure!
He finds Khushi and Paayal in the kitchen.
Sukumar: Khusi,jara paani tau pila humko..
Khushi: Ji bhaiyya..
As she takes the glass of water to him,she asks him with her eyes.
Sukumar places his hand on her head.
Sukumar: Dhanyavaad! Khus reh!
He takes the glass of water from her hand.
Khushi(whispers): Bhaiyya,kya hua?
Sukumar: Payalia,Aakas jijaji kahaan hain?
Paayal: Woh oopar kamre me aaram kar rahe hain,bhaiyya. Unki tabiyat theek nahi hain.
Sukumar: Khaane par naahi aayenga kaa?
Paayal: Ha aayenge..Hum khana lagaakar unhe bula lenge.
Sukumar: Theek hai! Waise,humein aapan jijaon se milkar bahutai khusi hui! (looks at Khushi) Dono bahut achchhe aur samajhdaar hain! Aur humri bahut ijjat karte hain! aakas jijaji k saath humko jyaada wakhat naahi mila,par Arnav jijaji se batiyaakar hum bahut khus hain!
Khushi understands what he's trying to say.
Sukumar: Devi Maiyya k aasirbaad se humri bahino ko itne achche var,itna pyaara parivaar aur aisa ghar-sansaar mila hai!
Paayal: Woh toh hai,bhaiyya!
Sukumar: a.. tum aapan bhabhi ko aur Deepak ko dekhi hau kaa?
Paayal: Ji.Deepak ko neend aa rahi thi,isiliye bhabhi use naniji k kamre me lekar gayi...
She shows him the way to nani's room.
Sukumar: theek hain.Hum aavat hain..
Khushi(smiles): Ji bhaiyya!
After he leaves,Khushi thanks her Devi Maiyya and resumes her work.
********
In nani's room..
Sukumar: Badi jaldi sui gava Deepak?
Ramaa: Ha.. tabiyat theek naahi hai,ae hi liye saayad..
Sukumar nods & sits next to Ramaa.
Ramaa: Hum.. rasoi me jaakar aavat hai..
She is about to get up,when Sukumar stops her.
Sukumar: Tanik der ruk jao..Humko.. tumse.. ek baat karni hai.
Ramaa: Ji,kahiye..
Sukumar: Hum.. tumse.. maafi maangna chahte hain Ramaa..
Ramaa: Ee kaa kahe rahe hain?
Sukumar: Hum.. achchhe baap tau ban gaye par.. achchhe pati naahi ban paaye..
Ramaa doesnt say anything.
Sukumar: Humne kabhi ee naahi socha ki humre bachchhwa k alaava oo ki amma ko bhi humre dhyan,lagaav aur parem ki jaroorat hai.. Humra sara vakhat hum dukaan,Deepak aur apne aaram ko diye rahen.Ghar ki jimmedari aur baap ki jimmedari tau uthaaye liye,par ee sab kare maa pati ki jimmedari bhulaaye gaye..(sighs) Tumhri bidaai k bakhat hum sasurji se jaun baada kiye the hum oo baada poora naahi kar paaye.. ae hi humko maaf kar do!
He is about to fold his hands when Ramaa stops him.
Ramaa: Ee kar k humko sarmindaa mat kariye! Humre liye ee hai bahut hai ki aapko aapan galti ka ehsaas aur oo ka afsos hai.. Ee sab kare ki kauno jaroorat naahi hain!
She hugs him.
Ramaa: Aap ek bahut achchhe pati hain! Kaun kahta hai ki aapne babuji ka vachan tod diya? Itne barson se aapne humri jimmedari uthai tau hai! Humko kauno din kauno kami naahi hone di! Kauno paraai stri ki taraf dekhe bhi naahi! Humri har jaroorat ka khayaal rakhe hain aap!
She breaks the hug.
Ramaa: Aapse chook hui hai tau bas..
Sukumar(interrupts): Hum jaanat hain- hum tumhre saath samay naahi bita paaye hain,ee hai naa?
Ramaa nods.
Sukumar: Hum tumhri ee siqaayat ko door kar denge!
Ramaa(smiles): Sach?
Sukumar(nods): Bilkul! Lucknow chalo,phir dekhna-kaise tumhri saari muraadein poori kar denge hum aur tumhri har siqaayat door kar denge! Ab humne thaan li hai,ki hum achchhe dukaandar,achchhe bete,achchhe bhai aur achchhe baap se pahile achchhe pati bankar dikhayenge!
Ramaa is very happy to hear that.
Sukumar(holds her hand): Par tumko bhi humre liye kuchho kareki padi..
Ramaa: Kaa?Aap batiyaiyye tau sahi! Jaun aap kahenge hum oo karenge!
Sukumar: Aage jaakar tumko kabhi bhi humse kauno siqaayat hau tau tum sabse humse kahna! Hum ee naahi kah rahe hain ki tumko Khusi ko batiyaana naahi chahiye tha.. Tum ooko aapan bahin jaisan samjhat hau,ae hi liye tum oo ko batiyaaye di aur oo jijaji ko batiyaaye di.. theek hai! Par tum ee hai batwaa humse kahi hoti tau humko bahutai khusi hoti!
Ramaa: Kaa humne aapse naahi kaha hai?Har saalgiraah par jab aap humko uphaar dete hain,hum aapse kaa kahte hain?Hum ee sab naahi chahiye! Humein aapka saath chahiye,aapka parem chahiye!
Sukumar: Tumhri batwaa ko samjhe maa humse bhool hui gayi! Par ab hum samajh gaye hain! Aur haa,agli baar,humse saaf-saaf sabdon maa kahna ki hum ee chahtein hain ki aap humre saath samay bitaaye,samjheo?
Ramaa: Ji!
He hugs her.
Khushi,who had been witnessing the whole thing,from the window,smiles at the couple and prays for their happiness.
When she turns to go,she's shocked beyond measure to find Arnav standing behind her,at some distance.
********

Khushi walks upto him.
Khushi: Aa..aap yahaan?
Arnav: Ha, mm..main yahaan!
Khushi: Kabse khade hain?
Arnav: Jabse tum yahaan khadi ho,tabse!
Khushi(shocked): Tabse?
Arnav: tabse!
Khushi(thinks): Kamaal hai! Humein pata kaise nahi chala?
Arnav: Tum un dono ki baatein sunne me itni busy thi ki tumne notice nahi kiya!
Khushi(thinks): Hey Devi Maiyya! Phir se humare man ki baat jaan li inhone!
Arnav: Congratulations! Tum jo chahti thi woh ho gaya!
Khushi: Aapko bhi! Aur shukriya,humara saath dene k liye!
To Khushi's heart's delight,Arnav smiles.
Khushi: Aapne bhaiyya ko sab kuch bata diya?
Arnav: Yup!
Khushi: Humare plan k baare me aur..
Arnav: sab kuch matlab sab kuch,Khushi!
Khushi: Hey Devi Maiyya! Humne bhaiyya se kya kuch nahi kaha! Pata nahi woh humare drame k baare me kya soch rahe honge?
Arnav: Looks like tumne drama bahut achchhe se kiya,kyunki unhone kaha ki woh ghabra gaye the,tumhari baaton ko sunkar and of course, shocked the..
Khushi: Unhone kaha aapse?
Arnav: Yup! (smirks) Aur unhone woh bhi bataaya jo tumne unse mere baare me kaha tha!
Khushi looks away,embarassed.
Khushi: Maaf kijiye.. humne toh bas..
Arnav: I know!
Khushi: Humein toh laga tha ki aapne bhi koi drama kiya hoga,lekin aapne toh jaakar unhe sab kuch bata diya! Devi Maiyya ka shukar hai ki bhaiyya us baat ko lekar humse aur bhabhi se naraaz nahi huye!
Arnav: Mujhe toh sab kuch bataana hi tha! Aur waise bhi,Arnav Singh Raizada k abhi itne bhi bure din nahi aaye hain ki use drama karna pade!
Khushi(makes a face): Zara hum bhi toh sune,ki kitne bure din aaye hain Arnav Singh Raizada k?
Arnav is about to reply when Anjali calls them.
Anjali: Chhotey...! Chhoti...!
Arnav&Khushi together: Kya hua di...?
They look at each other.
Anjali: Khana lag gaya hai,aa jaiyye! Aur Ramaa ji aur Sukumarji ko bhi bula lijiye...!
Arnav&Khushi together: Theek hai,di...!
Arnav: Tum jao,sabko serve karne me di aur Paayal ki help karo,main unlogon ko bulaakar laata hoon.
Khushi gives him a look and then leaves.
*************
Arnav knocks on the door of nani's room.
Sukumar: Aa jaiyye..
Arnav: Di ne aaplogon ko neeche bulaaya hai,dinner k liye..
Sukumar: Ji,chaliye..
Ramaa: Aap jaiyye,hum hiyaan rukte hain,Munna k paas.
Sukumar: Tumhra khana?
Arnav: Main Hari Prakash se keh deta hoon,woh yaheen le aayega.
Sukumar: Ji.Aap bhi chaliye jijaji..
Arnav: aap chaliye,I'll join u in a moment.. Mujhe bhabhi ko thank u kehna hai,halwe k liye..So if u dont mind,kya main unse do minute baat kar sakta hoon?
Sukumar: Kyun nahi?! Hum neeche jaat hain..
Arnav: Thanks!
************
Ramaa hugs Arnav.
Arnav: Aap khush hain naa?
Ramaa(smiles): Bahut khus! Aapka bahut,bahut..
Arnav: Plz.. aap mujhe thank u mat kahiye!Maine jo aapk liye woh toh bahut hi chhoti si cheez hain.. Aapne jo mere liye kiya.. thats out of the world!
Ramaa: aapki chhoti si cheez ne humri barson ki ichchha poori kar di,hum aapka sukar kaise naahi ada karenge?
Arnav: Aap shukar mat adaa kariye,aap mujhe promise kariye,jab bhi aapke ghar aaunga,ya aap yahaan aayengi,aap mere liye jauzi halwa banayengi!
Ramaa: Pakki baat! Aapka jab bhi jauzi halwa khaaye ka man kare,aap Khusi se kahiyega,oo aapko banaakar khilaaye degi! Humri tau.. na jaane aapse phir kab mulaqat hogi?
Arnav: Jald hi hogi! Di ki shaadi aap sab ko aana hai!
Ramaa: Hum jaroor aayenge!
Arnav: And yes,uske baad bhi,jab bhi main di se milne Lucknow jaunga,main aapse milne aapke ghar aaunga!
Ramaa: Jaroor aaiyyega! Bas humka ek din pahile phone par bataa dijiyega ki aap aayewaale hain,tau hum halwe ki saari samagrih aapke bhaisaab se mangvaakar rakhenge!
Arnav: Sure!
He looks at a deeply-asleeps Deepak.
Arnav: Deepak k saath main zyaada time spend nahi kar paaya,use meri taraf se sorry keh dijiyega! Aur use yeh bhi kahiyega ki next time jab aaplog Delhi aayenge,main use mere office zaroor le jaunga!
Ramaa(smiles): Hum kah denge!
HP(from the door): Arnav bhaiyya,Anjaliji aapko bula rahi hain.
Ramaa: Jaiyye,aap khana kha lijiye.
Arnav: Aap bhi kha lijiye.. Hari Prakash,inka khana serve kar do..Aur bhabhi,aapko kuch chahiye ho toh aap HP ko bol dijiyega..
Ramaa: Ji..
Arnav: Deepak nahi khayega?
Ramaa: Hum khaa le phir oo ko jagaavat hain.
Arnav: Alright toh.. aap HP ko aawaaz de dijiyega,woh uska khana bhi yaheen le aayega.
Ramaa: Ji..
************

Once dinner is over,Nani gives all the gifts,which Arnav had bought,to the guests.
Buaji: Bahut der hui gayi hai Nandkisore,ab humka ghar chali ki chaahi..Ee logan ka kal Jaipur bhi jaayka hai..Aagya dijiye naniji..
Nani: Jaisan aapko theek lage.Aap sabko humri Anjali bitiya ki shaadi ma aaye ki padi! Hum khud aayenge aapke ghar,aapko nimantran patrika deve ki khaatir..
Sukumar: Jaroor padhaariyega naniji,humko bahut achchha lagega!
He touches nani's feet and nani blesses him.
With that, begins a round of good byes,namastes,hugging and feet-touching.
Arnav & Khushi touch Ramaa's feet.
Ramaa: Khoob khus rahiye aap dono! Nandoiji,Devi Maiyya aapko aapke kaam maa barkat den aur aapko hamesa swasht rakhe! Aur Khushi, bahut jaldi tumhri godh bhar jaaye aur tum sada suhaagan raho!
Arnav notices the blush on Khushi's cheeks and smiles.
Ramaa: Chalte hain,nandoiji!
Arnav is so overwhelmed by emotions that he's unable to speak,so he simply nods.
Ramaa notices the tears in his eyes.
Ramaa(keeping a hand on his shoulder): Bas!Jaate-jaate humko rulaiyyega kaa?
Arnav shakes his head.
He felt the urge to hug her but he checked himself since the family was present there.
Ramaa also felt the same urge & she also controlled herself,since she didnt want her family,particularly Sumitra to think something wrong.
So she blesses him by keeping her hand on his head.
Ramaa: Jeete rahiye! Devi Maiyya aapko lambi aayu de!
Arnav(confused): Aayu?
Ramaa(smiles): Aayu matbal umar!
Arnav: Oh...! thanks! I wish aapki har wish poori ho jaay aur aap bhi hamesha khush rahen!
At that moment,Mohan comes there.
Mohan: Sir,hum kaunsi gaadi le?
Arnav: Mujhe SUV ki chaabi de do,tum doosri gaadi le lo.
He turns to the family,who were still busy with their goodbyes.
Arnav: Chalen?
Buaji: Ha,ha babua chalo! Chalo,chalo sab gaadi maa baitho,naahi tau hiyaan hi bhor hui jai hai aur tumlogan ki gaadi chhoot jai hai!
After they leave and after the kitchen and dining area are cleaned,Khushi leaves for her room.
Khushi: Bahut thakaan ho gayi hai aur ab yeh saree aur yeh gehne humse bardaasht bhi nahi ho rahe hain!
She takes out her nightsuit from the cupboard.
Khushi: Arnavji aaye usse pehle kapde badal lete hain.
She is about to enter the bathroom when a thought crosses her mind,but she dismisses it.
Khushi: Aaj ki raat ko sawaal karne aur jawaab dene me hi guzar jayegi! Roothna-manaana yehi sab hota rahega!Aaj raat ko kuch aur toh.. hone se raha! Kapde badal hi lete hain! Waise bhi yeh saree bahut bhaari hai!
She enters the bathroom,not knowing what the night had in store for her.

No precap.

NOTE:As much as I enjoyed writing this long.. two posts special part,I have to admit,it was tiresome! My shoulders and neck are stiff from all that writing. I can totally imagine how much extra effort Barun,Sanaya,the rest of the cast & crew has to put in for the mahaepisodes! Hats off to all of them! I can imagine what they must b going through while shooting for an extra episode,that too an hour long episode!Kudos to the entire team of IPKKND!👏
Kindly ignore typos & mistakes. Translation in the post below. Next update on Wednesday.
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Translation for Part 36(B)
Ramaa's heart skips a beat as she sees Arnav descending the stairs alongwith Sukumar.
She looks expectantly at Arnav who gives her a smile and a reassuring nod.
Ramaa heaves a sigh of relief.
Sukumar: Jijaji,u carry on,I'll just b back..
Arnav: Sure!
He finds Khushi and Paayal in the kitchen.
Sukumar: Khusi,giv me some water..
Khushi: Ji bhaiyya..
As she takes the glass of water to him,she asks him with her eyes.
Sukumar places his hand on her head.
Sukumar:Thanks! Be happy!
He takes the glass of water from her hand.
Khushi(whispers): Bhaiyya,what happened?
Sukumar: Payalia,where is Aakas jijaji?
Paayal: He's resting in r room,bhaiyya. He is not well.
Sukumar: Wont he join us for dinner?
Paayal: Yes,he will.I'll call him after serving dinner..
Sukumar: Okay! BTW,I'm really happy after meeting my brothers-in-law! (looks at Khushi) Both r very nice & wise! And they respect me a lot! Didnt get a lot of time with aakas jijaji,but I'm really happy after speaking to Arnav jijaji!
Khushi understands what he's trying to say.
Sukumar: With Devi Maiyya's blessings,my sisters hav got such wonderful husbands,sucha loving family and this kind of house!
Paayal: Thats true,bhaiyya!
Sukumar: a.. hav u seen ur bhabhi & Deepak?
Paayal: Ji.Deepak was sleepy,hence bhabhi took him to dadiji's room...
She shows him the way to nani's room.
Sukumar: Ok.Excuse me..
Khushi(smiles): Sure bhaiyya!
After he leaves,Khushi thanks her Devi Maiyya and resumes her work.
********
In nani's room..
Sukumar: Deepak went to sleep pretty soon!
Ramaa: Yes..may b since he's not well?..
Sukumar nods & sits next to Ramaa.
Ramaa: I'm.. going to the kitchen..
She is about to get up,when Sukumar stops her.
Sukumar: Wait for a while.I need to talk to u..
Ramaa: Sure,tell me..
Sukumar: I'm sorry,Ramaa..
Ramaa: What r u saying?
Sukumar: I became a good father,but I couldnt become a good husband..
Ramaa doesnt say anything.
Sukumar: I never thought that apart from my son,even his mother needs my love,care & affection.. I gave all my time to my shop,Deepak and my comforts.I took the responsibility of r house n Deepak,but somewhere in all of this,I forgot the responsibility of being a husband..(sighs) Forgive me,for I couldnt fulfill the promise I made to sasurji at the time of ur bidaai!
He is about to fold his hands when Ramaa stops him.
Ramaa: Dont embarass me by doing this! Its enough for me that u've realized ur mistake and r apologizing for the same! No need to do all this!
She hugs him.
Ramaa: U r a really good husband! Who says u broke the promise u made to babuji? U've been taking my responsibility since so many years! I never felt anything was lacking in r house! U took care of all my needs! U never even looked at any other woman!
She breaks the hug.
Ramaa: U hav only lacked in..
Sukumar(interrupts): I know.. I didnt spend enough time with u,isnt it?
Ramaa nods.
Sukumar: I'll make sure u wont complaint about it ever again!
Ramaa(smiles): Really?
Sukumar(nods): Definitely! Once we're in Lucknow,I'll fulfill all ur wishes and make sure u hav no complaints! Now I've decided,I'll become a good husband,before becoming a good shopkeeper,a good son,a good brother and a good father!
Ramaa is very happy to hear that.
Sukumar(holds her hand): U also need to do something for me..
Ramaa: What is it? Just tell me! I'm ready to do whatever it is!
Sukumar: If u ever hav any issues with me in future,I should b the first one to know about it! I'm not saying that u shouldnt hav talked to Khusi about it. U think of her like a sister,hence u told her n she told jijaji.. thats fine! But had u told me directly,I wouldve been a lot happier!
Ramaa: Havent I told u earlier?On every anniversary,when u give me a gift,what do I tell u?That I dont need all of this! All I need is ur love and ur company!
Sukumar: I misunderstood what u were trying to say! But I've understood it all now!And yes,next time,tell me in clear language that I want u to spend some time with me,understood?
Ramaa: Ji!
He hugs her.
Khushi,who had been witnessing the whole thing,from the window,smiles at the couple and prays for their happiness.
When she turns to go,she's shocked beyond measure to find Arnav standing behind her,at some distance.
********
Khushi walks up to him.

Khushi: Y..you here?
Arnav: Yeah,mm.. me.. here!
Khushi: U've been standing here since...?
Arnav: Since u've been standing here!
Khushi(shocked): Really?
Arnav: Really!
Khushi(thinks): Strange! How come I didnt come to know he's standing behind me?
Arnav: U were so busy listening to what they were saying that u never noticed!
Khushi(thinks): Hey Devi Maiyya! again he came to know what I was thinking about!
Arnav: Congratulations! U got what u wished for!
Khushi: To u too! And thanks,for helping me!
To Khushi's heart's delight,Arnav smiles.
Khushi: Did u tell bhaiyya everything?
Arnav: Yup!
Khushi: About my plan and..
Arnav: Everything means everything,Khushi!
Khushi: Hey Devi Maiyya! What I told bhaiyya was total rubbish! God knows what he thought of my drama?
Arnav: Looks like u did well in ur drama,coz he told me he was scared when he heard u and of course, he was shocked!..
Khushi: Did he say that?
Arnav: Yup! (smirks) And he also told me what u told him!
Khushi looks away,embarassed.
Khushi: I'm sorry! I just..
Arnav: I know!
Khushi: I thought u also must've done some drama,but u went n told him the truth! By Devi Maiyya's grace,bhaiyya wasnt angry with bhabhi n me!
Arnav: I had to tell him everything! And in any case,Arnav Singh Raizada's bad days havent turned worse,so he need not switch to dramatics!
Khushi(makes a face): Let me also hear about Arnav Singh Raizada's bad days..
Arnav is about to reply when Anjali calls them.
Anjali: Chhotey...! Chhoti...!
Arnav&Khushi together: What happened di...?
They look at each other.
Anjali: Come down,dinner's served!And yes,call Ramaa ji & Sukumarji as well...!
Arnav&Khushi together: Alright di...!
Arnav: U go & help di & Paayal in serving the guests,I'll call them for dinner!
Khushi gives him a look and then leaves.
*************
Arnav knocks on the door of nani's room.
Sukumar: Plz come in..
Arnav: Di has called u both downstairs for dinner..
Sukumar: Sure,lets go..
Ramaa: U go ahead,I'll remain here,with Munna.
Sukumar: What about ur dinner?
Arnav: I'll tell Hari Prakash to serve it here.
Sukumar: Sure!Come jijaji..
Arnav: U carry on,I'll join u in a moment.. I need to say thank u to bhabhi,for the halwa!..So if u dont mind,can I talk to her for two minutes?
Sukumar: Y not!?I'll go downstairs..
Arnav: Thanks!
************
Ramaa hugs Arnav.
Arnav: R u happy now?
Ramaa(smiles): Very happy! Thank u so..
Arnav: Plz.. dont thank me!I've done something really less for u.. What u did for me.. was out of the world!
Ramaa: How can I not thank u?!Ur "really less" thing has fulfilled my wish of many years!
Arnav: U dont thank me! Promise me instead,that whenever I'll come to ur place or u'll come here,u'll make jauzi halwa for me!
Ramaa: Promise!Whenever u feel like having jauzi halwa,u tell Khusi,she'll make it for u! I dont know.. when we'll meet next?
Arnav: We'll meet soon! U'll r coming for di's wedding!
Ramaa: We'll come for sure!
Arnav: And yes,after that,whenever I'll go to Lucknow to meet di,I'll come to ur house to meet u!
Ramaa: U must come! Just inform me one day prior to ur visit,so I'll take ur bhaisaab's help n keep all ingredients ready!
Arnav: Sure!
He looks at a deeply-asleeps Deepak.
Arnav: I couldnt spend time with Deepak,plz tell him sorry from my side! And tell him that the next time he's in Delhi,I'll definitely take him to my office!
Ramaa(smiles): I'll tell him!
HP(from the door): Arnav bhaiyya,Anjaliji is calling u.
Ramaa: Go & hav dinner.
Arnav: U also hav it.. Hari Prakash, serve her dinner..And bhabhi,if u need anything,u tell HP..
Ramaa: Ji..
Arnav: Wont Deepak hav anything?
Ramaa: I'll wake him up once I'm done..
Arnav: Alright so.. u call HP and he'll serve his dinner here as well!
Ramaa: Ji..
************

Once dinner is over,Nani gives all the gifts,which Arnav had bought,to the guests.
Buaji: Its really late,Nandkisore,now we must go home..They're leaving for Jaipur tomorrow.We'll take ur leave, naniji..
Nani: As u wish.U all have to come for my Anjali bitiya's wedding! I'll personally come to ur house to giv the invitation card..
Sukumar: Please do come naniji,we'll b really happy!
He touches nani's feet and nani blesses him.
With that, begins a round of good byes,namastes,hugging and feet-touching.
Arnav & Khushi touch Ramaa's feet.
Ramaa: May u both b really happy! Nandoiji,may Devi Maiyya giv u success in ur work & keep u health! And Khusi, may u become a mother soon & may u b a suhagan always!
Arnav notices the blush on Khushi's cheeks and smiles.
Ramaa: I'll take ur leave,nandoiji!
Arnav is so overwhelmed by emotions that he's unable to speak,so he simply nods.
Ramaa notices the tears in his eyes.
Ramaa(keeping a hand on his shoulder): Enough! Do u want me to cry while leaving?
Arnav shakes his head.
He felt the urge to hug her but he checked himself since the family was present there.
Ramaa also felt the same urge & she also controlled herself,since she didnt want her family,particularly Sumitra to think something wrong.
So she blesses him by keeping her hand on his head.
Ramaa: May Devi Maiyya give u a long aayu!
Arnav(confused): Aayu?
Ramaa(smiles): Aayu means life!
Arnav: Oh...! thanks! I wish that all ur wishes may come true & u may always b happy!
At that moment,Mohan comes there.
Mohan: Sir,which car should I take?
Arnav: Give me the keys of SUV & u take the other car..
He turns to the family,who were still busy with their goodbyes.
Arnav: Lets go,shall we?
Buaji: Yes,we shall,babua! Chalo,chalo everyone get into the cars,else we'll stand here only till dawn and u all will end up missing ur train!
After they leave and after the kitchen and dining area are cleaned,Khushi leaves for her room.
Khushi: I'm really tired & now I cant stand this saree & the jewellery for any longer!
She takes out her nightsuit from the cupboard.
Khushi: Let me change before Arnavji comes back.
She is about to enter the bathroom when a thought crosses her mind,but she dismisses it.
Khushi: The night will go in asking questions & getting answers! The whole time will go in that!Anything else.. is not likely to happen tonight! So let me change!Anyways this saree is really heavy!
She enters the bathroom,not knowing what the night had in store for her.

No precap.

NOTE:As much as I enjoyed writing this long.. two posts special part,I have to admit,it was tiresome! My shoulders and neck are stiff from all that writing. I can totally imagine how much extra effort Barun,Sanaya,the rest of the cast & crew has to put in for the mahaepisodes! Hats off to all of them! I can imagine what they must b going through while shooting for an extra episode,that too an hour long episode! Kudos to the entire team of IPKKND!👏
Kindly ignore typos & mistakes.Next update on Wednesday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG

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Yipeee I'm First...
I'm First 😃 Fantastic😃
yeahhh😃

Now back to your marvelous update😉

First of all thank you for giving such a super extra long two parts 😃 👏 👏 It was really great 👏.
I love this update 😊. Well you have written it so so awesomely dear 😃 Superb.

The way you have written Arnav's convo with Rama and all was simply amazing 😊. You have visualize the understanding between them really well. And Khushi's drama was excellent as usual 😃 😆. Glad that Rama and her husband's issue solved and arnav's input into that was really great 😊 😊.

And among all these you have also shown ARHI also 😊.
All i have to say is Great work Smita 👏 👏 👏 .

And waiting for the next part😃
Edited by ipkkndank - 12 years ago
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What happened?
Didnt like it or liked it very much?
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Fab update... Comment in detail a bit later after reading it again.
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Originally posted by: Smita.M

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Well my sweetty i put OMG before reading ur update because my brain told me that i'm the first one to comment on that time and the first word that came into my mind was OMG in bigger words 😃 😃.

So without typing res i typed OMG instead 😃
And i edit that one 😃 😆.
Don't tell me that you thought i will keep my comment limited to OMG after reading your super duper extra LONG fabulous update😃. And being the first one to comment on your story😃 that also i got by a very very rare chance 😃 , there's no way in hell that i'm going to miss that chance 😃 😃 😃

And answer your question is Of course i liked the update very very much 😃 .
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that was shuper😃 but of course sorry for ur poor fingers😕 they must be really tired😕 pamper them properly and then give us another shuper update 😳

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Hello everyone! I will be posting my 5 one-shots over here which I sent in for the Pyaar Ka Trope-fest contest. They are all standalones and...

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Posted by: minakrish

8 years ago

One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.|Mrina's Index

Hello people, This is me, Mrinalini , aka Mrina or Mina . And here is the Index of my stories. Now it would be easier for you all to find my...

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