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shreya2748

@shreya2748

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Hehe
Heroin hero ke piche airport ayi waise bhi thik hi hai armaan ne DMG me bhi kuch kiya nai use jane diya tha :(
N what about ur last line haan?
Kya philosophy hai ;) kritu tu to bahot achi writer ban gayi yaar :P just kidding haan!
U gave it happy ever after wala end,or we can say start
This is all we at least I want
Shho cute ❤️ 😳
N sachme wo armaan to kabhi kuch bolta hi nhi acha hua shilpa ne 2 thappad maare ab bolna sikh jayega
When she said na they are laughing at me bcuz they have people they loved but I don't have him
N then when she saw him her thoughts were just <3
N loved their hug after thappad session the most ❤️
Pm me n thnx for d update kritu :)

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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Superb...
It was just Fabulous...
You described the emotions Very Beautifully...
Very Emotional...

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Priya kashian

@LoveArsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Amazinggg,u drescribe their emotions very beautifully,its was a sweet os :)

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

That was very beautiful ..

Loved it ...

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kritika_24

@kritika_24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: guptaaesha
Hehe
Heroin hero ke piche airport ayi waise bhi thik hi hai armaan ne DMG me bhi kuch kiya nai use jane diya tha :(
N what about ur last line haan?
Kya philosophy hai ;) kritu tu to bahot achi writer ban gayi yaar :P just kidding haan!
U gave it happy ever after wala end,or we can say start
This is all we at least I want
Shho cute ❤️ 😳
N sachme wo armaan to kabhi kuch bolta hi nhi acha hua shilpa ne 2 thappad maare ab bolna sikh jayega
When she said na they are laughing at me bcuz they have people they loved but I don't have him
N then when she saw him her thoughts were just <3
N loved their hug after thappad session the most ❤️
Pm me n thnx for d update kritu :)

2 thappad to usko dmg me padne chahiye the😆😆

and vaise vo last line meri nahi greys anatomy ki philosophy h...mujhme itna dimag kahan😃😃

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Zarish Khan

@zarishkhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

nice n cute😃
thanks fo givin it a happy ending😊 n thanks fo pm

Edited by zarishkhan - 12 years ago

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manjiri

@m4manju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

nice ending... love stories ending at the airports are always good to read..you nailed it 😳
do write something more on them soon :D

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kritika_24

@kritika_24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: m4manju
nice ending... love stories ending at the airports are always good to read..you nailed it 😳
do write something more on them soon :D

even for once i did think that ending on the sirport might make it quite common...yet i couldn't really imagine anything else! and yeah lets admit it...we are bollywood people!! :P :D

and more on them girl, greediness is a sin 😳😳

anyhow thanks u lykd it!!😃

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applepie

@-GoogleWithMe-

Trailblazer

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

edited my comment on pg 15

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kritika_24

@kritika_24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: -mistique-
WOW tht was simply awesome loved the way how u write it each n every thing fitted in the picture i loved it so much can't explain u made me speechless with ur writing airport scene was amazing the realisation then confession ..her anger plus love hayeee very well described the last dialogue understand wala was one the best n then the kiss well done girl keep writing u r very talented

oyye hoyye😳😳

thank youuu sooo sooo much yaar!!!! khush kar ditta!!