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Posted: 13 years ago
Well i liked everything abt dis story, thank god chand is not preggy...

But next time let the come closer when they both r in their senses.
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Posted: 13 years ago
is der any update today???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 30

"Veer..." she said softly... "please... don't do this..."


He looked at her innocent face...she seemed tired and sleepy due to the medicines she was taking... he lightly kissed her forehead and walked away...



After some time...

Veer was driving on his way back to Kurseong when he saw someone standing on the side of the road... he stopped the car... this time she wasn't smiling but crying...he could hear her clearly...he stepped out of the car and came closer... "Chandni" he was shocked... this time he knew it couldn't be Chandni... "who are you??"



but she didn't answer and started walking '..



"bloody hell...don't you have a life??" he shouted but she didn't turn back... .. he wanted to follow her...to see where she finally goes... he went back towards his car...

the moment he started driving...she was no where... angrily he stepped out with a bottle of alcohol "drink it...and have some sleep..."

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Next Day...

Manohar was still yawning when he saw Veer standing outside the house... he was surprised to see him so early...



"it seems you didn't had good sleep???"



Veer turned to look at him "I have least bothered about anyone in my life...but"



"so you are thinking about your lady love..." Manohar smiled...



Veer retorted angrily "i usually see a lady in white dress that looks exactly like Chandni...but she's not Chandni..."



"what???" Manohar knew Veer would never lie about this and even when he's drunk he knows what he's doing...so there was no point asking Veer if he was drunk or not... "since when??"



"from last few months..." Veer replied...



Manohar didn't had much clue...but he was still thinking about the mystery that Veer had come across...



"what's going on here??" Kaka came with his cup of tea...



Veer smiled "nothing Kaka just enjoying the morning Sun..."



Kaka was happy to see him so early "well come inside breakfast is ready..." he walked in...



"thank God Veer you didn't tell anything to the old man...otherwise he would have created so many stories out of this..." Manohar laughed while Veer seriously stared at him...



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Chandni woke up late but felt much better...she immediately realized she needs to submit her assignment in college... she quickly changed and went downstairs...



"where are you rushing Chandni...???" Meenakshi asked...



"Mom please...i will tell you later...i am running late for college...today's my last day to submit my work..."



"wait wait...Chandni...you rest...i will drop this in your college" Meenakshi said...



Chandni was relieved "oh thanks mom..." she handed the assignment to her mother... and went back to her room...



she thought of reading some book when her eyes fell on the stone kept on the book shelf... "i have to find out about this place..."



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soon she heard the door bell... Kamla was in the kitchen...her Grandmother was doing her morning prayers...



Chandni walked downstairs and opened the door "you???"



Veer smiled with a big bouquet in his hands "yes" and walked in...



She whispered angrily "just go form here..."



"i will call out your Grandmother if you say this again" he said firmly...


Chandni would never take the risk of involving her Grandmother in between... "fine...what ??"



he gave her the roses...



Chandni frowned "thank you...now you leave..."



"alright..." he scanned and saw no one around... quickly he lifted her in his arms and took her upstairs to her room...



she was shocked...she couldn't shout..it was like a wind, he always gives her sudden shocks... she hold his collar "leave me Veer..." red with anger she had no clue why he was doing this...



the moment he took her inside the room...he lay her on the bed and bolted the door... "Veer...what the hell are you doing???" she got up and stood in front of him...



he gazed at her "i am doing what I left incomplete last night..."



confusedly she stared at him... "what ???? what are you going to do???"



before she could speak he placed small kiss on her lips...



ferocious at his behavior "wait...how can you kiss me???"



he kissed again "like this"



furiously she picked up a book and threw it over him... "i...i hate you..."



he hold her arms and pushed her against the wall...



"this is too much Veer..." she stared at him...she wanted to hit him...



he came closer '..while her arms tugged against the wall forcefully by his strong hands... he gazed at her lips... Chandni didn't knew what to do...he always leaves her in bad situations... "stop it Veer" she whispered making sure she's not loud...



"listen Chandni" he kissed again "don't stop me..." there was passion in his eyes...as if he just wanted her...as if he had waited for ages...she saw him coming closer...



soon he sucked her lips...Chandni felt his lips on hers...she closed her fists and still tried to push him away... but soon she felt weak in front of his might...his lips created such a sensation on her lips that she never wanted him to go away...



he felt her relaxed...slowly he wrapped his arms around her...she closed her eyes and felt his strong arms encircled around her waist...she felt protected...she never knew someone would love her so much that he would make her melt in his strong arms...and he would protect her from the world...she could depend on him...rely on him...his hands caressed her back...he was passionate about her...



...Veer felt the softness of her beautiful lips...



Chandni couldn't say anything...her hands were cold, she hold his shirt tightly... his fingers entwined her silk locks... Veer looked at her while taking small breaths... "Chandni...i...i want you..."



he kissed her neck... she thought about her future...Veer was strong...loved her '..but he has a past...the past that she can never forget..."Veer...please..." she opened her eyes...



how can she forget that he lied to her and he has slept with many girls before... "please...leave me..." how could she imagine herself with the man whose life is women and alcohol...what if he still has girlfriends...how can she trust him... "leave me"



the more she said the more tightly he hold her in his arms... he didn't stop...



finally she managed to push him a little... he looked at her "what happened??"



"stop it Veer...i...i hate you...just leave me..." ... he stared at her pondering over her harsh words and tightly hold her waist "no I won't leave you" he said angrily... "don't you ever say that again"



she didn't knew what to do with him...he was rude...he can never understand her '.. she saw him leaving angrily...She was scared...tears gathered her beautiful eyes "you...you hurt me Veer"



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Few hours later...

"Destiny can do wonders and sometimes it can create hurdles..." Shama finished her tea...

"anyways where is Chandni??...is she alright now??



Kamini picked up the cups... "she's upstairs...yes much better now..."



Chandni was again in a difficult situation...her life was playing with her every moment... she looked at the two pieces of stone that pointed towards a place... she had never been to Mehrangarh and neither did she heard about this place before...



she wiped her tears and lifted her head from the desk... she decided so many times to run away from Veer but every time destiny collided her with him... this time she decided she would never let him take her for granted...



he just wanted to play with her life...he doesn't love her... and she was the biggest fool who fell for him and thought his lust to be love...



"Chandni...come downstairs...we are waiting with your favorite snacks..." Shama said loudly getting Chandni out of her stream of thoughts that made her cry...



"coming" she answered back so that nobody comes to her room and see her crying...



she looked herself in the mirror...her eyes were red and somewhat swollen... her face looked dull...her lips were red...and painful...



she never imagined she would come across such a man who will make her cry, who can make her happy and sad at the same time...



he was only man whose magic worked on her...she never thought about anyone in her life...he was so bad sill she thought about him, this time she was sure that she's not wrong about him...



she could see his fingerprints around her fair waist and arms...she hated herself for letting him touch her again...she felt miserable...she wanted to slap him...to kill him, to make him realize what he was up to... but it wasn't easy...she knew he would not leave her...he entered like a storm in her life and changed everything...



every time she fell under his prey... she made up her mind to get out of this place...to go away from him where he could never reach her... ...but before that she wanted to visit Mehrangarh...



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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii..
wil edit soon

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thnx for a cute update di,
really lovely reading it,
mujhe yeh fact acha laga ki , veer is realising her dheere dheere... rafta rafta..(a bit punjabi too :P)
he neva wanna exploit her unconsciousness...
here is not cool, not a dude, not cracking or CRAZY... HE IS CUTE...
i lovd his new avatar too...

veer saw our bhotani aunty again... she luks like chandini, .. den one thng is sure, dat bhootani aunty is beautiful den 😆

manohar took veer seriously, den y d hell he dont take his first lov -KAKA seriously...(kidding)

veer came to her house,.. now he is cool again...😉

the way he lifted her to her room,..she ws struggling to resist him...
''hw can u kiss me?''
he kissed her again..
'' like dis!''


amazing chemistry...(forget abt d academic subject, :P)

god, she cnt help, but simply melt b4 him...
his passion cn melt her so easily, dat all her resistence vapurises in air...

lovd dat scene...

god, she wanna go to mahrengarh...
rajasthan...i m alwayz fantasized abt dis place...
the first thng i get in ma head weneva i hear- RAJASTHAN IS- prithviraj chauhan n sanyogita...😳

ud soon di(i noe u will, but still for saying purpose... oder wise ma comment will lok empty empty :P)

lov u di

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!!!
The story is becoming quite interesting!!!!!😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
no doubt superb...fantastic...👏
veer entered in her house and picked her in his arms...wah wah kya bahadur insaan hai...i mean itni himmat ki apni gf ke ghar main ghus kar use kiss kare and not once but many times...wah wah...he has the guts...
and chandu don't try sweety you are not going to succed...veer is your life...
and veer again saw that bhootani...well i don't understand that she is not harming him then what she actually wants...he always saw her...
and manhohar...goshhh when will he believe,,,,,,,,,,,,now even veer believed what kaka is saying...
di continue soon...
luv u...a lot...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
vry nice update di
veer n chand scenes was superb

bt whose that white dress girl
suspense h???
Bt i enjoyed it

omg veer kitna cute h,he love her so much n chand too
bt uska past bich me aa gya
koi to chand ko samjhao ki wo sudhar gya h or loved her so much

update soon
thanx 4 regular uds
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved It To The Core !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting update!!!😊

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