SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 46

Originally posted by: ridzzi

but what about that white dress lady...humne phir use nahi dekha...where is she...???????...darr gae kya...??????...😆

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di u r amazing...just amazing.

some times i feel, ki i juz dont deserve to comment here. a child like me, jus dont deserve it...

u r awesome.

may b i m d youngest rtmc ff writer here...right??

n u all di's are ma inspiration,,,,

but still if u wanna read ma bak bak, u r alwayz welcome...

lets strt wid ud.

She felt as if she was his prey...a prey where the preyer doesn't bother to think about the feelings or emotions of the person he is laying his eyes on...

just like the title of story- shikar...

i feel pity for chand,

be it or not, veer really annoys dis way. he shud nt b so rude to her.

she feels like crying here... i feel like shouting on him, kicking .him,, ...

But Veer Raichand can never follow any orders...

attitude haan!!...yo boy...killer, damn killer.

"listen..." . "i wanted to kiss you..." "and you should be happy that you received what most girls just dream of"... wat is dis...he is damn shameless, amazing creature,

veer don't flaunt urself too much

its not her, its u deing for her...u cn't control her attraction, u cn't bear her beauty...

aww..chand fell in wet mud...kapde gande ho gye...

koi nhi, daag acche hote h, surf excel h na!!!!(actually di, its a punchline of a detergent powder in india, very famous dialogue)

"a snobbish girl like you, deserves this"...he called her snobbish...u snobbish veer.

barish aa gyi...rain dance karenge ab sab...

i have a request, plz can smone give ma chand to ATTITUDE...

i want her to speak the way he speaks.

she hold his hand "please don't go"......why did she do dis...

lagta h bachi der gyi, koi baat nhi

loved d way he gave her his jacket.

she felt so weak n helpless dat she hugged him, the cause of her pain, n her healer too...

wat a contradiction, i must say...

lovd dat scene.

so veer, finally confessed. good boy.

"not in this life" '.- is she gonna suicide.

or she is gonna run some wer to abroad?????????

ooo...suspence, i like it!!

she ws thnking of him ...his kiss n his confession, she even smiled,

chand, dont b so easy to him, plzz...

di u noe, the part of the story ws scene in club, club nite is the scene of ud...

i read it 20 times, literally...

still i can't stop it reading, i donno why, i loved it so much

may b i lovd the way he is missing her, he cud see her in bottle, bestest dialogue ws

"and... and...i '.i had an empty pocket in my heart, I kept her carefully in it"

funny part ws, he loved loved her hissy nature, her tantrums...hahahaha...

chandini, do she really cares for him?????????

chalo he atleast thinks of her...

but he thought about her... "Chand" ...she cared for him or was he thinking too much about the damsel...

he called her chand...wow, me feel like jumping on ma bed...(coz i cn't jump on ma brother's)😉

lov u di

u r awesome.

ud soon...

Originally posted by: ridzzi

totally superb...awesome...👏

veer,veer,veer she is hell angry with you...n he not bothering about her anger...god he has so much of attitude...

''... "i wanted to kiss you..." he said while grasping her more closer...his eyes couldn't lay on anything else except her lips "and you should be happy that you received what most girls just dream of"...he looked into her eyes for few seconds then pushed her away...''

man how could he say that...he is not feeling regret of what he did...he is really shameless...😡

n couz of him she fell in mud n he is enjoying...man agar main chand k jagah hoti na toh use bhi usi mud main dhakka de deti...😈...

she tried to slap him...but he stoped her n said her snobbish...veer you...god i can't say anything to him...he is the hero of story...but veer you really doing it wrong...😡

but still their is some one nice inside him...whatever he did...after he felt guilty...n apologised too...good...now don't show any type of attitude towards her...just be like this...a good man...

n she asked him not to go...god this girl really unbelieveable...one moment she is scared of him n next moment she felt safe with him...

kaka was still not able to find the way out...to save veer...kaka sometimes you should leave things on destiny...

''...He took out her luggage from the car "hope to see you soon"... she didn't say anything...

as she reached the door she turned at him "not in this life"...he was still for a moment...

something struck him...''

😲god does she really didn't want to come back than what was that why she send those servents to him...???????...😉

n she is angry with him but after reaching her house...she is only thinking about him...she smiling thinking about him...what was that...?????...she doesn't want to go back,she doesn't like him but smiling thinking of him...😍

n veer in night club...veer clear your misunderstanding...you haven't trapped her...you are in love with her...but the thing which need is to understand your feelings...

but what about that white dress lady...humne phir use nahi dekha...where is she...???????...darr gae kya...??????...😆

thank you for updating...once again...🤗

update soon...

luv u...😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

awesome update

really loved it
veer is so cute when he gave his jacket to chand
n she hugged him
sooo sweettt

really chand cares veer..,thats why she sent maid for him.,very cute

lovely update,yeh veer sudherega nhi when h stop drinking yr

cont soon
thnx 4 pm
luv u

Originally posted by: tmsg

AWESOME
👏
jaldi ud dedo didi

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome asusual :)

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great part

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

lovely ud dear...

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Nice update... Why did Chandni send those two here.. to have people around them.. or what..?
Continue soon... 😊