IPKKND: I Have Dreams to Remember Pt2:Pg20

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Amazing OS as always. Arnav cheating on his wife didn't quite gel until I read the last bit. ASR taking revenge was so PERFECT. He played along until he could inflict hurt with the same intensity, that he himself had experienced. Can almost see ASR's mind working, cold & calculating. You are truly superb. Loved it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Wicked plz do continue cant wait and pm with the link plz

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Ohhh man, looks like you're in a pretty gloomy mood these days! :P lol but I'm loving it! :D The sadist in me is enjoying these OS a lott! ;)

I absolutely loveddd this one Nayika! Even though Arnav did do a pretty douche bag move, but hey at least this won't happen in the show..I hope! :P Keep them coming! ;) It was very well written!

--Garima

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Fatuma

@Missbantu

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Seriously didn't see that coming, Arnav ughhh how could he possibly do that, I mean it is the worst revenge ever. Poor khushi had to see that sooo devastating.
Awesome update

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-monalisa-

@-monalisa-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Did a double-take; and then had to read it again to follow his thought process. Very very creative and excellent writing as usual. Take a bow Nayika 👏

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

nice work as usual!!

arnie's not leaving any stone untouched to hurt khushi eh? nicely written

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Saba

@n091505

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i knew something was up but still had a knee jerk reaction to the kiss!!!!!

Now that we know how the story will progress, i'm just waiting for the day when he'll get his just desserts!!!!

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

wow interesting take on promo...the revenge?! i like the way he admitted it was for himself...Poor Khushi🥺

By the way whats with your mood ...😆

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Ever since he saw her in Snake's arms, I have been expecting such a scene after they are married. He will either flirt with someone to hurt her, or encourage someone to flirt with him. He might get one of his old GFs / models in his firm to cosy up to him to hurt her as he was hurt. An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth...This is ASR we are talking about.

And cos he is Arnav too, he is going to be as devastated as she is.