IPKKND: I Have Dreams to Remember Pt2:Pg20

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

"Aaannnddd BAM!"

That was my first reaction.

I felt the pain, Arnav's and Khushi's, but will it be to cruel to say that I liked how everything hit Arnav right in the face - like a sadistic pleasure? Cos I did but I still wanted him to stop her, still wanted her to stop for him. Hopeless romantic, kya karoon?

I loved how she re-packed her bag and how that was the only indication in the story of her outward reaction to the whole truth in the sense of what action she would take. From waiting, hoping that what she saw wasnt true to realizing that it was nothing at all compared to what she had hidden from her.

Amazing work.

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

niceee..
update..
i hope u continue it..
:)

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

wow.. welcome back.. I am glad you decided to write on ARHI.. it is beautifully written.. specially khushi's state of mind.. how you showed it through the way she packed..

feel so sorry for her.. the pain she went through..

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Awesome, you are a brilliant writer, thanks for the pm!

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Wow what an update!! Plz plz plz continue SOON

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

oh my God, nayika u r continuing this OS - wow wow i am so so happy with ur decision dear

fantastic update

thx for ur pms nayika

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

the update was fab 👏

she left Arnav thinking abt the name Shyam Arnav don't let her go u idiot 😡

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indiavizion

@indiavizion

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

i thought u would never conti...how broken she must have been after knowing, the last 6 months of her married was a complete lie, that he behaved as a husband and showered her with promises, love affection just so to betray and break her trust...

Plz do conti

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Wow after a long time m reading something written by you
I missed your work
Coming to the update
It was absolutely amazing
Arnav doesn't know what hit him vengeance is good but before that he should have clear the facts now he is left with nothing
Waiting to read what happens next