GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Short n beautiful update.Loved it so much.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

the track does look challenging... waiting to see how Mayank will perform 😊

Nicely written Fiza 😊

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Thanks a lot .. I am actually like the fact k many of u know this track n difficulty and liking it.. so glad.. here is the update.. sorry again haven't rplyd to any.. but next time paka…

Chapter: 13

It was the night of race…and they were departing in their car… benji and samrat wished them both best of luck...

They got in the car… n mayank turned to her..

Mayank: when u will strt behaving good with me

Nupur: now wht bad I have done to u…

Mayank: u did nt wish me luck …he said with a smirk…tacking her hairs….

Nupur: with u I need to wish myself luck…

Mayank: oh is that soo…

Nupur: ya it is soo…

Mayank: No problem… I will wish u that..

With that he leaned to her and kissed her,… she did kissed him back and than moved herself away

Nupur: be in ur sharp sense..

Mayank: ahhh.. with u beside me… its actually strange…

Nupur: what..

Mayank: I can loss my sense to u… and I can feel myself stregethen with u too…. Its confusing….

Nupur: such a chese n over dramatic line it was.. will u drive or ur dropping the idea to race…

Mayank: as u say sweet heart…
………………..
They reached the spot and it was dark and sand all around… there fire in cans.. and loud music.. smell of drugs and hell of fun going all around…

Reaching the lane of racer, as nocked out , now there were 8 racers left… which now will cut to 5- 4, depending this time on timing too…

Oki guys the track has been uploaded on the GPRS, u guys can check it.. u have 15 mins…and than race will began…so all around take ur positions…
They switched on the GPRS and the track that appears was same as they saw, yet the positioning of hurdles was change…

Mayank: dam… there is always sumthing just after the turn…

Nupur: ur looking at 11- 14…. There are multiple.. and the turns are dam ones…

Mayank: need to be very high alert there… but its awesome one… he smiled looking at her

Nupur: yup it is.. lets rock…

They hit knuckles..

Benji: mackz.. try and finish atleast second place

Mayank: dude.. I am planning to win this one….

Benji: he smiled… patted his back…best of luck..

Nupur: such a friend

Mayank: yup he is..

Oki guys the race strt in 5 mins, take ur position… line up…

On the track the top 3 of the last round will be infornt… and the other on the back…

The wheel were ready to roll, and he was pressing accelerator..just than something struck him and he was about to turn on the light they placed on to of there bonnet..

Nupur: no..she grip his hand…

Mayank: why…

Nupur: we will turn it on only when the turn will appears.. not before that.. ur seeing jack.. he has his lights.. and we do have them…else no car has put extra lights… donot help them

Mayank: hm… ur intelligent nupur… I am proud of u…

Nupur: gOD…. Ur just.. err… conc on track…

Mayank: I 'll defiantly try to…

the race began in …3….2….1..

they hit the accelerator.. and the race began..as soon as they strt to hit the track, just few miles away was thr first turn… she switch the lights on.. and here the turn appear, still they could see any hurdles there, it was tough to drive on such surface, the car was feeling like dragging itself

Mayank: man NOS is not gonna work here…freak

Nupur: donot even use it… just keep ur speed steady ..its the most important thing.. u just cant low it to much ..be steady

Mayank: I know ..i know…. Oh man…. Wht the *****…

there was small sand hill track in front and there was a narrow way at side… jack was infornt and he hit the hill and got through… there were a car more infornt of them..

Nupur: mayank take the narrow one..

Mayank: I am taking it.. u think im that stupid…

They took the naroow lane… and the other car as didn't have place… hit the hill.. but wasn't able to make it out from there, as its tires got stuck in the sand..

Mayank: yupiii… we got it.. woo hoo.. one down.. actually 2 down..

the track further on was not to much difficult, hurdles' mostly now was..certain abruptly appearing things that u have to cut, without damaging the speed of the car..

most of the cars were getting stuck on by other… so only 4 cars were left to compete..

Jack was leading yet mayank was not to much behind him… thought both of them were in good lead from others…

Nupur: macks u can grip the lead.. man ..u can do it

Mayank: donot u worry sweet heart .. I will and that so without ur cheatings..

Nupur: oh really u think so..get grip on track dude…

Mayank: nobody cant distract makcz.. when he is on edge of wining….

Nupur: 12 turn is cuming… we don't need switch the light off now…

Mayank: freak there double hills there… and no narrow out.. wht kinda track is this in street racing… Miami people are sure mad…

Nupur: oh really… and that's why ur with them to help u life out huh…

He chuckled

Mayank: donot get mad prince.. I am definitely not talking abt my girl…

Nupur: conc .. u have to keep steady and whn touch ground again there is hill, u car can get stuck…

Mayank: I know.. I know wht I can doo… and don't repeat conc cocn.. nobody distract me…

Nupur: oh really u think so…

Mayank: I bet so.. jacky here I cum…. He just a min away from

Nupur: so u bet u cant get distracted. she smirk

Mayank: no… brace ur self…we are gonna play my style dirty with jacky…

As soon as his car touch the ramp of the sand hill… and got of the ground…he hit the NOS..making it blew in air…

Mayank: hiii haaa….

Making the car almost fly in air.. as both of the hils were pretty close to each other, they got over them, plus when will hit the ground they will have steady speed, else they would have lost there speed… this not only made them cross it ..but also made them in lead…

Mayank: yupi.. we lead lady.. Nupsi…

He shuddered a bit a the sudden caressing of her fingers on his neck, moving up..reaching his chin..she was actually seducing him, this was her actual first touch willingly and that was making him loss

Mayank: get off ur hands..

Nupur: why… sumbody doesn't get distracted.

She slightly brushed her finger lower his lip..

Mayank: nupsi.. stop it… pls

He turned for mere second to her…

In her fun n bet, and in his not too much in sense state..they didn't realize they are heading to the last turn and the hurdle…. Jack was just getting close to them.. he was fuming as no new boy take lead from him…

They didn't saw yet.. his car was getting closer, and was about to hit them making them hit the sand heap at the side..when nupurs eys fall in fornt…
Nupur: MAYANK…. She hold the string turned it…

Yet mayank saw jack coming that way..he tured to other thing the accelerator more, making a sharp turn… yet the lost a bit spead..and jack got the lead back..hiting slightly there car, turning them around…

Mayank got back the control and rush to the line… yet it was now dam difficult to get back the speed and the lead…

Jack finished in first position and the got the second..

Reaching the finishing lane he stop his car and turn to her, almost glaring at her..

Nupur: what u were beting u don't get distracted….she leaned to him and said…

Mayank: lady ..this was really nasty.. and mark it.. I' ll make u pay for it…. He leaned to her too..

Nupur: aha really..

He pecked her and moved away..

Mayank: congrats we almost won…

Nupur: she chukled..almost that is..

Mayank: nupurrr

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

edited.

FIZAAA

wow wow wow wow wow wow wowww

amazing writing ... so thrilling ... loved it.

this update is no less than a movie ... too fast too furious ... u made me remember that movie every time during race.

the rack is so simple yet with too much hurdles ... Fiza, u brought the true feeling of road race ... amazing writing dear.

lol ... nupur was too funny ... per galat timing ho gya ... race ko second position me end karna para ... okay no prob ... better luck next time.

contune soon.

love ya ...

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

amazing update..

wow..

it's truly...

so adventurous..

very very nice..

fab update...

fiza di..

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

API...
OMG!!! dat was sooo Awesome...
i loved it to d coreee...
d race was Very Exciting...as i was actually feeling it...
loved it lodsss...
it was so much fun to read...
bt yeh kya...😲
Nupur ki wajah se woh 1st nhi ho paye...🥺
nhiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!! arey mere Hero ko 2nd bana diya very bad pehli bar mujhe Nupur acchi nhi lagi...*hmph*🥺🥺🥺
🥺now me too want Mayank to make her pay for it...waise i wont mind if he does so in Romantic way...😉😳🤣
loved it lodsss
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

wowowww. nupur flirt karne ke liye aur koi time nehi mila? love it

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

hahaha...what a part yaar...really awesome...😆😆

nupur seducing mayank...sach vo MJHT wala part yaad aagaya...🤣🤣

loved it...continue soon...

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Daffo why can't they just use PITT lane..

nice update ..so they are couple now ..means nupur responding back to his kiss. how romantic😳

and nupur seducing mayank in running race great..or koi gajh nahi milli..

now it's mayank turn to take revenge ..jope romantic ho..

Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Oho kya update tha...Just BANG ON dii...👏👏...Seeti bajaoing...😆
I really liked the idea of giving the track pic...it made the whole race more real...And i ws actually feeling like racing...nt in real...in games.😆..Goshh how i miss gaming NFS...need my PS2 back frm my bro now...
And woa dii wat nupur did ws cheating...She made my hero 2nd frm 1st position...And now i want a pay back...😉😈
Loved loved loveddd this part dii..
Marvelous...❤️
Plz cont soon...🤗🤗

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