SS: How do I love thee? Ch 4 pg 26

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

res... :D <3

Lax babes??!! 🤣

Etta James??!!! 🤣 X infinity!!!

(Though I love her voice, its bizarre to imagine Laxmi with her voice!!😆 )

And a kinky Laxmi is still more hard to imagine!! 😆

And hiccups because of memory bubble?? Amazing connection. . . . 😳
Poor Payal, though. . . . 😆

Arnav and atheism can never part ways, I guess!! 😛

Thanks for such a wonderphull update, Vidhya. . . .
Hopefully you update soon-ish!!! 😉 😃 😳

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

awesome...

it was good.. :)

yes.. munchy has helped all of us... ;-)

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Hey Vidhya! (I hope that's ur name)

It was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!👏

I really love the way you narrate the whole story.

Ha Ha! interesting to read the story from Laxmi's POV. Lax for Laxmi ??😆

And what is this AA thing? I didn't understand that part.😕

Hiccups and memory bubble. Nice connection. ⭐️ Phew! Atleast I'm happy no one talks about me in heaven coz it's ages since I last hiccuped. And the whole convo between Khushi and Payal was really nice. Payal here seems a lot smarter than the actual show.

Bhains ki nikkar! I love it. Tell thanks to Munchy from my side for that phrase. It sounds decent.🤣 (I'm gonna share it with my friends. It's hilarious)

And I love this Beckwith! 😆

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Oh man! How, how how do you come up with such classic one-liners?

Munchy's bhains Ki Nicker was classic! And this just made me laugh even louder!

Huh! Really! Akash Jiju. I'd have never thought it. And Arnavji. He never even completes that stupid What The of his. Someday I'm going ask him what's at the end of that What The!" said Khushi feelingly.

"I think someday he might show you!" said Payal smugly.

🤣 🤣 🤣

Thanks for the PM! :D

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madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: molten_lava
Hey Vidhya! (I hope that's ur name)
It was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!👏
I really love the way you narrate the whole story.
Ha Ha! interesting to read the story from Laxmi's POV. Lax for Laxmi ??😆
And what is this AA thing? I didn't understand that part.😕
Hiccups and memory bubble. Nice connection.⭐️Phew! Atleast I'm happy no one talks about me in heaven coz it's ages since I last hiccuped. And the whole convo between Khushi and Payal was really nice. Payal here seems a lot smarter than the actual show.
Bhains ki nikkar! I love it. Tell thanks to Munchy from my side for that phrase. It sounds decent.🤣(I'm gonna share it with my friends. It's hilarious)
And I love this Beckwith!😆

Thanks.😊

AA: On Earth=Alcoholics Anonymous.

AA: (In my fictitious heaven!): Atheists Anonymous. Hope that helps.

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oh.petite.one

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

that was brilliant Vidhya... loved it ⭐️

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Vistaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

It has been just such a pleasure reading your SS, Maxine...and am almost thankful that I didn't come upon this sooner...for this way I got to read all four chapters in a sitting...😊

What can I say? Beautiful, wry, dry, soppy, laugh-out--loud, tongue-firmly-in-cheek, fantastical, solidly scientific, deeply literary, absurdly funny, pathos, bathos...what creativity!!!! *shakes head*

Your piece of heaven appears to be strangely welcoming...(something that cannot be said for all the other versions of heaven you read about...😛)...I loved it!!! Warts, farts and all!!

Two genuine lol moments: Nietzche and Christopher Hitchens!!!!😆

And luvvved Limbo for Shyamwa...👏😛

Thank you so much for this and can't wait to read the next part.

P.S.: Your 55 word story worked beautifully...the brevity was rich with meaning!!!

P.P.S: Do you give writing classes? Can I enroll?😃

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@lexaxel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

"I told her you'd give her a back rub!" Laxmi tittered cruelly,

Hahahahahaaa...that was hilarious😃...actually I was laughing all the way thru. Everybody with a OS is giving Payal a backbone...something I guess all of us want to see in the serial.

And the thought of Arnav reluctantly attending AA is 🤣. I can just imagine his expression when he is sitting thru it😃.

Wonderful update Vidhya👍🏼!!!!

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123460

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

awww that was so cute...i loved it completely
This story is so unpredictable, im always at the edge of my seat while reading this
Plz Continue soon coz i'll b eagerly waiting for the next part