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Posted: 12 years ago
Vi 🤗🤗🤗

Me reading this FF now... and I thot I wud comment only I finish all the parts... but I coundnt help with this one... this was superb lines 😆



"well then, go tell her that I am not kunti!"she threw it back at him.
"Kunti?"
"to get pregnant just with looks from suryadev"
"What do you mean ?"
"I mean I cant possibly get pregnant if you only keep looking at me when you think I am asleep!" she finished quickly throwing him annoyed looks before walking towards the bathroom.He was clean bowled by her comment, but soon broke into a grin thinking of her comment while throwing the kit into the wardrobe.
"She doent seem as naive as she looks.." He told himself.


Ok.. now off to next part... 😃

*edited*
I loved part 10... very elaborative and nicely written !

*edited again*
awww... loved part 11 too 😃 so i think this is gonna be a habit.. so me wud just shut up and read all ... 😛
Edited by monsi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is sad that they have to do this just to see what Shyam is up too :(

thanks u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update...👏
Shyam is sick..Dunno wats his plans are nw...😡
Hope evrything goes on well...😃
thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
loving the story
continue soon
thanx for the pm
udaymanyata07 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏thanks...loved it👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...gripping updates 👏
i wonder who is this shyam's man in RM??
god he knows that it is staged...wonder what will happen now!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ugh Shyam is a mega sicko
I wonder who he sent to the rm.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vi 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Can you believe I read all the parts last night till 1am... yeah .. that's how good and gripping it was... the story has advanced so nicely... thriller suspense drama... all in one... me loving it.. and now eagerly waiting for the next update... !!!

Update de daal Jaldiii 😆

Cheers,
Monsi
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have read last three parts in one go
and loved them all
great effort dear
and thank you for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful wen is nxt update!!!

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