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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Please keep writeing and add me to your PM list when more is available?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Song suggestion - kuch kuch hota hai.. :)
love the chapter..
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almost done... hmmm...šŸ˜
i need a break for a minute or two before my heart pops out. šŸ˜•
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WARNING. MATERIAL IS HOT. KEEP A FIRE EXTINGUISHER NEAR YOU AT ALL TIMES.

previously: arnav and khushi make shyam jealous. akash and payal are back. shyam is getting furious seeing khushi and arnav this close together. arnav asks khushi for a dance.


arnav and khushi hold hands and walk towards the center of the dance floor.

the musicians start off with the soft tune...
arnav twirls khushi around once and holds one hand. places the other on her waist. khushi places her other hand on his shoulder.

arnav smiles while looking at her and pull her more tightly in. until their stomachs are touching. even air cannot seperate them now.

both start to lose themselves in each others eyes. the lights in the restaurant are dimed. everyone is silent. a spot light is shined on them.
khushi starts to breathe heavily. arnav can feel her heart beating fast. he starts to sway side to side. taking one step fwd. then the next. khushi.. without evening noticing
dances in perfect sync with him. kya karain.. dil ko dil say raah hoti hai. (both hearts can talk amongst themselves)


Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan

both are talking to each other through their eyes. swaying from side to side on the dance floor. nothing is between them. dono ki dharkanain ki unki zubaan ban chuki hai. (their heart beats are now talking to each other)

arnav remembers the night before the marriage.. when khushi went missing. how his heart started to speak... and it said only one name... khushi...

khushi tries to push her self away. arnav lets go of her waist. but doesnt let go of her hand. khushi turns around and looks at him. a soft breeze starts to blow her hair.
he pulls her back in. he has his arm wrapped around her. and he back is how facing him. ek dosray ki bahon main samaaah jana do. dori na annaay do. (wah.. i should be a poet)
he slowly slides his other hand on top of her stomach. under her sari. touching her bare skin. pushing her more tightly against him. he turns her around..
and places her hand on his shoulder. she puts the other hand on the other shoulder.

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

she shys awayand turns around. he grabs her hand and starts to twirl her around. with each twirl as she approaches to see his face she slows down a bit. then as his face passes. quickely turns back around.
nazrain unkay chehray say na hat sakeen. (she couldnt move her eyes from his face) he pulls her in.


Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi
Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi

he turns her around so she faces the other way. and now has both of her hands in his hands. wrapping his hands with hers around her. fingers are intertwinned. both of them have their eyes closed. he pushes his chest outwards. making hers move out as well.moving his arms out with hers.
as if they are exhaling together.chests are both out and arms and hands are held with eachothers wide apart. they both move their chests in and he wraps his hands back around her.
they slowly breathe and move their chest out again. arms move out as they move their chests. they both come back in and he wraps his arms around her while holding her hands. they do this for the third time. breathing heavily.
ek dosre ko mehsoos kar thay ja rahay hain. (feeling each others presence)


Mujhse Keh Rahi Hai Ki Badhne De Bekhudi
Mil Yoon Ki Daud Jaayein Nas Nas Mein Bijliyaan

she turns around to face him. he places one hand under her head and the other around her waist. she places one hand on his arm that is around the waist and the other along her side. while staring deeply into each others eyes, she starts to slide down. and he is
bending down to allow her to lay down. she moves her head back and closes her eyes. he bends in... placing a soft... gentle kiss on her neck. she takes a deep breath in.. and turns her head to the side.
he raises her back up. she opens her eyes and only sees the love in his.

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

she holds one of his hands and places the other hand on his shoulder. he doesnt want there to be any space between them. no seperation. its their time. both softly and slowly move side to side.
their hearts are beating together. he places her hand on his other shoulder. and she rests her head on his chest. he wras the other hand on her waist as well. both sway side to side. side to side..
he is breathing in the her aromatic scent... and she is listening to his heart.

Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand
Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand


he puts the other hand on her waist and moves the one that was tightly wrapped around her on the side. he picks her up. she straightens her hands on his shoulders. she bends one leg up and bends her head back.
assmaan ko mehsoos kar rahi hai khushi. (she is feeling the sky). his love has raised her so she can touch the sky. he starts to turn around in a circle.

Uljhi Uljhi Saanson Ki Aawaaz Hai Pasand
Moti Luta Rahi Hai Saawan Ki Badliyaan

he slowly brings her back down to the ground. like a petal delicately falls from a rose. saansain uljhi uljhi si hogae hain. she breathes more and more deeply. he loves the effect he is having on her.
the winds have changed for both of them. koi nafrat nahin. sirf ek dosray kay ho jana cha thay hain. (no more hatred. they just want to become each others)

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain

she again placed her hands on his shoulders. he placed his on her waist. pulling her more and more in. thakay kabhi alag na ho pae.
they just kept on swaying side to side. looking into each others eyes.

Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan .

she moves one of her hands into his hair. fingers spread apart. he slowly moves one hand up her back and under her head. he gently dips her down. she pulls his head in. he tilts his head.
and places his ear on her heart and closes his eyes. he could hear her heart. dhadkan ki zubaan nay banayaan kiya... sirf uska naam...

the music had finished. lights were turned back on. but they did not notice. he just wanted to hear his name being spoken by her heart. and she wanted him to stay close to her heart.

the people in the restaurant started to clap. cheering had filled the restaurant. the singer took the mic and started to speak. they both got up and hessitantly let go of each other.
khushi started to fix her sari and arnav started to look around.

singer: is gana ka asli matlab aj samgh main aya dostoon. jab aisay do pyar karnay wala hoon. to dil ki zubaan hi kafi hoti hai. a big round of applause for our romeo and juliet of this evening.
( i have finally understood the actual meaning of this song today. when you have two people love each other like this. then the hearts speak to each other. and that is enough for them. a big round of
applause for our romeo and juliet this evening)

precap: shyam gets HURT ... muah ha ha... :D

dont forget to hit the like button but do please do leave comments. they really help motivate a person. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Wow hun that was mind-blowing !! I loved it !! Please keep a fore extinguisher by your side lol that just made my life :) please add me to your pm list .. I would love to read further updates <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Really felt bad for wat happened with ur family. Hope everything gets back to normal soon.
The update was superb. I really like that shyam is getting jealous n arhi r so close. And i hv three romantic songs in my mind if u like any u can see:
1. Tumse hi(jab we met)
2. Tum ho (rockstar)
3. Saiyaan (agneepath)
hope u like them.
Hey i was a lil late in cmmenting the next part was up. But no probs.
The update was such a romantic n passionate one. I mean u actually made ppl understand the actual meaning of song so nicely .
It was just superb i'm just speechless.
Edited by arhi-fan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
awesome loved it that was so sexy loved it thanks for the pm that was so cute love the precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Yayyy! You used the song I suggested!! Loveeeddd their dance! Awesome job!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So cute. Loved how snake was big J.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My fire extinguisher is empty! šŸ˜‰ I wish my BF was as romantic, but he's super clumsy 😭

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