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Posted: 13 years ago
about time snake got a good beating. cant wait for the next update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ur FF is amazing i cant believe i didnt read it before ... its so well written amazing work and btw Get well soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks guys. i should be home by tonight hopefully. then when every thing settles down, i will get to see my laptop. oh how i am missing it :(

thanks for all of your well wishes. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: freezie

thanks guys. i should be home by tonight hopefully. then when every thing settles down, i will get to see my laptop. oh how i am missing it :(


thanks for all of your well wishes. :)



Thats great news :), im glad your better... Btw i knw its hard to stay away from the laptop and the forum 😆 its addictive. But then it helps get rid of boredum. Tc btw eagerly waitin for the nxt part of the FF ... Ur s great writer :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great FF, It was so intresting that I read it in one go. I am eagerly waiting for next part !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14.
soo soo soo soo sorry for the delay. but i absolutly forgot about it. was enjoying the actual epis too much these days. :D ... but here is the next part as promised. :)

Ab thak:


arnav has beaten up shyam. YAYYY. Shyam tried to force himself on khushi. Whatelse.. umm.. right. Anjali akash and payal are at the door. Arnav is puching shyam like mad, when he hears a scream its anjali.


Anajli: chote!!!

arnav's hand stops mid air. He has a fire that has not been vanquished yet. He wasnt done with shaym yet. But he couldnt finish what needed to be done. His sister was there. She wasnt in the state to this. She wouldnt understand what he did. And why. She just wouldnt.


He let out a hump and dropped shaym on the ground. Sham was now unconscious. He was still breathing. Only because of all of the prayers tat his wife had done for him. For this worthless piece of flesh. He didnt deserve it. But she didnt know. She saved his life. In more ways that one. Only.. only if he would be able to realise this. But now, it was too late. There was no way arnav was going to let this creep return to his sisters life. He would rather wipe away her tears than let khushi feel unsafe.


HOW DARE HE. Arnav kept on thinking. His eyes had a fire burning inside of this. His mind was filled with hatred. Because of shaym, he didnt believe khushi. He tormented her. He forced her into marrying him. He broker her heart into a million pieces again and again. Until her pure heart became dust.


Arnav turned around to find khushi. Akash was there. He would be able to handle anjali. But it was khushi who needed him most right now. Khushi... needed him. That is all he could think of at that moment. Khushi...


he looked to the cornor of the room and quickly walked towards her.

She was shivering in fear. Tears were frantically flowing down her soft pale cheeks. She was in shock. Unrhythmic breathing... not blinking for a second. Just held his jacket with both of her hands up close to her heart. Arnav cupped her face with his hands.


Arnav: khushi.. KHUSHIII...can you hear me... KHUSHIII KYA TUM MUJHE SUN SAK THI HO?


He held her shoulders and started to shake her. It was necessary to get her out of this shock.


Arnav: KHUSHIII.. GOD DAMMIT.. SNAP OUT OF IT...

arnav remembered their first holi. How she said that her heart always beated faster whenever he was near her. But he was standing right there. And she wasnt moving. Not even a twiched. Arnav couldnt bear to see her like this. He wrapped on of his hands around her head and the other around her shoulder. Maybe.. just maybe.. if she heard his heart beat.. maybe...

their hearts connected them. Their hearts beated only for each other. Only if she could hear his heart beat. Hear his heart calling out her name.. khushi... khushi... khushi...only if.


He held her tightly to his chest.


Anjali quickly walked towards shaym. She fell to the ground … and before turning around to see where her chote was.. she held her hand. And faitned right on top of her husbands barely breathing body.

Akash and payal ran toawrds anjali. DI... DI...


akash tried to shake her shoulders to get her up. But she wasnt responding. He turned his head towards arnav. And saw khushis state. He was shocked to see what he was seeing. Khushi, wearing arnav's jacket, barely breathing properly, not blinking. Just in a state of shock. Did jijaji.. no he couldnt have.. askash kept on thinking.


Payal: khushi... khushi.. arnav ji.. khushi ko kya howa hai... kya shyam ji nay.. khushi... kya tum hummay sun sak thi ho? Khushi.. (what happened to khushi.. did shyam … khushi. Can you hear me?)

payal ran towards khushi. Arnav refused to move back. He wouldnt let anyone come near HIS khushi. No one.


Payal put her left palm on khushis cheeck. Khushi... payal started to cry...


payal: hum jaan thay hain. S hyam ji hi itni jiri howi harkat kar sak thay hain. (only shyam can do such a low act.)


akash was shocked to hear what was coming out of his wife mouth. Did jijaji actually... akash looked confused. Eye brows tensed. He looked towards anjali again. And picked her up. She put her on the bed.


Arnav looked at payal.

Arnav: payal tum aur akash di ko daikh lo. Main khushi ko sambhaal longa. (payal, you and akash take care of di. I will take care of khushi)


payal went towards anjali. Akash looked at her. With teary eyes, she looked at akash. And nodded her head. Akash's suspicion was almost confirmed.


Arnav just held khushi tightly to close to his heart. He was not going to let her go. He had to first control him self. Control his heat beat. Control his breath. But how could he. The person who lived in his heart, who was in his every breath, was in this state because of him. He closed his eyes. A tear slowly escaped his eye, and fell onto khushis cheeck. Right below her eyes. It was as if her pain was in his heart and his tears were in his eyes. Khushi slowly moved her head up. Without blinking she looked up to his face. His eyes were closed, but he was still crying. The sound of his pain-filled heart was echoing in her eyes. Each beat had only her name. The tune that his heart was beating to, spoke of sorrow, regret, pain, and yet she could hear love. Amongst all that pain, she could hear the tune of love.

Khushi closed her eyes. And slowly wrapped her arms around his back. All she could remember was him telling her...


"hamari dharkanain... ek ho ga ti hain.. (our heart beats become one)...


precap. Anjali is seen by doc but doesnt wake up. Shaym gets arressted. (hawalth lath main bechara hawa aur lath.. dono khaiga. :D )

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was lovely dear...thnx 4da pm...m finally first in commenting somewhere...yaeehh
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved how arnav went to khushi and taken care to bring her out loved it continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
You're back!! Yay!
Loved the update! Can't wait for more.. Hope Anjali recovers, and more importantly, wakes up to the fact that her husband is a creep, who deserves what he got!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Missed u n ur ff a lot. It was just awesome. Just loved it.

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