do jism ek jaan -LAST PART_ parts 3-15.

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ASADsweetZOYA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

awesome update

loved it dear

thnx 4 the pm

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umama shahid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

hey i was almost dying to read ur os di. enjoyed it thoroughly waiting for the next part.

thanx for the pm

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ishita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

awesome...
waiting for the next part...
arnav khushi together in bed at night...wow...

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suadvani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

awww hes melting and realising more and more he was wrong :)

lovely writing!!

thank you!

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.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Can't wit for the next.part.. thanks force the pm..

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Kiran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

This one was brilliant..loved it..poor Shayam..😆

looking forward for next part..plzz PM me..

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ayshanoel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

wish u would just keep going on and on... update fast please... this is sooo good tht i dnt wnna stp reading :P

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natali1999

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

PLzzz continue soon i just can't wait plz

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

you all scared me you know. becuase when i posted this yesterday. there were over 200 views in less than 10 mins. but no comments or likes. :S

but it is nice seeing all of this commets guys. thanks. :) i will try to post sooner and sooner. its just things are slowly getting back to normal. having to manage personal like (aka this forum, only form of personal like i now keep :D) and family responsibilities.

will hopefully have something posted by tonight. its morning here.

btw. i know i have a few scenes in my mind, but if there is anything you guys want to include do let me know. BUT BUT BUT. i do not intend on going into the full detail of the FULL thing. reason is very simple. what ever can be shown on tv, plus maybe maybe a it more. will be written. there are also a lot of minor audiences that do read this. waisay hi polution pehla howa hai. why contribute to it. :) let me know what you guys think. ok. until then... happy day/night dreaming.

freezie :D