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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#951

hahah loved the last line!! Go arnav! go khushi!!! oH man shyam is a dealer?!?!?! You have me waiting for the next chapter impatiently!!! awesome

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#952

Absolutely loved it! You write wonderfully! Please continue soon!

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#953

I loved the update. Now, I am thinking that maybe Karan worked with Shyam. I love Khushi's detective mind. She really should have majored in criminology. It was an amazing update. I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue soon.

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#954

HMMM what is that snake up to?! AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#955

Glad u updated. Was waiting impatiently..Some random thoughts on ur update:

That was a teaser of arnav and kushi at the beginning. So they are going for an honeymoon. Can't wait for kushi to realize her love for arnav..

I loved kushi's dad's profession. An undercover officer. 😎

So Kushi is digging up shyam's past.. a drug dealer. So how is it related to kushi?...through her dad...an undercover officer ?..Let the mystery be unveiled. Shyam must have an hold on karan 'cz he was a drug addict/ he supplied drugs to karan?.

Well..i should stop my thoughts on where the story is going..as you are doing a fabulous job dear..good going.👏. My humble request is don't keep us waiting for too long..'cz it wears down the excitement you have created..but no pressures..it is your story and you have to be in a mood to write it..understands perfectly..

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Kruti Patel

@love_kuki

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#956

Very good update! Loved Khushi's snoopy bit & she's fierce character.. normal girl but with tremendous brain power & confidence!! She knows what she saw wasn't illusion.. she has this feeling something's majorly wrong here.. & best part is she's not gonna give up untill she finds out!!

Love the fact that Arnav in ur FF is not some doll.. who would not be suspicious of wrong happenings around him just because he loves his sis! Love him for following up & actually discussing it with Khushi.. But the best part abut him is the fact that he loves Khushi to infinity.. He blindly trusts her & her innocence!! He knows she won't lie abut anything bcoz she doesn't have anything to hide.. So, he would always stand by her whatever happens!! Also, he would be there to protect her forever & make sure she's fine & no harm comes near her!! I love Arnav in ur FF!!

I'm loving the pace of ur FF!! specially, with the way ur slowly revealing things from Arnav & Khushi's perspective.. & ur letting them dig the truth & reveal it to us, the readers! Rather than letting us know & revealing the suspense to us & then let Arnav-Khushi dig it out for themselves!!

Ur FF is very well balanced.. Right amount of suspense, right amount of romance & brilliantly well written content!! In one word Marvelous!!

Loving it.. Plss update fast!! Can't wait for the next one already!! Keep writing..