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JV21

@JV21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

Awww...finally Arnav confessing to himself that he is indeed in love with Khushi...that was so good...

Also loved the way Arnav told Karan that he didnot appreciate anyone talking to HIS wife like that!!! yay!! that was something!!!

loved the update...Khushi is so so practical...I'm glad that she was not affected by Karan's presence and the way she explained it to Arnav was really good...I'm sure even she has started having feelings for Arnav...not just physical attraction but for the person that Arnav is ...and that was quite evident in the last chapter...

Thanks for the pm!!

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s2612

@s2612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

arnav loves khushi...but wat abt khushi?
thanks for pm...and pls update soon!!!

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anjaliarnav

@anjaliarnav

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#353

DIS FF IS JZ SUPERB..I M LOVIN IT...JZ FANTASTIC...I LOVE ARNAV'S CHARACTER A LOT...PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON...

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@fanAR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#354

12 pages OH MY GOSH ...

You are on mod of killing women , i am hoping this will happen soon or warna i am spamming 😃

okay coming to updated , loved it

aww Arnav is jealouse , don't reallt know the excat reaosn but he is .. he want her with him forever , love that yaar

i like how Khushi don't really care for Karan and the way she eplained to him , i was like hayye she is so understanding . nice job with writing dear.

i shall comment tomorrow again since it's 2 here and i am so sleepy!

anythough you are an awesome writer

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#355

Good one. So Arnav realizes !!thats gr8

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Oh my lord.

That was absolutely fantastic.

You just matched the readers thoughts with Khushi and Arnav's emotions through this chapter.

The irritation I felt with Karan mirrored Khushi's and the fear I have of Karan possibly coming in between them was so beautifully captured in Arnav's thoughts. Spiffing brilliant.

I am so scared of Karan and his possible entry into their life and disturbing this peace they have found...and Arnav's doubts dont help matters. Really hope Khushi gives him a reason and encourages him to believe in them.

And also I have a feeling Karan is hiding something...his weight loss and dark circles seem to be pointing at the fact that he may be sick or something...lets see.

His realization of loving Khushi was so beautifully put. I just loved the flow of the words. And the last part where he just wants to hold her because he fears losing her...sigh.

Please update soon. :)

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Cant wait to find out why Karan left Khushi but I hope that Karan wont affect thier relationship that Arnav and Khushi have bulit😳

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Kareena1994

@Kareena1994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

it was an great update and thanks for it.

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Shru

@shru.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

What an update... I'm loving it Arnav's in love with Khushi, I love the way he cares for her. update sooon...Love it a lot! especially the way you write it!😊