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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-
Fabulous update!

Thanks so much:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: dmg123
Both the last parts were so AWESOME!!!...I especially loved the ending of this one! and I also liked what Arnav said to Anjali about Khushi...I hope Khushi was able to understand his message.
It was also very funny how the guestroom bathroom was "out of order"!...

Great job! and continue soon!
-Simran

Thanks! yes, what Arnav told Anjali is really pivotal for the story, since of course Anjali had for a long time been the most important thing in his life. By saying he trusted Khushi in looking after his Di is a show of extreme trust, coz he wouldn't entrust her to just anyone:)

And yeah, I had so much fun writing about Arnav's midnight antics:p Thanks for appreciating:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

awsome part...😊

anjali know abt shayam..???or its just khushi thinking lyk dat...

continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
Amazing update! So is this a new twist you are planning? Anjali wasn't worried that Shyam hadn't called her for two whole days??? Do I smell something fishy here?!?!?

And the last part - so beautiful..!! Loved it!!!

Thank you:) :) :) I really look forward to your feedback, it really means a lot:)

And as for the new twist- I guess all I can say is wait and watch :) Anjali's part in this plot will unfold more slowly so...

And good luck for your exams:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: subiscs
i loved it..cos it was more of arnav's realisation on what love is..:):):):) awesome update!!!

Thanks:) yes, Arnav can't fully win Khushi back without fully understanding what love is in the first place:) Thanks again for liking

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Amazing update... I really love the way you describe their feelings and emotion

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: varshapan
loved the part where arnav opens up to all the love around him... to all the people who love him apart from his di and khushi... thx for the fast update :)

Thank you so much for liking:) I'm trying to show a gradual progression from ASR to Arnav, and hopefully it's working! And of course Arnav needs to understand and accept love himself if he expects Khushi to do the same, so I hope I'm getting there:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
That was very beautiful!

Yeah, not completely romantic but it has its wave all over.!

Final act of Arnav and Buaji screeching towards that, was so nice.

Thanks for the PM.

Thank You! I really look forward to your feedback every time and I'm glad you appreciate my work:)

And as for Buaji...I've been dying to let her beloved Nandkishore make an appearance in the FF and this scene gave me the perfect opportunity :p