Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

eee he kissed her cheek!! second time and still in shock!!!

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Lovely update. I totally get it that Khushi needs her time and Arnav needs to woo her back and prove his love for her.

Loved it and waiting for the next update, thanks for the PM

Dee

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Anjali's reaction is weird, does she know something 😕

I'm glad the Arnav is trying to show Khushi what she means to him through both actions and words and love his gesture both with what he said to Anjali about trusting Khushi and his very un-Arnavlike public display of love when he kissed her and said bye.

That should show Khushi that Arnav has changed and means what he said

Dee

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Amazing update!👏I loved how you can portray each characters feeling down to every last detail, especially the part when Arnav was waiting for Khushi to come out and Khushi's thoughts in the car.

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asumi

@asumi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

i caught up with 17 of your chapters now!!! and it was sooo damn beautifully put forth!!! all of them were incredible-
him watching her, Khushi not forgiving him, the fairly lights and false sky in room, bangles!

the last kiss on her cheek stole my heart!!!!
you have kept all the characters in sync with their nature and i loved it!

Arnav Khushi payal akash! and Anjali!! amaizing!
Khushi observing anjali's reaction, Arnav doing tiniest of the things for her,
Akash- Palya's honeymoon photos- giving a little of realization to arnav!!
every single thing

LOVED IT!

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Just lovely! Loved how Arnav is trying to woo KKGSR!

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

that was beautifully writen, such a sweet update.
well his sanka devi's sanek is deffinately rubbing off on him, loved that bit...thanx for the pm.

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inanyregard

@inanyregard

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

the story is progressing so well! In each chapter I discover a new facet of the characters. Great work!

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

it was a beautiful update 😊😊 loved how Arnav got emotional on realizing he now has a complete family...all thanks to Khushi 😊 n so glad that Arnav told Khushi clearly how much he trusts her 😊
the ending was adorable!!!