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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Awesome awesome awesome! The way the update changed from angst, guilt, pain, love and ohhh.. that smirk!! Lovvveddd it!!!!!

All the best for your exams dear! Will be waiting for your next update!

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

u wrote that and actually dared to wonder f it was good?or of u had done justice to it? trust me when i say it was perfect! so perfectly beautiful!!

u got across the torment in Khushi's broken heart, her being scared even to hope, lest she could be broken further..and the way he felt broken for what he had done to her..how he dealt with it!! u wrote evrything so perfectly!

oh i am loving this ! do continue soon!,..

PS: best of luck 4 ur exams!!😳

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

omg it awesome...cnt wait for da rest

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Fantastic!

Please PM when you update!

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suadvani

@suadvani

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Wow what a fantastically written chapter.. Seriously am hooked cannot wait to read the next part.

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Quite Sweet Part =) Loved Reading Khushi's POV . 😳

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

BIG thanks to all those who wished me luck for my exams...much appreciated🤗 and an even BIGGER thanks to all those who liked the update:)

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fauzmalik

@fauzmalik

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

A silent reader here on the forum, i read ur SS in one go, I LOVE IT, I love the angst at the beginning, love the way you write/describe the emotions that ASR/Arnav is going thru, what he is thinking, i should say love how you describe arnav's perspective too, not just khushi's. Its a brilliantly portrayed SS. I just love the way you have created a balance between ASR's and Arnav in this SS, there are traces of both ASR and Arnav in your SS, n I love that, I dont get to see that too often in the serial, its been either ASR or Arnav, not a mix of both the way as he is in ur SS, i love this version of him :-D in short, i LOVE ur SS,

I like how ASR has realised he needs to make upto khushi big time and he is going to have a hard time doing that. Its very realistic :-)

PS good luck with the mock exams!

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Loving this so far but hope Khushi doesn't forgive him so easily :(

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Really loved it!

I'm glad Arnav regrets what he done to her and is now making up for it. Awww bless khushi debating how Arnav had ended up next to her the night before.

Can't wait to see what happens next.