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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

luved it.

beautifully written.

aww arnav tries the jabeli.

continue soon looking forward to see khushi past.

arnav and khushi coming together soon.

thx a lot for the pm.

looking forward to the next update.

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

i enjoyed it very much 😃

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Hahhaha He ate them loved the update

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Omg yayyy!
Loooved this update so much! Just because of Arnav and his fabulously layered character. And also love how youve incorporated the characters, like how Akash and Arnav know each other and how Payal is getting married to Akash so they are bound to meet again even without their regular run ins haha. And you used the jalebi's so well and at the end when Arnav tries them I felt like he was accepting Khushi and her presence in his life. So basically the perfect update as usual! Now I'm gonna go fan girl over Arranged Marriage ;)
Thank you!! Xxx

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Khushi's new mantra for her jalebis "No one can just have one",came true.
Loved the update.Now that Aakaash is engaged to Paayal there will be more interactions between Arnav and Khushi.
Waiting for the next one.
Thanks for the PM.

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

ha ha so here jalebi has a major role in their love story...im happy that he is not diabeyic...so he can try it...so nani and anjali already liked khushi even before seeing her. and aakash and payal is also there to engaged,...nw arnav got another reson to know more about khushi...i loved this chapter..it was sweet...

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Aww this was too adorable :D

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

As i've mentioned before this is my favorite story from you! And Arnav hates sweets just like me!

It's the perfect combination of suspense, romance and action ...(AlsoItHasArnavInAUniform😆)

She sweet and naive. He's strong and Khadoos. The perfect set up for a love story!

"Taking another bite, Arnav moved back towards his room, the thoughts of the girl who made the Jalebis invading his thoughts. "

HA! somebody's smitten... And what's this about Khushi's scandalous affair? With whom? Shyam? He's married? Someone else? Alright, alright, i'll wait for you to unveil it 😆

And i noticed something Anjalie is Arnav's cousin..? Interesting...

I absolutely LOVE the Arnav-Khushi interactions... so subtle so sweet... Actually i'm pretty sure i love evrything about this story 😊

Cheers

-Shri-

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

So Payal officially engaged to Aakash now! Good.. Now there is way for Arnav and Kushi to meet each other..

The way she was feeling for Arnav when that lady told about her marriage and disregarded it due to that fact he is married. Is he really married? He said no wife, does that mean he's married but no wife or no marriage at all.. I know I'm forgetting something here, have to go and read back! May be somewhere in chapter 2 or 3??

Ha ha! The jalebi convo is real fun to read.. Take it and stare at it if you want..! Ha ha😆 Finally he is gonna eat one via Aakash??

Thanks for the PM, K!

P.S: Can a person really hate sweets? Please give me his address, i need a regular tuition from him.. I can't control myself from grabbing one if I see it!😭

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Oh god! Finally u updated dis one! I was eagerly waiting 4 dis ff's update 4 a long tym..uff!
m lovin hw u r developing d characters n building d story,slowly pulling all d threads togthr..pls update dis one soon..!