FF: Caught (ArHi) THREAD 2 LINK POSTED! - Page 22

*sigh* I'm going to go right ahead and state the obvious. He likes saving her and she likes being saved by him! :P Are all men born with the protectiveness gene?

The whole operation and the chase was intense. You had me hooked. I cringed when I read Shyamu's dialogues. "Not good" was the thought in my head.

I was drooling on the description you gave about how Arnav looked while waiting for those ppl! :D

res. had to read the entire chapter before commenting... sigh... khushi... always in wrong place at wrong time... and we have the great raizada to save her all the time!!! maybe I should start getting into trouble for arnav to come save me took... ;)))) loved ittt :)

Lovely update. It was written beautifully. Arnav and Khushi were awesome.
Thanks for the PM.

Res

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This story has made to the list of my all time fav!!! I am loving it more and more after every update... :) The plot, the way you write, the action, the suspence- I love it all. A Grade, K

This chapter pretty much had everything! The action, the trash talk, more insights into the plot, light romance- puuurr-fect!

And you write action pretty convincingly actually. Many writers I've read write really well but fail when it comes to fight scenes... But you nailed it... And really doesn't matter if it's isn't very accurate 'cause you had me at the edge of my seat!

I want to quote some scenes I liked but my stupid phone is acting all weird. Sheesh. Koi bath nahi.

I always swoon when to describe Arnav in a uniform but I don't know why I also swooned when you described his disguise.. It was oddly attractive... But then again i'l find Arnav attractive in a potatoe sack :D

And protective Arnav...Awww. <3 I love the way you're slowly but surely developing their chemistry!

Khushi would have totally beaten Arnav if he hadn't stopped her. Feisty Khushi is always the way to go. She can take care of herself and she's a fighter... Loved her characterization!

All in all loved the update!!!

PS- I updated my comment On Scandal

He cares so much for her!! very sweet!
Grt update :)

Great Update!!!

wow...krani...thats really a treat for weekend...its an action packed movie...loved iit...
Cheerzzz...

The entire action scene was too good...I could literally imagine Arnav like that...and arnav-khushi scene was fantastic as well...loved the way you have showed arnav in this FF...awesome work..thanks for the PM...eagerly waiting to read the next part...

👏luved it. continue soon. luved the part where arnav runs behind khushi to remind her that he is arnav and arnav dropping khushi hme. looking forward to the next update eagerly. thx a lot for the pm. 👍🏼