OS - Darmiyan - Page 8

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Love the emotions! And the song went well with the OS!

Originally posted by: 18shabbo

awww...feeling bad for Arnav...😭
but really nyc work Sancho👏👏👏...loved the banner..😆

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic

*don't know what to say*

*staring at my keyboard*

Originally posted by: GillRK

after reading this i just wanted to hug him...poor sould!!!! well written :) thanks

Originally posted by: ..Winter_Soul..

Hey Sanchari (I hope I've spelled that right :P)

I think this is the first time I'm reading your work. It really is very engaging within itself. I loved how you portrayed Arnav's emotion. It was right to prove himself right then why does it feel all the wrong?...

Keep it up, hon :)

Much Love...

Sara

Originally posted by: fallenstar

hell i dint really wna read dat bt since u wrote i hd 2..

sry its jst dat am sick n a bit frustated kz ov da precap...😳

well i fnk it was da perfect ending..he got his due..😳

btw Sanch ur siggy is too beautiful..😍

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

Sancho! 🤗 OMFG that was so beautifully scripted. I could feel his pain, and you know these paragraphs:

For some very odd reason, I fell in love with them. I think it's because of the way you've scripted them and how his emotions are so tangible! The last paragraph especially, it broke my hearth into a million pieces just reading it! Amazing OS! Keep writing more. I apologise if I don't read/comment any more. I've sort of lost interest in reading :| But this, I am so glad I gave it a chance and read it! Loved it to the core :)

Write more soon-ish!

Love youuu

🤗

Originally posted by: lankan

I loved the OS ! I was so sad, i actually almost, slightly, cried. I love how subtle the ending was, yet it created an enormous impact. Great job, and thank you for introducing me to another song that i will most likely be addicted to in the future :D

Mehrunnisa

Originally posted by: karisma

heart-breaking!!!🥺 🥺 u captured arnav's feelings beautifully..his anticipation and the moment his dreams came crashing down