ArSha FF (new)- Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas- # 1 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg omg omg!!!
super duper uper cutee!
hayeee there nonstop teasing is sooo sweet!
and then the random closeness they share..hayeee!
uh oh anjali's appearance made shaks mad!
cant wait to read on!
the suspence is killing me...
plz plz update asap!!! loved it tish 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
I--L-U-V--I-T!!!!!!:D
it's aweeesomeee dearrr!!!
i juzz luv itt!!
ur an awesome writer!!!;);)
and updatee vry vry vry vry vry vry sooon!!!:):)
an thanxxx for PM!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update and really loved the cute convo of our ArSha. 😍
Kunwar was really cute and i liked the way he didn't want to make her feel bad for his condition so he was trying to change the topic of discussion. 😃
Shakti was nervous but he made her comfortable and i like his remarks like Me is missing and the intense gaze he gave to her after her dance.😉
Shakti was jealous first to imagine nurse as his gf than how come Anjali came in between.😛
FB was brilliant n till than i think Kunwar know that Shakti has something for him.😉
Pls pls update fast just loving this more everytime.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Part.. Anjali's entry.. Intesting.. waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh god lv u yaar wat an awsm update..in lv wid dis..cnt wait more eeep hehe...keep up d work buddy
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Tish...
the flash back was mind blowing
just loved the bikeride..
their close moments are megical as always...
Love you so much for the lovely update..
nd ANjali ko udhar hi kyun chhoda yaar...
m so eager to see SHaks jealous...
jaldi update karing ab!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
update plzz!!!!!!!!! u told u will update 2day...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar please update na u said that u will update today waitind for next part eagerly

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Posted: 13 years ago
tish please update soon
we are eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello friends….. here's part 10…. Enjoy.😊

Part 10

There was a knock on his door and he looked up.

Amar (to the person)- oh hi

Girl- hi Kunwar

Shakti frowned…. Who was that?... nobody calls him Kunwar other than me.

Girl- the nurse told me you are getting discharged…. I'm so glad.

Amar (smile)- thanks Anjali.

Shakti's frowned deepened…. Anjali?!!... yahan kya karr rahi hai??... and how dare she call him Kunwar!!

She saw her come to Amar's bed and bent down to hug him…. he pat her once on her back and quickly moved away…. looked at the screen…. Shakti threw a daggered look at them.

Anjali- so wattu up to?

She noticed the laptop in front of him…. and looked at Shakti on screen.

Anjali- hey…. that's Shakti right??

Shakti just smiled at her.

Anjali- hi….. wassup?... btw congrats for getting admission in NY.

Shakti (smile)- thanks…. Anjali right?

Anjali- yes that's right…. I'm the new girl in Kunwar's life (sneered)

Shakti- Rey

Anjali- huh?

Shakti- new girl in "Rey's life"

Anjali- ya ya…. (at Amar) how's your head?

She touched the bandage on his head and placed her other hand on his shoulder leaning forward to examine the wound…. Shakti gripped the edge of the table.

Amar- I'm good Anjali…. Nothing to worry…. Thanks.

Anjali- (smile) Good

She shambled his hair and sat down beside him on the bed to look at Shakti.

Anjali- so how are you finding your new life in NY??

Shakti could not help but notice Anjali sitting so close to him, practically in his lap…. Her shoulders touching his and she had placed her hand on his knee…. Shakti's grip on the table tightened.

Shakti- (fake smile) well, it's great.

She dint feel the need to elaborate…. Why should I?... I hardly know her…. Amar raised his eyebrow to her curt reply…. Let him think whatever he wants to…. I'm not here to entertain his friends.

Anjali- cool…. So have you watched D3 after you've left?

Shakti- ummm…. Not really…. Really caught up with stuff.

Anjali- oh you should!!... it's getting very interesting…. (at Amar) Isn't it Kunwar?

Shakti winced…. Once more she calls him Kunwar!!... I'll…. Argh!!

Amar was still looking at Shakti with amused eyes.

Amar- hmmm

Shakti noticed him watching her and quickly plastered a smile on her face.

Shakti- (at Anjali) so Anjali…. Where are you from?

Anjali narrated her full life history with every single detail…. Shakti bit back an urge to yawn…. She looked at Amar with pleading eyes to help shut her up…. Amar just shrugged and chuckled…. From the look of it, he was thoroughly enjoying her misery…. She glared at him without making it very obvious and smiled again to whatever Anjali was yakking about…. Dog!!... he could have warned me, ke usse badd badd karne ka shawk hai.

Finally Amar felt pity for Shakti and he butt in.

Amar- (at Anjali)- arre Anjali…. I forgot to ask…. how come you are here?

Anjali- oh I just came to meet you…. and see I'm so lucky for you (smirk)…. I came and you are asked to go home.

Shakti grunted…. Badi aayi lucky wali…. I was the first one to get the news.

Amar smiled at Anjali and looked at Shakti's expression with amusement…. He was loving it!

Anjali- good I came…. I'll help you pack your stuff.

Just the thought of Anjali going through Amar's things was making her sick…. He's just hit his head…. He can pack his stuff by himself.

Amar- that'll be great... so sweet of you (looked at Shakti)

She glared at him…. and he turned his head to hide his smile.

Anjali- I think we should go pack now.

She looked at Shakti and back at Amar…. Who the hell is she to tell me when to end this chat??!!... Shakti crossed her arms in front of her and waited for Amar to answer…. Her eyes were more than enough to warn him what he was suppose to say.

Amar- umm Anjali…. That's ok…. I'll pack later.

Anjali (getting off the bed)- arre aise kaise…. It's ok you sit…. I'll start…. You can join me later.

And she walked to his closet to remove his stuff to pack.

Shakti opened her arms gesturing as to what was going on…. Amar put on a lost puppy face and shrugged.

Shakti- Go

Amar- No

She gave him her disgusted look and he laughed.

Anjali came back to his bed with a box of chocolates in her hand.

Anjali- what's this Kunwar?... ab tak yeh chocolates tumne taste bhi nahi kiya?... itni mehenat se banake laayi thi tumhare liye kal.

Shakti frowned…. How often does she come here?... doesn't she have any work?

Amar-(guilty) oops… sorry bhul gaya.

She removed one and popped it in his mouth.

Amar- Yum Anjali…. These are great.

He took the box from her hand and popped some more in his mouth….. Anjali laughed…. leaned towards him…. put her hand on his head and shuffled his hair.

Anjali (at Shakti)- isn't he cute?

Shakti just smiled and nodded…. She balled her hand in a tight fist till her knuckles turned pale.

Shakti- you've already had enough chocolates Kunwar…. Buss karo... (She sounded like a mother warning her kid) and since when did you get a sweet tooth?... don't you prefer teekha?

Amar- hmmm…. These are really good Shaks…. I'm sure if you were to have them, you wouldn't have been able to stop yourself.

Gadha!!... thode time pehele mere chocolates ki badi taaref kar raha tha!!

Shakti- (fake smile) oh ya…. I'm sure….. (Dramatically) how I wish I could have them….. I'm missing out on so much in life…. Anjali, you have to make me some when I come back. (she rolled her eyes)

Amar chuckled…. She looked so cute when she turned into a drama queen.

Anjali- (smile) sure

There was a knock at the door… and Mukti breezed into the room.

Mukti- hey Amar…. Shaks se baat ho gayi?

Mukti then noticed Anjali.

Mukti- oh I'm sorry…. I dint know you had company.

Amar- (laugh) that's ok Muks…. Come in…. I was talking to your sister only.

Mukti excitedly came forward and hugged her laptop screen.

Mukti- hey Shaksss!!!... how's my beautiful sister??

Shakti laughed…. she was so glad to see Mukti…. she was truly her stress buster…. Always at the right place, at the right time.

Mukti then looked at Anjali…. And offered her hand.

Mukti- Hi…. you must be Anjali Bhuta…. The new girl in Kunwar's life….. I'm Mukti…. Mukti Mohan.

Shakti clenched her jaw….. "Rey's!!"….. what is wrong with everybody?

Anjali- yes ofcourse I know you.

Mukti- well, thank god for that!!

They all laughed.

Mukti (to Amar)- chal utth

Amar (confused)- kyun?

Mukti- Shakti se ab mujhe baat karne de.

Amar rolled his eyes but he got up from the bed allowing her to take his place on the bed.

He went to pack his bag till the sister's had their chat…. He could hear their conversation…. It felt like home….. he dint realize he had missed the Mohan sister's gossiping sessions too…. Mukti tried to involve Anjali in their conversation as far as she could.

The old nurse hearing all the commotion coming from his room came in.

Nurse (to Amar)- oh god Amar…. Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?

Amar looked at the girls who were in their own world that they dint even realize the nurse had come in…. he smiled and shrugged…. Girls!!

Nurse- (looking at the girls on the bed) kyun handsome?... tum toh bade fast nikle.

Amar laughed and winked at her

Nurse- (curious) tumhari wali kaun hai??

Amar (blushed)- beech waali

Nurse (confused) there are only two... beech wali kaun?

She then noticed the laptop in between Mukti and Anjali….. and smiled.

Nurse- Aahhh!!... good choice. (wink)

They both laughed.

The nurse asked the girls to lower their voices…. She dint ask them to leave as she dint want to spoil their fun…. And left.

Amar got back to his packing…. He heard Mukti tell Shakti that it was getting late there and she should go home now…. They said their goodbyes.

Mukti- (to Shakti) ruko Amar ko bulati hun…. Uss bechare ko bhi bye bol do…. Warna kahega ke main tumse baat karne nahi di.

Amar smiled and turned to walk towards the bed.

Mukti got up from the bed.

Mukti- I'll go grab some coffee…. Anjali, wanna join me?

Anjali- no thanks

Mukti looked at Amar and then at Shakti.

Mukti- oh that's ok atleast gimme company.

Anjali- arre but fir Kunwar….

Mukti raised her eyebrow at the word Kunwar….. she looked at Shakti…. She remembered the time when Shakti had told her, jokingly ofcourse…. "you are not suppose to call him Kunwar, that's my ISI mark"…. She had never called Amar 'Kunwar' after that except when she had to tease her.

Mukti- (to Anjali) oh common…. I'm sure he'll do just fine for a while.

She pulled Anjali by her arm…. Winked at Amar…. And they left the room.

Amar sat back on the bed before the laptop.

Shakti- So?

Amar- So?

Shakti- roz aati hai?

Amar's lips twitched…. But he suppressed his smile.

Amar- kaun?... Mukti?

Shakti- you damn well know who am I talking about.

He laughed.

Amar- hmm…. Ya almost roz. (wink)

Shakti- (frowned) Kyun?

Amar- Kyun kya Kyun?... bimaar hoon…. Milne aati hai.

Shakti- (mumbled) Bimaar my foot!!

He chuckled.

Amar- kyun tum nahi aati?

She was taken aback by the question and she paused a little longer before she replied.

Shakti- nahi aati

Amar smirked.

Shakti- (irritated) mujhe late ho raha hai….. main jaa rahi hun….. aur waise bhi woh aati hi hogi tumhe company dene.

Amar- haan woh toh hai (laughs)

Shakti glared at him…… Gadha!!

Shakti- bye Kunwar

Amar- phir kab baat karogi?

Shakti- pata nahi

Amar- (sigh) ok bye…. I miss you

Shakti's expression softened.

Shakti- I miss you too…. (blinking back tears) Chalo ab bye

Amar- see you

Shakti- acha suno…. I don't like it when she calls you 'Kunwar'.

And before he could respond…. She said a quick bye again and logged off.

Amar laughed.

He placed his palm on the screen that was now blank…. And flinched his hand back.

Amar- (to himself) ouuh…. Jal raha hai!!

And laughed harder on his own joke.

PS- pms are on the way.😊

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