FF: Achilles' Heels | Chapter 14 Page 120 (04/14)

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..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

wow, this is amazing...very very interesting...

can't wait for the past to be revealed...please continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

wowww i was really busy with work so couldn't read this earlier. Nice update...I wonder how ASR has changed...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

nice start...
and part2 also be heart -touching..
looking f4ward...

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

intresting part pls continue soon

had exams sorry for the late comment

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

This one's getting so interesting.. There was some confrontation between Arnav and Shyam, wasn't there? Oh.. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Hello my lovely forumwasis...

How are you? Not great, I suppose... The current track in not exactly cheerful for us to be happy! But come one, it will pass... How much I am waiting for these golden words from LM sir to come true! I'm sure you all are too!

So, the point is that I am putting both my stories on hold... For a month maybe... No no no no no, its not a writers' block I'm experiencing, its the workload I have on my head... I have ideas running in my head every minute, but I am not finding time to pen them down! And I don't want to update anything in raw form!

So an apology to everyone who were expecting updates on 'Achilles' Heels'... I'm really sorry! But I promise to be back as soon as I get time to breathe from my studies!

Enjoy the roller-coaster on the show meanwhile!

Loads of love!

Pearl...

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Preeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

HOLY COW! This is just FANTASTIC! 😃I LOVED the concept the begining! its written beautifully! 👏thanx for the pm please continue soon 😊its okay if your busy just whenever possible

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: hararnav
wow.. what an update... brilliant.
khushi was so lost in asr's thought that she actually became female version of ASR.. so strong n confident

Yeah, you got it right, dear!!! She kinda has turned into a female version of ASR - but the KKG-ness in her hasn't vanished!!! Don't worry - I will try to return KKG in her true form soon!!!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: molten_lava
Grr... It took you so long to update this. I thought you had forgotten that u started an FF.

WOW! I really really loved this story.
Funny moments: Khushi imagining Arnav playing Laptop laptop?!😆
Awesome Moments: Khushi's confrontation with Arnav😃
Confusing moments: That last line of yours really left me confused. What did you mean by "she was wrong. he had changed?"😕

Fabulous Update! Do update sooner coz I love this whole concept. and you describe everything wonderfully😃

LOL! Now, will be the time when you would have to say that I have forgotten about this story!!! It's actually seems like ten years to me since I last updated this story!! Sooo sorry for that!

It was my dream of including this line somewhere 'playing laptop-laptop' somewhere in my stories since that fun-dance about Arnav at PaYash Sangeet!!! 😉.. Well, and about the last line - there are a certain things about Arnav - which I'm hoping to reveal in another couple of chapters... I hope you enjoy the twist I'm planning in this one!!!

Stay tuned!!! 😉

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: asumi
shit! this is soo damn aweosme!!

leave alone them - there are sooo many questions in mY mind!! damn!! i really need another chapter pleeaasssee!!!

when she complained about how they felt with out him and he cut her saying "dont" i was blank- speechless! what when were how?

just marvelous!! and the title- i still am trying to connect!

ok i stopped connecting and started waiting - for the update 😃
please - next chap- jjaallldddiii

did i tell you i love this one?

Aww... That's sooo sweet of you, dear!! I loved reading this comment!

Here you go, I give you the next chapter realllyyy soon! If I get it polished in next couple of hours, I will be posting it right then! I know you have a million questions storming inside your head - I'm sorry I won't be clearing them all in this chapter itself... But the next one - at least half of them would be sorted..! Pilomishhh... Pinky pilomishh!!!!