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Posted: 13 years ago

Epilouge:



Its been one month that incident happened. Maan is fully recovered now n geet is also fine, they both are always busy with their angels. Maan is not at all leaving his princess n champ. He 24x7 taking care of them. He shifted his office in the mansion for few months n even doctor also told him to rest n not to strain much.


In the mid night maan n geet are sleeping n babies are in the cradle sleeping peacefully. Suddenly princess started to cry.

Maan n geet got up n maan took princess in his arms.

Why my princess is crying? Asked maan.

Before geet react anything maan shouted maa maa.

Maan why u r shouting? Let them sleep told geet.

Arey geet see my princess is crying thats why I called maa told maan worried.

Maan, she is hungry thats why she is crying told geet.


Hearing to maan's shout maa, dad n pooja came there.

Maan beta kya hua? Asked maan worriedly.

wo.. wo.. maa princess ro rahi thi isiliye I called u told maan.

Maa no need to worry, she is hungry told geet n smiled at over protective father maan.

Maan beta aap bhi na humko dara hi diya told dad.

But maa but why champ is not crying he too might be feeling hungry na asked maan.

All of them burst out into laughter after listening his question.

I didnt joke told maan.

Maan even though they are twins its doesnt mean that both should feel hungry at the same time. Ab samjhe aap? Asked maa.

Oh acha aisa hi hota hain kya? Ok maa sorry aap log so jayiye told maan.

Ok ok.. bhai aap na thoda aaram kijiye, shayad chillane se wajah takh gaye honge told pooja n laughed.

Poojaaa shouted maan n smiled along with her.

Ok bhai, bhabhi good night told pooja n left from there.

Even maa n dad left from there.

Maan aap na khamaka sab ko pareshan kar diya told geet.

Sorry geet, I was worried told maan making baby face.

Maan u know what?

Kya geet?

U r behaving like kid told geet n giggled.

Maan too smiled n told kya kare mere princess aur champ ke saath main bhi bacha ban gaya hu.

Geet smiled n started feeding milk to princess.


After drinking milk princess slept peacefully n as per maan's doubt even champ too started crying.

Maan n geet smiled n geet told ab aapka doubt clear hogaya shayad, dekho champ is also feeling hungry now.

Geet fed milk for champ too n after some time he too slept.


Geet face look pale n seemed to be tired, maan observed that n asked with concern geet, jaan tum thik tho ho na?

Geet rested her head on his shoulder n told ha maan, little bit tired n thoda head ache horaha hain.

Maan hugged her tight by her waist n carassed her hair n told geet tum aaram karo, I will just come now.

But maan where r u going ??

Maan kissed her forehead n told close your eyes geet.

Geet nodded n did the same.

After some time maan placed her head on his lap n started massaging her forehead n head.

Geet opened her eyes n told maan yeh sab koi jaroorat nahi hain.

Shhh jaan u just relax, I know how tired u r, taking care of children n feeding is not a small thing. Just close ur eyes.

Geet smiled n closed her eyes feeling relaxed. After some time she slept peacefully on his lap.

Maan smiled seeing her relaxed face n kissed her forehead good night jaan.

Maan too slept in that position not to disturb his jaan.

They named their princess as PARI MAAN SINGH KHURANA and champ as RAUNAK MAAN SINGH KHURANA.


After 10 years:


Here geet is setting breakfast on the dining table she checked clock n its already 7:30.

hai rabba yeh bachon bhi na, they didnt get up upto now thought geet n shouted pari, raunak utho beta.

No response from them.

Finally she went upstairs n entered their room to saw the horrible sight in front of her.

U shut up rauni, u spoiled my drawing told pari angrily.

U shut up pari, I didnt do anything. N yesterday yesterday u stole my chocolate told raunak angrily.

I didnt stole any chocolate, dad will give me chocolates so I dont want to stole from u. hmmmph told pari.

Hahaha smiled raunak.

Y u r laughing, have u gone mad asked pari.

Nahi, this time I got first rank n u got second so dad n mom will only give me chocolates told raunak.

Rauniii shouted pari.

Chup karo tum dono shouted geet.

Mom dekho na rauni ne mera drawing spoil kiya cried pari.

Raunak saw her crying n felt bad. He went near her n told princess dont cry, I cant see my sister crying. Dont worry I will give all my chocolates to u n also draw this for u.

pari stopped crying n told no rauni, I will do it again, u too have to do maths homework na.

Geet smiled at both their bonding n hugged them tight. She broke the hug n told chalo breakfast karte hain.

Ok mama told pari n raunak.

They 3 went downstaris n just then maan came down in his casuals.

Daddd shouted pari n raunak.

Maan smiled n hugged them n kissed their cheeks.

Good morning princess n good morning champ wished maan.

They both kissed his cheek in response.

They all settled n pari asked mom aaj breakfast mein kya hain?

Before she could reply all of them shouted even maan too with his children PASTA.

Hey babaji, yeh kya pasta pasta laga rakha hain aap sab chup chap paratha khalo.

They all made a face n asked innocently mom how can we eat if we shut up.

Maan aap bhi bachon ke saath fumed geet.

Maan made a baby face at children n pari told mom we asked pasta not dad, dont scold him.

Dad ki chamchi told geet.

Pari sat on maan's lap n sit her tongue out.

Raunak went to geet n hugged her.

They all smiled n ate PASTA but not paratha.


They lived happily n eventhough children fought at times but their bonding is great, they both helped each other in each n every thing. Raunak is a sweet boy but when it comes to his sister be can do anything n not tolerates a word aganist her. Maan n geet are proud of their son.

Coming to pari she is dad's pet, princess n ghar ka raunak. She is very sweet n adorable. She looks like geet n loves her parents to the core. Mainly she loves her brother to the core, she always supports him in each n everything. She is a sweet daughter n sister. She is sweet but gussa tho papa par gayi. Maan n geet are proud of their children n loved them n gave them what ever they want. But they didnt spoil them, they are like their JAAN.


So so so guys here is an epilouge. Hope u all liked this.

So how is the journey of maneet in this MERI JAAN.

Plz pen down your opinions, as this is the last part n epilouge I request all of u to comment.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT..

waiting for ur response..


love

-jyothi



Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the epilogue


awsome
waiitng for new ss


plzzz update ur new ff...

geetanjali walo



plzzz...


waiitng for maan reaction towards sasha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

loved the epilogue



awsome
waiitng for new ss


plzzz update ur new ff...

geetanjali walo



plzzz...


waiitng for maan reaction towards sasha



sure dear i will update tomorrow... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n lovely update...

chalo maan k doubt toh clear hogaya...maan bachcho k saath bachcha ban gaya...pyar insan ko kitna change kar dete hai iske sabse bada example toh maan hai...

its really amazing...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely epilogue...

hats off to u dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the epilogue
it soo beautifull
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww... such a cute family !!!!!! Lovely !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind Blowing Epilouge
Thanks A Lot For The PM


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Posted: 13 years ago
fablous dear even i m waiting for new ff or ss write soon n thanks for writing this
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part a lot
especially when maan took care of geet noeing she vl b hell tired looking after babies..!
its very rare to c such a caring and loving hubbies..!
I also loved the part where raunak was ready to give his chocolates seeing his princess cry..
Beautiful one dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute family
and thanks 4 happy ending
i always love happy endings

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