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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting waiting waiting Jyo
pls update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
plzz maaneet ko kuch maat hoone dhena...
vallidhari ki yemmanna ayendho malli nuvvundav ... anthe
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part


true emotions


bas dono ko kuch nai hona chhaiye

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Posted: 13 years ago
emotional update
please save maan dear
continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
it was so sad that maaneet are not there to celebrate the most wonderful moment of their life
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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 4: (last part)


note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' to ur buddylist for pms. or tell me i will add.


Suddenly both the babies started to cry as if they came to know about their parents. Just then vicky came there n saw the babies.

Mom babies? Asked vicky.

Ha beta ur brothers children told mom.

Babies are crying when doctor came there pooja asked doctor can we take babies to ICU.

Doctor thought n told yes only for 5 min. its not good for babies to be outside for long time.

Ok doctor only for 5 min.

pooja took one baby n other one vicky n they both went inside.

Pooja had tears in her eyes seeing his bro in that condition.

Bro.. called pooja.

Bro open ur eyes plz. See ur babies are waiting for u. they want to be with their father. See how they r crying. Atleast for babies, for bhabhi u should get up bro. Dont sleep bro, ur babies need u. they need their parents. How can u sleep when your babies need u. Aap samaj rahe ho na main kya keh rahi hu cried pooja.

Pooja calm down dear, dekho bro ko kuch nahi hoga. He will be back for his children, its their dream to take their children in his arms.

Maan who is listening all these in his coma state thinking god mera bachoon iss duniya mein aagaye aur main yaha iss condition mein. Nahi I have to get up for my children aur geet ke liye. I have to get u. yes I have to. Come on maan ur children r waiting for u, to be in ur arms. Geet tumko bhi hosh mein aana hoga. Hamare bache geet, hamara sapna. Geet get up.


Here geet who is lying on the bed as a life less person heard her maan is calling her.


When 2 people love each other unconditionally, they will be always thinking about them. Even without saying anything they can understand their feelings. Thats why geet thought that something is gonna happen to maan so she told him not to go. She is dying each n every second when maan was in london but her fear came true. He met with an accident n in critical condition.


Here maan is struggling to meet his jaan n she is in need of him n their children wants them. But both r in critical condition. Maan is not able to see his children crying n wants to get up n even calling his geet, his jaan.


Here geet is lying on the bed heard her maan is calling her n want to be in his arms.

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plz listen to this song for their feelings.



both: ankhe bandh karke jo ek chehra najar aya
woh tumhi ho ai sanam, woh tumhi ho ai sanam
jise pyar karte hee dil ko mere karar aya
woh tumhi ho ai sanam, woh tumhi ho ai sanam
ankhe bandh karke jo ek chehra, najar aya


woh tumhi ho ai sanam, woh tumhi ho ai sanam


maan: tumhi jane jana, mere pyar kaa sapna
dil ne mere mana dilbar tumhe apna
mere yar pe - 2 hai mujhko bada hee naz
meri chahto se tum - 2 naa karna kabhi aitraz
ankhe bandh karke jo ek chehra, najar aya
woh tumhi ho ai sanam, woh tumhi ho ai sanam


geet: jindgi hai tujhse, mera ishq kehta hai
too meri sason me, har waqt rehta hai)
mera khwab too -2 hai tuhi meri parwaz
meri chahto se tum - 2 naa karna kabhi aitraz
ankhe bandh karke jo ek chehra, najar aya
woh tumhi ho ai sanam, woh tumhi ho ai sanam
jise pyar karte hee dil ko mere karar aya
woh tumhi ho ai sanam, woh tumhi ho ai sanam


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Geet: maan I am coming, when u need me how can I sleep peacefully here I am coming for u, for our children. They need both of us maan, not only mother but they need their papa too.


Maan: ha geet hamara bachon, MERI JAAN, HAMARA JAAN hain.



They read each other thoughts n opened their eyes calling each others name.

Geet opened her eyes n called JAAN.

Maan opened his eyes n called JAAN.


The nurse who is beside geet saw that she opened her eyes.

Mam mam r u ok? ?

But geet is calling only one name MAAN, MAAN.

Immediately nurse went n called doctor.


Here in ICU pooja n vicky saw that maan opened his eyes.

Bro bro called vicky.

But here also same condition he calling only his jaan's name GEET.

Immediately they came out of ICU n called doctor.

Doctor bro ko hosh aagaya told vicky.

Calm down Mr. khurana we will go n check told doctor.

Mom, dad bro opened his eyes told pooja.

Mom n dad got up n asked really?? babaji ko lakh lakh shukriya.


Just then nurse came n informed that geet came to concious now.

Their happiness have no bounds.

They took babies inside n placed then by the side of geet.

Geet saw the babies n had tears in her eyes. Even babies also came to know that they r beside their mom so they stopped crying. But immediately geet asked

mom, maan how is he??

mom smiled n told beta maan is fine now. Usko hosh aagaya n doctors r doing checkup.

Mom muje abi maan ko dekhna hain told geet.

Beta u have to rest just now u had operation n its not good for u to move told mom.

Mom plzz muje kuch nahi hoga I have to meet maan. Plz maa ek baar requested geet.

Thik hain but I will ask doctor n come ok??

ok mom smiled geet.

Geet smiled at her, when mom went out she kissed her babies n told we r going to meet ur dad. U both wanna come.

Babies smiled at her widely.

Awww mera babies. We r sorry beta for not taking u both in our arms when u came in this world.

Ha beta we r vey sorry came a voice.

Geet turned n saw maan on the wheel chair.

Maan aap yaha? Its not good for u to move told geet.

Geet beta u both wife n husband r very stubborn. Maan ko hosh aate hi doctors ko pareshan kar diya ki I want to see geet n my babies. Doctors tried to convince a lot that its not good but aapke pati tho, he was trying to get up n was about to fall.

About to fall, maan yeh kya kiya aapne, kuch hua tho?? asked geet worriedly.

Maan made a baby face n dad continued doctors gave up n brought him in wheel chair.

Geet smiled n told maan our babies.

Vicky pushed the wheel chair near babies. Maan took his princess in his arms n gently very carefully kissed her forehead n told welcome princess.

Geet took his prince in her arms n kissed his forehead n told mera beta.

Maan n geet had tears in their eyes seeing their pyaar ka nishan.

Mom, dad I became father, my kids told maan.

All had tears in their eyes seeing their love for each other.

Mom told aap dono tho hum sab ko dara diya. But u r back with ur love for each other. When nurse came n told that geet ko hosh aagaya n at the same time pooja ne kaha ki aapko bhi hosh aagaya. Hum tho bohot khush hain bete. Always be happy. Aapke khushi se badkar humko kuch nahi chahiye n kissed maan's forehead n geet's.

Sorry mom aapko pareshan karne ke liye told geet.

Nahi beta hum ko tho aapne itne bade khushi di. Hum daada, daadi ban gaye hain told mom.

Main chachu told vicky.

Aur main bua told pooja excitedly.

Thik hain ab tum dono aaram kijiye. Maan chalo yaha se told mom.

Mom plz thodi der requested maan.

Maan try to understand u r not fully recovered, u have to rest told dad.

Dad just for some time told maan.

They gave up n told ok.


After one week both maan n geet discharged. They went to KM with their kids.


In their room:


they both placed their kids carefully in the cradles. Maan rested on the bed with geet in his arms.

Thanku so much geet for giving me the best gift in my life.

Geet smiled n told they r our love maan. Main tho darr gayi thi aapko aise haalat mein dekkar. A lone tear escaped from her eyes.

Maan wiped her tear n told nahi geet ab aur aansu nahi, I promise that I never leave n our babies n go any where. Tum MERI JAAN ho geet. Main apni jaan ko chodkar kaha jaonga.

Aap bhi MERE JAAN ho maan. Main apni jaan ko kuch nahi hone doonga.


They both smiled n slept in each others arms admiring their kids.

A true n pure LOVE never fails. If we have hope then no one can do anything. Its a small example of true love. Both r struggling for each other lives. They came out of their sleep for their love for their kids. They suceeded n lived happily ever after.


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So so so friends here is the last part of MERI JAAN. Hope u all like it. I am nervous with this part. Hope I reached ur expectation. If not I am so sorry friends.


Plz plz plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.


Will be waiting for ur response. Do tell me which part u liked the most n how u felt reading this SS. 😃 😊


Once again thanks a lot guys. Do tell me if u want EPILOUGE for this. 😕



Love 🤗

-jyothi. 😳



Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow!!!!! awesome part dear...😛

loved it so much...😳...

thanks for this amazing ss dear...😃


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Posted: 13 years ago


so beautiful...

yes true love is the one who bring back person even from deathbed...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part

how both maaneet get up at the same time

its was magical


loved it

plz come up with new ss

take care

bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome last part loved it
yes want an epilogue

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