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Nikki

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Posted: 13 years ago

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the start to this ff is really good please can you pm me when you update :D

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ArSha_Forever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Nice Promo Pm Me When u Update :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesome start!

continue soon and do pm me :)

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

In this chap i want to introduce a charecter

smriti ghai:she is mother of kriya .very friendly and srtict too.she loves kriya soo mch.she cnt see kriya sad.she cn do
anythng for her happiness.

CHAPTER:2

IT'S 3PM AT EVE...
AT REEYANSH'S HOUSE...
(REY was watching tv .his mother came n said)
sapna:reeyansh go out n hav fun!always y do u sit infornt of tv!
rey:maaa...
sapna:kya maa jao abhi ...
rey:maa pakao mat plzz
sapna:mei paka rahi hoon??!(turns her head to other side in anger lik a baby)
rey see's his mother n goes near her hug's her frm back n says
rey:sorry maa...
sapna:muje sorry ki jarurath nahi hai!!
rey hold his ears n says :plzz iss innocent bache ko maaf kar dhona...sorry
sapna:awww...cute!!ok maine maaf kiya..:)
rey:maa mei cute?am nt a girl okay .am a MAN!
sapna:wah!mera beta bada hogaya hai!
rey:haan bahut bada..!
sapna:toh tumhare liya ladki dhekun kya??
rey:ladki? kya ladki?
sapna:u r big na now..so thought of doing marrige for u.!
rey:itni bada bhi nahi hun(makng a baby face)
sapna:acha acha teek hai..waise bhi u wer sayin that u shud go to some party
(rey c's his watch its 4pm)
rey:oh FREAK!its 4!thanks mom yaad dilane ke liya (he kisses her on her cheek n goes away)
(rey in room while getting ready fr the party thnkng abt that conversation with kriya)
rey:aaj toh uss miss.baatcutter se milna hi padega.bahut sweet hai(he smiles to himself)

Kriya's house
(kriya goes to her mom who was sitting near her relatives n asks)
kriya:maa plz eek bar idhar aaona muje aapse kuch poochna hai
(smriti comes aside n asks kriya)
smriti:kya hua ...baat kya hai?
kriya:maa woh woh...
smriti:woh woh kya?sedhi sedhi batadho na?
kriya:maa actually aaj sharon ki bday hai
smriti:wah bahut achi baat hai..wish her frm my side.ok mei chalthi hoon..muje bahut kam hai.!
kriya:maa rukho na!
smriti:aab kya?
kriya:woh sharon party arrange kar rahi hai muje invite kiya..toh mei...(by sayiin dis she bends her head down)
smriti:party ka time kya hai?(gives a fake serious look)
kriya:woh 5 baje ...
smriti:arey only 1 hr left ...tum yaha kya kar rahi hoon ..jao na!!!!(she says with a smiling face)
kriya:sachi??
smriti:muchi!!
kriya hugs her mother with happiness
kriya:thank u maa !!!ur de best mom in de world!!!
smriti:ab jao thyaar hojao warna dher ho jayegi
(kriya hugs again n turns to go n turns again back to her mom n keeps a sad face)
smriti:ab kya hua?
kriya:woh relatives??
smriti:mai managa kar loongi thum jao..
kriya:thnk u mom!!!!!!!!!!(she hugs n runs to get ready)
(smriti smiles n go away frm der)
kriya gets ready wears a normal black pant n a white shirt (she was lukin cute) n goes down .she starts the scootey (it was her fav scootey ..she can fight with anyone if anyone damaged it
or even tried to do it)

reeyansh home:

he gets ready he wears a black shirt n black pant(he is lukin super hawt!no gal willl say no to him if he propose:D). he says his mom bye n go downstairs n starts his bike n goes.

(while he was gng a dog came in the middle of the road having an intention to save the dog he moves his bike aside and bymistakenly his bike n kria's scootey gt clashed
as kria was gng side of him.bcoz of the clash kria ki scooty par ek small scratch pada hai n kria fell down too(she ws nt hurt bt her dress was spoiled)
then she gets up with full anger n was abt to shout at him.rey had smelled the danger so he immediately pleaded her to come aside.as kria also dint wnt to do a scene in frnt of all
she agreed n came aside.n started shouting)
kriya:andhe ho kya???dhekhe nahi chal sakthe???(thn she c's her scootey n finds a scratch on it .so her anger had reached the top level)
kriya:scratch?!!!!!!oh nooo?!!!!aap dhek nahi sakthe hoo!!andha kahika!!yeh meri fav scootey hai(she starts cryin)
rey:woooah madam am sorry!chill nw !its just a scratch!
kriya:jus a scratch?!!hw cn u knw how my dehradun felt?!!(she says n caress the scootey sayin "awww baby kuch nahi hoga" )
rey:wait a min.yeh dehradun kaun hai??
kriya:aur kaun meri scootey.!
rey:dehradun? (he gives a confused look)...anywayz am sorry
kriya:muje nahi dehradun ko bolo
rey:(he goes near the scootey kneels near it )am sorry dehradun muje maaf kardho na plzzz...
he stands n c's kriya n says i thnk dehradun ne muje maaf kiya (with a smile on his face)
kriya:paar maine toh maaf nahi kiya na !!!you hav done a mistake!!(in an angry tone)
rey:sorry bola na maine...
then suddenly frm otherside the owner of the dog a girl comes n says to rey
girl:hey thak u soo mch fr saving my dog..thnk u sooo mch!!!
rey:ua welcum:)
the girl goes away n kria talks to herself "jhalli ye thune kya kiya !bina kuch sochthe hi usko dant diya"
then rey c's her scolding herself n smiles
kriya:woh woh so so ...sorry muje nahi pata tha ...
rey(smiles):its ok
kriya see's watch its time she says:ok bye gtg muje kaam hai (without listening to rey's ans she goes away)
rey smiles to himself n says :"MISS DEHRADUN"
and he c's his watch n it was 4:30pm .so he immediately starts his bike n goes to the party
kria was on her way but she saw her dress was spoiled .she again goes to her house to change her dress..

kria's house:

kria enters her room from the back side door of kitchen ...she hides herself n goes bcoz she doesnt wnt anyone of her relatives to c her
but unfortunately her mother saw her .
smriti:kriya!!!tum yaha kya kar rahi ho???
kria explains evarythng to her mom thn her mom tells kriya to wait n she goes n bring kriya a dress to change.her mom brings a white salwar which was soo beautiful
by seeing salwar kriya says
kriya:salwar?!!!
smriti:haan...pehanlo!!
kriya:maaa..
smriti:yeh pehnlo or go with that spoiled dress nly!
kriya:ok maa..
thn her mom goes away frm der .n kriya to herself
kriya:universe ji!plz make sure that no one laughs at me..
she gets ready she jus looks lik an angle.she goes downstairs ,starts her scootey n goes to the party...
as she was unfortunate that day.she was struck in a TRAFFIC JAM!!!😃😆😆