FF: Truth Revealed [Discontinued] - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Enjoyed it. Loved all 3 parts.
So hate the snake. Continue soon. Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zafi

Awesome OS.⭐️
Enjoyed it. Loved all 3 parts.
So hate the snake. Continue soon. Thanks.😃


IM GLAD U GUYZ ALL LIKED IT!!!!
I FEEL SO ENCOURAGED TO CONTINUE!!
ITS URE GUYZES SUPPORT THAT MAKES ME WRITE GOOD OS'S
THANK U!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS: Truth Revealed Part 4

ENJOY!!!

(Arnav goes to check on his sister……… she is sitting in her bed calling the panditji for any other work that might be left for the pheres…….)

A: di, aap kaisi hai? Aapko kaisa lag raha hai?

Anjali: chote hum thik hai! Bar bar puchke tum thak nahi jaate ho kya?? J

A: di, aap ka khayal rakhna mera farz hai

Anjali: smiles and nods her head……… yeh chote bhi na!! J

Toh chote aap aaj kya karne wale hai?

A: (turns around and looks at anjali with a puzzled face)

Anjali: chote tum bhul gaye aaj kya hai??? Aaj VALENTINE'S DAY HAI!!!

A: ohh ya di, I forgot………

Anjali: hume paata hai……. Inhone toh humare liye ek bada surprise rakha hoga J

A: (is very disappointed at the thought of how much her sis loves shyam but that ***hole)

Anjali: chote hume lagta ki aapko ab apke kaam mein age badhna chahiye………(she said with a big smile on her face)

A: huhh di! Aap kya kehrahi hai? (even though he acted puzzled in front anjali……inside he knew exactly what he was talking about) di hume aapse ek baat puchni thi……… who humare ek client hai…..

Anjali: hmmm…….

A: who kal hume pata chala ki Aman secretly humare company ke sabse bade rival ke liye kam kar raha hai……… aapkp pata hai na Aman mere kitna accha dost hai…… par usne toh

Anjali: chote mein samaj sakti hoon……… kabhi kabhi jo hume dikhta hai woh ek galat faimi hoti hai aur uss insane ki bhi ek kahani hoti hai……….. tumhe Aman ko ek aur mouka dena chahiye aur uski side ki kahhani sunni chahiye………….. main tumhare bhashe mein batati hoon….. never jump to conclusions J

A: thanx di…… (and leaves thinking about what his di just said) shud I listen to khushi? Kya pata uski galti hai ya nahi………. ( he remembered what he said to khushi once……. Khushi tumhe aadhe vakt pata bhi nahi hota ki tumhare saath kya hota hai……… ) ( he remembers when khushi told him his fianc had deceived her family and when she had broken down in front of him) ohhh no yeh maine kya kar diya……

…………. Main Arnav Singh Raizada hoon…….. y am I so confused? Uggh…… I need a drink of water)

(he enters the kitchen and sees…….)

Hahahaa next part will be updated soon………… srry if this part was a little uninteresting……. I have build up the story J

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
You are so evil, leaving us hanging like that. How mean. Anyways loved the fact that Arnav went and took Advice from his Di and she put him on the right path.
Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
very nice update
so he's going to follow his Di's advice
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Its great so far!
Plz pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Flowing nicely plz pm when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
omg... you end each part right when it's at the most interesting part... can't wait for the next part...plzz post soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
nice part pls continue and pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
I'm so glad you guys are liking my first OS ever
but keep checking in to see new stuff bcuz I just got a dhamakedar idea for the story to move on you guys will be shocked rite out of ure skins!!! :)

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