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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

thanks a lot asma for completing and totally u rocked it n got it to this page congo

hmmm its alll cause of u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
waiting for d next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awessome update dear...👏
voting done!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
super nice angel... really loved it😊😊 such a cute update
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Posted: 13 years ago
phewww ek hi din me pura ff padh liya,,,,,,,,,😊,,😃,,,,,,,wow it was amzing ff,👏,,,,,realy u r awsumm writer👍🏼,,,,,,,thnku thnku 4pm nhi toh yeh ff miss kar deti thnkx once again 🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute update 😃...keep it up the good work..loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me in PM list, tab bhi no PM's aaj tak ! 😭
Btw, superb episode.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi

Me in PM list, tab bhi no PM's aaj tak ! 😭

Btw, superb episode.


sorry ur were not in the friendslist sended u reuest enjoy the further updates 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
update in 20 or so mins!! <3 get ready !!
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Recape : kriyansh conversation

Part 21 !!! <3 thank you everyone for liking this FF !!21 parts woohoo !! <3

Kriya gets a call again

K: rey pick up karlo agar aaap mind nahi karege

R: nahi kriya u can I don't mind

Kriya picks up the call and its vinti

V: kriya !!

K: chilla kyu rahi ho vinti ??

V: mera call kyu cut kiya ?

K: sorry main busy thi

V: aacha usko mana liya ?

K: mana liya aur pata bi liya *smiles*

V: aacha sun ek surprise hain !

K: kya ?

V: wo tujhai kal comprtition mai milega

K: vinti tu abhi tak nahi sudri !

V: aur sudrogi bi nahi

K: aacha main rak ti ho rehersals karne hain bye !

V: byee!!

Vinti calls her pilot she has a private jet plane ;)

V: hello

Pilot: yes maam

V: mujhai kal new York jana hain at 9 oclock are the conditions okay

Pilot: yes maan please aap tym par aajana

V*insult* :P : hain tum tum aapne kaam se kaam rakho main aajaogi

Sharon calls swayum

Sh: kriya aur rey ka kya howa? Wo abhi bi hotel nahi aai?

Sw: hain wo .. wo rey ne call kiya tha rehersals kar rahe hai

Sh: joot!

Sw: nahi tu ! main joot nahi boolta

Sh: jaise tum abhi nahi bool rahe ho liar swayum ur a big liar

Sharon cuts the call

Sharon in her mind:

Ab aaiga maza swayum mujhai mania ga ! ary rey kit u birthday aarahi hai mujhai kriya ko remind karna chahiye! Laiken baad main

Kriya cuts the call and smiles and rey, rey smiles back

R: kya howa * moving the strands of hair that were disturbing her*

K: kuch nahi

R: kuch tu howa hai

K: hain wo vinti !

R: vinti, ab vinti ne kya kiya kaisi dost hain tum hari jab bi call karti hai tension daiti hai

K: nahi rey usne koi surprise plan kiya hai jo wo humai kal show main daigi !

R: kriya wo koi tamasha tu nahi karne wali haina ?

K: nahi rey ab rehersals kare

When kriyansh were about to beging the waiter goes with their breakfast

R: lagta hai aaj waiter bi nahi chata ki humara rehersal ho *winks*

Kriya understands what he means and blushes

Rey comes with the breakfast

After the breakfast finally and finally kriyansh do there rehersl but rey does a edition

In the moves ! :o *chill people just for fun ;)*

Before the life in slowly planted kisses on kriyas should

His one touch send shivers down her spine kriya who was blushing to the core could not resist

During the lift kissed rey on cheek

Finally they finish

K: rey danc ke beech main aap kya kar rahe thy ?

R: batao ?*coming closer*

Kriya turning back : aapki marzi

Rey coming closing kisses her bare back and tightening the grip on her waist kriya turns around

And both fill the gap between them *finally a kiss*

After a long passionate kiss finally both let go of eachother

Kriya blushing: rey main chalti ho all the best for the competition

R: bye baatcutter same to you

Kriya closes the door and smiles

She quickly goes and meets Sharon

K: Sharon rehearsals kiye ?

Sh: nahi abhi tu swaym mujhai banana aaiga

K: kyu

Sh: aise hi aur tu kaha thi rehearsals kiya

K: hai aur gud luck

Sh: same to you

Meanwhile ~~~~~~~~~

Swayum is in tension walking in circles

Sw: kiase manao Sharon ko

Ek tu puri baat sunti bi nahi hai per naraaz hojati hain rehearsals bi

Karne hain kya karo dr love *rey* ko karoga tu kahega ki main tu iska senior ho aur main ek

Junior se pooch raha ho kya karo !

When he gets a message from kriya

Message '~~~

Hey swayum tension main ho kaise Sharon ko manao and all don't worry jab miss love yaha hai ..

Ye karo'''

Swayum texts her back

Message~~~~~~~'

Wah kriya wah maana parnega rey ke saath saath tumbi love guru bangai ho nyc idea ab daikta ho siren kaise bachti hai

Xoxo

Thanks miss love laiken ye miss mrs main kab badlega ??

Swayum quickly makes a run and buys lilies for Sharon and a dress

He waits until its 6 at quickly starts climbing when he is half the way

Sw: ary main tu door se bi jaa sagta ho chal neechai chal

He quickly goes down again :P and goes by the door

Sharon opena door and sees a man with black mask

Sh: ahh choor koun ho tum

Closes the door on face

Swayum was having kriyas voice recorded and plays

K: main ho Sharon pimple hain iss liye ye black mask

Sh: phew! Main tu dar gait hi

She opens the door when swayum rushes in and holds her by her waist

Removes the mask and kisses her

Sw: surprise!!

Sh: swayum tum tum yaha kya kar rahe ho !

Sw: main yaha tumhai manane aayaho aur tab tak nahi jaoga jab tak mana nahi laita

Sharon gets happy in her mind

Finally isse kuch tu samajh main aaya shuru ho jai swayum 1 2 3

And swayum gives her lilies

Sharon loves lilies

Sh: swayum ye mery liye puts her arms around his necks and both fill the gap between them

Finally both do the rehearsals

After the rehearsal

Sh: swayum gud work humai aise hi performance karna hai ho sage tu isse bahtar

Sw: kar lege Sharon u don't worry gud luck bye

It was 12 oclock and all went to sleep as tomorrow was a big day

Kriya gets up at 8 then 10 and finally 11

Kr: baar baar uth uth kar neend hi nahi howi

Sees the time and quickly rushes

Finally they reach the show

Rey: kriya kya howa u nervous

K: bohot rey daikho abhi swaron ki performance chal rahi hain next humari hain

R: kriya ur soo unpredictable kabhi ur like strong brave like a fighter sometimes beautiful bold aur kabhi tu 5 saal ki bachi am soo in love with u !

K: rey rey I love u too laiken abhi concentrate

Guys abhi itna kafi hain next upate kal ya pir baad main enjoy this update tcxx

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Precape: vinti's entry and twist

I knw u guys would be like vinti;s entry kab hogi

hojai gi don't worry abhi just chill and enjoy hit the like button and comment it will not waste ur time :P

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