Ek Anjana Chehra-Ban Gaya Zindagi FF(MG) thread 2 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
teaser pic of part-32





hows the pics??
remaining pics update ke sath tomorrow...
and love you for ur lovely comments..
neha


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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
mummy me waiting eagerly..
par ek doubt.. geet maan ke ghar mein kya kar rahi hain.. aur maan gusse mein kyun hain???
ufff loads of questions neha... i want update i want update...
jaldi plz... *making baby face*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

mummy me waiting eagerly..
par ek doubt.. geet maan ke ghar mein kya kar rahi hain.. aur maan gusse mein kyun hain???
ufff loads of questions neha... i want update i want update...
jaldi plz... *making baby face*



jyothi dear expressions par mat ja...
only pics dekh...
ye to bas situation ke liye hai...
gussa nahi hai...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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killing pics Gurmeet looking hot
can't w8 for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me waiting neha
come soon and give a dashing update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058








neha i just cant wait for update
sach a hottt teaser😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
#67


first of all sorry for changing in the precap...i have changed something in this update but i promise in next update will give you the tai-chi wali pic...and
love you all for your support...thanks a lot...
huggs to all of you...
and a very happy valentines day...hope you all enjoyed with your friends and with your partners...

part-32

Present….

2 days passed…now maan & geet didn't meet in park because lots of work….but they chit-chat in morning on phone early in the morning….now they used to talk in morning…this is her wake up call…maan called her daily for waking up due to loads of work she started to wake up late but how can maan bear this…he didn't meet with her in park that was very hard for him..so he started to call her in morning

….….after tow days there is dance ball in college….but geet was very sad because she has not any partner….(poor geet koi official boyfriend hi nahi hai..geet maan is ur bf..boy+friend)…jai was taking fun of her..he was teasing from past 3 days that how she will come in dance ball without any partner…..maan tried to ask her that what happened but she didn't tell him….she ditched her every boyfriend because of their low mentality…. she got ready and went to college with nt…she was sad all the while in her classes….jai and nt knew why she is sad….they tried to cheer her but there is no use...there is one more reason of her sadness and that is her friends will do fun in dance ball but she can't join them without any partner….partner is compulsory….all went to canteen and sat on a circle table….

Dev=what happened geet?

Jai=kuch nahi yaar..bechari ka koi partner nahi hai….

Dev=ohh so sad…..parso to dance ball hai..how can you manage…?

Geet=nothing is impossible for geet…..i have two days…kuch na kuch ho jayega…

Meera=ye huyi na sherniyo wali baat….i know you will find your partner soon….geet went for take some sand-witches and rest team started some planning….they are planning something that they don't want to tell geet….they are whispering in each other's ears….geet is not aware from all this…she took sand-witches and came to the table….meera saw that geet is coming so she changed the topic….and asked to nt that what will she wear in the party? All looked at geet and muffled their smile and changed the topic…

Nt=haa yaar I bought a pink dress….till knee length….dev cleared his throat for gaining his attention….

Geet=dev ko dress dikhaya? Kabhi-2 kuch use bhi puch liya kar…

Nt=ha ha theek hai….maine usi ke sath dress liya tha…

Geet=mujhe to nahi dikhaya…geet making faces….

Jai=lo ho gaya dono ka shuru….ab ye nahi khatam hone wala….dev hum ek kaam karte hai..hum hi yaha se chalte hai

Dev=haan..you are correct….girls ka fav topic start ho gaya….

Geet=aisa nahi hai…you can tell us about your dresses…..

Jai=haan bas yahi kaam hai hum logo ko….

Meera=jao jao….meera winked at them..actually they did this for geet..for divert her attention from the partner topic….all get success …..….after the college she went to office and there also her mood was off…she was not paying attention in her work…maan noticed her and called her in his cabin..

Geet=aapne mujhe bulaya maan?

Maan=haan geet..have a seat…

Geet=agar aap mujhe nahi bhi kehte to bhi baithti….and smiled at him…

Maan asked directly to her….what happened? Why are you so upset?

Geet=kuch nahi..looked other side…

Maan=kuch nahi kaise…I have observe you…you are not fin…tell me what's the matter?

Geet=actually na parso hamare college me dance ball hai..

Maan=I knew that…what's the problem?

Geet=problem wo nahi hai..actually partner is compulsory….without partner I can't go there…

Maan=hmm….can I join you? geet was dumbstuck on his sudden ques..

Geet=really..i mean you are a trusty of the college and you'll join me as a partner….

Maan=nothing is important more than you….she touched with his words….

Maan=aur fir I am your bf….mera to haq banta hai tumhare sath jane ka… geet narrowed her brows and gave a questioning look….

Maan=arey you forgot…boy hu and friend bhi hu to hua na bf…

Geet=ohh….thanks…she immediately hugged him….and jumping in joy….you know I was very tensed that I can't go there….but you have solved my problem…………thank you so much….

Maan=GEEET..

Geet=oopsss……achha forgive me….maan smiled at her….and asked…now are you happy?

Geet=happy nahi….maan's expressions changed at once…

Geet=very happy…you know jai was teasing me all the while that I have not my partner for dance ball….mai usey batati hu….

Maan=okay….geet went in her cabin and told to jai that she find her partner…..

Jai=really..who?

Geet=my boss….

Jai=really….jarur tuney hi bola hoga

Geet=no….unhone apne aap hi bola..

Jai=really..pakka fir to he is falling in love with you….

Geet=no ways…

Jai=achha aisa nahi hota to why he is helping you all the while..in every situation…

Geet=I don't think so…

Jai=lagi bet…

Geet=kaisi bet?

Jai=dekh lena…one day you'll realize that he loves you….

Geet=he didn't love me…he is a sweet friend of mine…

Jai=bet

Geet=haan lagi bet…but bet kya hai?

Jai=theek hai to when you get to know that he loves you then you will kiss him in-front of us…

Geet=this is cheating haan….

Jai=everything is fair in love and war…

Geet=dekh na to love hai aur na hi war….

Jai=jo tujhe samjhna hai samjh le…

Geet=if I'll win then you will kiss meera in-front of us…

Jai=okay….

Geet=okay….

Next day in college she called to maan….and told him that she want to do shopping for tomorrow….

Maan=okay..bolo kaha milna hai?

Geet=umm…can you pick me from the college/

Maan=okay….

Geet=ok then come in 20 mins…after 10 mins my lecture will be over….

Maan=okay…maan came and both went for shopping….they went to nearby mall in south extension in delhi….geet dragged him girls section and told him that shop for me…and I'll shop for you…maan nodded,,,, he was happy that she will wear the clothes of his choice…he went to suit's section….and tried to select a suit for her…he loved to see her in suit….he didn't saw her in suit so he wanted to…on the other hand geet was very confused for maan's clothes…at last maan select a white sober suit for her that will go on dance ball….and geet found some perfect clothes for him..like for party….black jeans, grey shirt and with waist coat….maan came to her show her dress….first she make face…and said..i have never wear any kind of suit….

Maan=you'll look beautiful…..trust me…at last she agreed…and she showed his dress…he was much impressed with her choice….he loved his clothes…geet was over joy that he like his taste….they paid the bill went to office directly and engrossed in their work….now the day come….she was thrilled for all the dance ball…she prepared a lot with her dress and matching jewels….today no college so she went to office…she did her today's work because dance ball in the evening…..she came back form the office around 5:30pm in the evening….and straightly went to nt's room…she was getting ready…

Geet=tu itni jaldi ready ho gayi?

Nt=haan actually I am going at meera's place..dev will pick me from there…

Geet=okay….waise aaj dev ko behosh hone se koi nahi bacha sakta…

Nt=why?

Geet=because you are looking super hot…nt waked her shoulder…aisa nahi hai….

Geet=acha aisa nahi hai to why are you blushing?

Nt=tujhe ready nahi hona kya?

Geet=haan haan ja rahi hu… geet went in her room and got ready…she looked at herself in mirror at-least 10 times….

Geet=ye maan ne mujhe suit me kaha fasa diya….but geet you are not looking so bad…waise maan ki choice itni bhi buri nahi hai.(jhalli buri to ho hi nahi sakti tabhi tujhe pasand kiya hai…) nt went to meera's place and dev also went there….geet got ready and straightly went to maan's place..dadi is in hall…

Geet=hii dadi

Dadi=arey geet…come..

Geet=how are you now?

Dadi=I am fine now…and you?

Geet=I am good dadi as usual…

Dadi=pyaari lag rahi ho and patted her cheeks….

Geet=thanks dadi….maan kaha hai?

Dadi=bte he is in his room….koi function hai kya?

Geet=haan dadi…he is going with me in a party…

Dadi=maan aur party?

Geet=kyo dadi..maan party nahi karte kya?

Dadi=bas business parties..

Geet=jo bahut boring hoti hai…

Dadi=haa wahi…wahi boring parties attend karte hai…

Geet=don't worry dadi….dekhna mai unhe badal dungi….dadi thought in her mind..badal to diya hai aapne maan ko…

Geet=achha dadi…mai maan ke paas jaati hu…where is his room?

Dadi=upar se 3rd room…geet went in his room….and her eyes popped open….the room is so classic…everything in white…


everything is in khurana's style…the best thing in the world was in his room….she went inside,…murmured wow….so beautiful…


.the her gaze fell on his big portraits….black and white big photos of his….one pic of his when he was smiling and dev clicked his pic and gifted him on his birthday…


.she caressed his smiling face and lost in his smiling face….then she went on another portrait when maan in car….he was looking really smoking hot…he was n black goggles


…she was tracing his jaw line on the photo….maan was in washroom…taking his shower…then she went on another portrait….maan was looking greek god sipping his drink…


.his bare upper body is sizzling hot and water drops on his body giving him more hotness….that pic was hotness personified….she staring at his bare upper body…at his bare chest….his abs…caressing his pic….her eyes becoming more and more bigger….she was so much lost in his pics that she forgot that where she is? and why she is here? She snapped from her though when nakul came with juice….then she thought what she was thinking about him after seeing his portraits….

Maan=nakul towel dena….

Geet looked at the washroom gate and murmured…ab towel kaha se lau..she opened his wardrobe and somehow found the towel …maan was asking for the towel….geet was taking her steps slowly-2 towards washroom….maan listen the nose of bangles…he knew she is here... she passed the towel…
maan saw her hand & pulled her in – tum
the whole bathroom was filled with steam, light yellow lights reflecting from the
mirror, she could see his bare back,then she saw him standing in shower,,,water was continuously dropping down to his from his hairs to his cheeks touching his lips to his firm jaw lines…making the way to his chest….







she hid her face in her palms holding her
the end of her duppata in one hand ..he moved closer to her, he slowly moved her hand down, she closed her eyes still
tighter, maan was mesmerized looking at her. white suit, straight hair, face red blushing
turning deeper she looked nothing less than his angel….
he raised his hands to her face & moved her silky hair strands behind
she gasped & clutched her duppata & fluttered opened her eyes feeling his fingers
caressing her cheeks then back of her ears. she looked at his wet hair & the
the water droplets falling from his temple to his cheeks down to his firm jaw line…he looked nothing less than a greek god…
both of them were swept to a different world lost looking at each other….maan put his hands on her both sides…..


geet reluctantly – main woh
maan not registering what she saying, moved still closer..caressing her cheeks with his wet fingers….she was staring at his wet chest….then his collarbone…water drops falling from his hairs….maan asked…kya dekh rahi ho geet? Geet already flushed and after that his question turning her more and more in pink….she looked down…she was playing with the corner of her duppata rounding it on her index finger….geet…duppata ko chhodo…and looked at me….she shook her head in no….maan touch her chin with his two fingers and meet her face with his….she looked at his diluted eyes….she is melting in his eyes….tell me geet what are seeing? He whispered in her ear but again geet gazed down and shook her head…..you are looking beautiful in this dress….she shied and promptly replied…apka choice thi to beautiful to….she ate her words realizing what she is saying….to geet? Maan asked….She pushed him back and ran from the washroom….showing him her tongue….maan rested his head on wall….murmured kya karu mai iss pagli ka….. geet replied kuch nahi…jaldi se ready ho jao.we are getting late….maan smiled and wiped himself from the towel….she said outside the washroom….mai aapka nichey wait kar rahi hu..jaldi se aayo….

precap
angry geet
and
new entry

part1 to part-30---> 49842677
part-31

sorry frnds for not giving dance ball..
i have done some changes in this track...
tell me hows this??
waiting for ur comments..
neha


note:-i won't update till 19th feb because i have my internal & external exam in 18 n 19 feb..so have to prepare for that...will update after 19th feb...




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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Awesum update...
Omg!maan's room s so beautiful..
loved jai's bet and bathroom scene..
So a new entry which will make maan jealous,rt?
Happy valentines day to u too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome part...

hayeee geet maan ko frnds k samne kiss kregi
(v knw ye bet ti jai hi jitega :P)

dis part z too good...

best of luck dear 4 ur xam
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear
loved it
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u

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