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Posted: 13 years ago
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Absolutely loved it girl 😊 You should seriously continue!!
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Write away. Loved the thought, amazing writing :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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totally mesmerizing plzz cont soon

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The arms on her back descended to her waist, left bare by her sari. Warm hands rubbed the silky skin there, raising goose bumps. Testing himself, Arnav moved his hands to her stomach and circled her navel. Khushi whimpered, hyper-ventilating, clutching his shoulders harder, crushing the material of his Armani suit. His fingers continued circling her navel, going in and out. Arnav blew gently on her lips, a whisper of his breath bathing her lips and then licked them once.

Khushi was sure she would faint in a moment, she was feeling so dizzy. These feelings, unknown to her before, were robbing her breath and senses. She could feel his tongue licking her lips and she held her breath, waiting for the first touch. After waiting for what felt like a time, she reluctantly opened her eyes, looking questioningly at him. His lop-sided smile was ever-preset in her company these days and now was no exception. 'Khushi, kya hua…kuch chahiye tunhe?' , he looked at her lips and then in her eyes, making his meaning crystal clear. 'Ummm….wo…hum…aap..aapko'. Khushi mumbled as usual. His hands resumed their wandering on her waist, making her losing her chain of thoughts again. Khushi moved her head restlessly, drawing his eyes, to the jewelled clip flashing in her hair, and then to something beyond her.

He smirked , ASR taking over Arnav at this stage of the game as his eyes landed on the cream sherwani (Smita, this is for you), the wheels in his head turning as he remembered his conversation with Aakash at the poolside last night. How mushy and goofy he had sounded, he, the great Arnav Singh Raizada, going gaga over this slip of a girl. 'Yeh feelings, chain sey jeeney bhi nahin deti…' , how true they were. All he could think of these days, were to be with Khsuhi, to talk to her,to see her smile, to hold her close, to taste her lips, he was going insane.

Unknown to him, Khushi 's fascinated eyes were glued to the column of his neck, where a few drops of sweat had gathered. Before she knew what she was doing, Khushi had raised herself on her toes and licked the pearl - like sweat drops on his neck. For a moment, it seemed both of them had stopped breathing and then Arnav groaned, 'Khushi… 'and brought her back to her senses.

The tables had turned with her innocent gesture and now Arnav was the one closing his eyes. Clenching his jaws, he tried to control his breathing and loosened his hold on her waist. The contrary girl-woman did not move away though and he opened his eyes to find her was staring at his lips now, with a glazed look in eyes. The desire to kiss her senseless and devour her completely was uncontrollable now. But the iron will of the mighty ASR proved to be handy at the moment. It was time to spread the insanity; he told himself, why should I be the only one suffering? And decided to withhold the kiss, denying them both the pleasure he knew would burn them.

With a devilish look in his eyes, ASR pushed the sleeve of her blouse and sucked the skin there. Khushi's breath hitched, 'Cho …choriye humme'. He did not pay any attention to her incoherent pleas and continued to suck the delicate skin, biting randomly. He lifted his head after a while and looked, her skin was flushed red and there was a coin sized hicky on her flawless skin. He smiled with satisfaction and admired his handiwork for a while. 'Yeh kar diyaan aapne….hey Devi Maiyyan, ab hum kya karenge?.'' Cried Khushi and pushed him away.

'Karna kya hai?' Kissiko bhi nahin dikhega, tumhare khud ke siwa..' he said nonchalantly and walked way, leaving a breathless Khushi, trying desperately to cover the bite by pulling the sleeve of her blouse.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys, you all are just so so kind... This is such a high to get your comments and likes...Love ya ...

Part 2: Its short...I am at work and behaving like a totally irresponsible employee, ignoring my work, sneaking peeks at IF to read your comments and smiling to myself.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Should I continue or end it here? Do let me know, please please please.😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahahah Bad Arnav leaving a hickey!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely lovely lovely ... and so naughty nd hawt... Wud love to have such a hickey from ARnav... plz ctn sooonnn!
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loved it naught asr very sweet loved it so cute
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That was so well written! You should definitely continue :)

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