KRIA: My Return 2 My Changed World (last part pg8) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
SUPERLIK SUPERLIK...!!!!!😃

hope CVs n Shakti reads dis...amazing...no offence to neone bt i think dat its better dat CVs r writin off Kria n nt repalcing her...it gives me hope dat once Shakti is bak after her training..she cn enter D3 as kria again...n hope dat d new girl is nt fr Rey's lov interest...m ready to see Rey widout bein romantic till Shakti returns den to see him romancing different gal..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is awesome...After a long time I'd a smile on my face thinking abt KriYansh...!!!!
Thank you Karthika dii...You're awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its realy amazing...
i realy realy hope ki d3 main bhi aisa hi ho jaye...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

great, awesome n too gud are just not appropriate words to tell that how much i loved it. 👏
This is the real thing which can happen to Kria's friend's life which has changed completely by her exit, how can they forgive her that easily .
Rey was having a feel that something like that gonna b happen at that day which shows clearly the bond of their souls.😍
Swayam's anger was right n so as of every1, anyone of us wil feel it if this happens with us.
I was sad for Rey n the change which took place in his life when Kria left him, it is d most painful thing to imagine Rey without dance. 😔
But i really loved d change in Sharon n now she understood the importance of dil n dosti n i know she wil help Kria her best 😛
Only one thing i would say continue it if u can n fulfil our uncomplete dream in this way, rest is up to u. 😕
Pls do it for us.
Loved ur work n here is a big 🤗 for u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hope 2 c smthng lyk dis..its awesm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
wow super awesome post
i wish something like this happen in future
really nice written
there were sad n happy mood at same time!!
really great work!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
i really loved it yaar i had tears in my eyes when read this no matter how many times i read this i had tears in my eyes especially when svayam described reys situation if kria leaves then i am sure this v b rey state he v b broken plz update yaar soon cant wait to see and sorry for not replying yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnku so much 4 ths ff ,,,,,,,i hope show me v esa ho
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys dis is my last post on india forum...i don no hw i'm gonna quit but i have too..i'v really luvd writing abt a pair dat i still believ can nvr brk apart and so i'm quitting imagining dat all wud b well and in d end kriyaansh will triumph..but i cant wait around and watch ppl call der luv puppy luv and see rey romance sum1 else...so last time i'm writing abt kriyaansh..a continuation to kriya's return and der perfect valentine's day...hope u all lik it...So 4 d last time i present KRIYAANSH and der never ending luv story...
Love is giving someone the power to destroy you'but trusting them not to.
Rey ws sitting alone in d comman room...his eyes closed...tears were pouring silently dwn his cheeks but der was a sad smile on his face...yes she had cum back...his life had cum back...he had seen her..felt her...she was back but seeing her reminded him of wt his life ws widout her...hw his life ws her...but d fear of loosing her was so owerpowering dat he cud nt bear 2 face her...but his hrt was singing that yes she had returned and her eyes echoed d same emptiness as his...
Sharon slowly walked to d canteen wer every1 ws sitting quietly...
Sharon: hi guys...
Swayam: tum kahan thi auo betho...
Sharon: excuse me but main tum jaise weakling k saath kabhi nai bethungi...
Every1 lukd up in shock...
Neha: sharon kya hua???
Sharon: i said na tum jaise loosers se tho main baat bhi na karun...
Vicky: sharon dont u dare tk 2 her lik dat..
Sharon: vicky tum ek dazzler hoke uski side le rahe ho????
Vishakha: ye dazzler weakling all of a sudden kya laga k rakha hai???louians rmbr...
Sharon: oh really vishakha...ye tumhe kisne kaha???
Swayam: i no wer ur gettin wid dis...sharon tum...
Sharon: itne intelligent ho tho samajh hi gaye hoge...i learnt d meaning of frendship 4m u guys and aaj i feel disgusted...
Swayam: sharon kriya ne...
Sharon: dont tk her name..u guys hav no rit...aaj agar hum dono aur hum sab saath hai tho sirf aur sirf kriya ki waja se...aur tum log..neha bhul gai kaise kriya ws d reason y u and vicky came 2gthr..hum sab including vishakha wer against it but kriya ne tumhe support kiya...aur vishakha jo itne proudly louian bol rahe ho ye sab kaise hua..ye divide kaise hata..its only bcoz of kriya...and u call urself frends...ek baar kisine poocha kyun???y did she leav??? aisa kya hua ki uske life ki sabse important cheeze wo chod k chali gai...did anybody ask????? frends support each other lik she used 2 support u nt ignore and brk der hrt...theek hai usne nai bataya par kyun kisi ne koshish ki pata karne ki???
Neha(crying): kriya neha's best frend..neha ne usse bohat miss kiya..neha nt angry neha just hurt...
Sharon: i understand neha par usse aise boycott karke kya phir usse duur bhejna chahte ho???
Swayam: sharon ek minute side pe aana...
They both walked 2 a corner...
Swayam: kya tumne kriya se baat ki..
Sharon: agar tum iske liye mujhpe chillao..
Swayam: is she ok???
Sharon(smiling): i no u cr...but swayam hw will she b ok knowing dat non of u r der 2 support her...swayam tumse baat karke wo toot gai...der will be no end 2 her misery till u guys dont 4giv her...
Swayam: tum jaanti nai ho maine usse kitna miss kiya hai...every moment i spend wid u an every1 else all i can think is dat d reason 4 it is gone...wo meri best frend hai...main kaise tumhe batun ki mera gussa is just frustration of missing her, happiness of seeing her and bitterness dat she left...
Sharon(smiling): tho bus ab waqt aagaya hai ki saare phirse ek hojae aur kriya waapis hum sab ki life ka wo unbreakble hissa banjae..
They both walked back to every1 else and saw gr8 commotion and argument...
Neha: humne decide kiya hai ki kriya ko hum grand welcum denge...par kaise yeh nai samjh aa raha..
Vishakha: thanks sharon 4 reminding us 4 wat v all stand 4... u r rit v r here bcoz of kriya aur usse hi hum avoid kar rahe hai..
Swayam: achha thanku sorry sab hum baad main karenge abhi sharon ye batao kriya kaha hai..
Sharon: i left her in d neeche wala class room..she needed a minute..chalo v'll all go der...
Swayam: i no kya karna hai...
They all huddled 2gthr and decided...
Kriya was just leaving d class room wen she suddenly heard d song..it was d same song her frends usd 2 sing wen she was upset...it was dil dosti and dance...she slwly walked to d atrium wid tears in her eyes..and she saw all her frends dancing and singing 4 her...wen she came dey made a circle around her and danced..they danced wid happiness dat had been missing for months...it ws back der dil, dosti and finally dance...
Every1 stopped and gave a big group hug to kriya dat almost took her breath away...
Neha(crying): kahaan chali gai thi pata hai main kitna roi hun...all bcoz of u..kaisi frend ho..
Vishakha(crying): and i'm d 1 who never cries and tumne mere image ka tho end kardiya dude...v really missd u..
Simmi and rinny: ya kriya v missd u 2...
Bharat: ab chali mat jana phirse...
Kriya just cried listening to every1...
Kriya: i missed u guys 2...
She den turned to swayam who ws standing quietly...
Kriya: swaya...
He just walked 2 her and hugged her...
Swayam(crying): ab jaane ka bhi socha na jaan lelunga tumhari...nai reh sakte hum tumhare bina...v luv u 2 much...
Nilesh(wink): vicky dekh dekh
Sharon: i'll kill u if u guys say sumthin...
Every1 laughed loudly...
Kriya: i missd u guys sooo much..i'm so sorry guys plz giv me..plzzz..
Vicky: ab bhul jao sab kuch its over...ur back an dats wat matters...
Swayam: sharon one minute..
They walked away...
Swayam: sharon ab hume kria aur rey ko saath lana hai..
Sharon: hume kuch karna padega..
Suddenly from d back...
Kriya: nai...thanks sharon tumne mujhe mere frends se phirse mila diya...par rey nai...usse jo baat hogi main karungi...i'll do everything...shayad yeh baat kisiko including rey ko nai pata ki main usse bohat bohat pyar karti hun...aur ab yeh prove karne ki baari meri hai...
Swayam: YESS!!!!!!! i knew it...rey ka pyar adhura reh hi nai sakta tha..dont worry jo karna hai tum hi karna..par usse jahan bhi leke aana hai uski zimedari meri...
From d back..
Every1: sirf tumhari nai hum sabki...
Kriya: thanks guys..thankyou...
They all walkd to d canteen as one happy group..St.louis was back 2 its old form..every1 was celebrating even d weather was bright and sunny showing dat kriya's universeji was at wrk...
NEXT MORNING - (VALENTINES DAY)
Rey entered college...he had nt slept all nit and was is in a vry confused state..he cud nt wait to see her but he just cud nt face her...
Swayam: hi dude...plz help me yaar kya doon sharon ko???
Rey(still lost): hw will i no...
Swayam: its valentines day...
Rey: tho...
Rey turned and lukd every wer...
Swayam: tu dhoond kisko raha hai...
Rey: kri..um kisi ko nai kyun???? tu kya bol raha tha..
Swayam: kriya ko???
Rey: nai
Swayam: cumon rey hum dono jaante..
Rey: kriya aur mera jo bhi tha wo ab nai hai...and clearly uske side se kabhi nai tha...waise kyun wapis aai hai??
Swayam: jaane k liye aai hai...
Rey: WAT??
Swayam: haan she ws in mumbai wid her mom...just dropped by...aaj bhi aai hai sabse bye kehne...she's goin 2day...tujhse milna chahti thi par u din want 2..tho dats y..anyway wo chod...
Rey: wo kahan hai..
Swayam: wat???
Rey: i'm askin wo kahaan hai abhi??
Swayam(surpressin a smile): atrium..sabko bye ke..
Before he cud complete rey was already running inside..
Swayam(smiling): farak tho tujhe padta hai..bas ab wo bhi tujhse itna hi pyar karti hai..yeh pata chaljaye tujhe tho sab theek ho jaega...
Rey ran in and asked all his frends werever dey met him if dey had seen kria and dey all said she had almost left but mayb she had gone 2 d fire escape...he ran der and entered..
He slowly walked in2 d dark area..his hrt beating...it was months since he had cum here...dis place held d secret to der growing relationship...dey were here wenever dey cud steal time from d world and be wid just each other..but 2day it was empty and unusually dark...he stood der alone..he had again lost her...she again proved hw her absence ceased his existence...he sat on a step and cried...he cried for his loss..he cried for his luv...but suddenly he heard a sound behind him...a figure slowly acended d stairs and quietly stood before him wid tears...he did nt think even 4 a second..he ws so glad 2 see her dat sitting der he just hugged her around d waiste and cried..he cried and cried as he clung on2 her..she wrapped her hands around him tightly and kissed him on his head...dey both just stayed der lost in d moment...all dat mattered was dat dey were 2gthr...
After wat seemed ions of time they broke apart...kriya slowly made rey stand up...she lukd deep in2 his tear filled eyes...he was abt 2 say sumthin wen she put a finger on his lips...and slowly went dwn on her knees...
Kriya(crying): rey aapko shayad yaad hoga ek baar apne kaha tha ki aap kabhi bhi mere saamne jhuk sakte ho...tho aaj main kehti hun main hamesha aapke pyaar k saamne jhukungi...aaj main aapse poochti hun kyun hum dono ekdusre ko itna miss karte hai...kyun reh nai sakte ekdusre k bina...aur jab milte hai tho aisa kyon lagta hai ki duniya ki harr khushi hame mil gai...mere dilne tho jawaab ye diya ki ye aapse bohat bohat pyar karta hai...par aapka dil kya kehta hai???
Rey on hearing dis just pulled her up and embraced her tightly...crying he kissed her all over her face...
Rey: i luv u sooo much kriya..sooo much..nai aata mujhe ab tumhare bina jeena..plzz mujhe kabhi choke mat jaana...main nai reh sakta..mar jaunga ab gai tho...plzz mat jaana..i luv you...
Kriya: rey main aaj apki kasam khati hun kyunki mere liye mere jaan se bhi zyada pyare aap ho..main kabhi aapko chodke nai jaaungi...i luv u 2...
There was a knock at d door..
Nilesh: v'r dying out hear..kya baaki hum andar aake sun sakte hai??
Rey and kriya laughing and crying at same time: aao guys..
Swayam: yess v'r all back 2 our oldselves nw...
Sharon: finally hum sabko hamari sabse keemti cheeze mil gai...
Kriya: haan i came back thinking my wrld had changed but nw i understand nuthing can ever change us or our feelings...bus ab ek cheeze hai...rey aaj valentines day hai lekin main aako wish nai karungi kyonki hamara pyar kisi ek din nai harr din special hai..
Rey(smiling): haan everyday is a kriyaansh day...
Kriya: tho mr reyaansh singhania will u do d honour of dancing wid me or will i have 2 go dwn on my knees again???
Rey: tumhe aaj k baad mere samne kabhi jhukne ki zaroorat nai..wo mera kaam hai..aur rahi baat dance ki tho yeh tumne hi prove kiya tha ki mujhe tumse achhi partner mil hi nai sakti...chalen guys..
They all jumped up a shouted...and every1 walked 2 d rehersal hall..rey and kriya lagged behind...
Kriya: ajj perfect ending hai..mujhe mera dil,meri dosti aur mera dance theeno mil gaya..
Rey: isse ending nai perfect beginning kehte hai...
So thats it guys..long live kriyaansh...i'll miss u all and hope sum day i have reason 2 cum back 2 place dat was bliss...tk cr and keep luving dem...
Edited by nightrose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Karthika ...its such an awesome update...evrytym u write something i just wish k kash kuch aisa hi ho jaye D3 mein...
honestly nw wen thngs r nt write...i just want some miracle to happen n show something similar to wat u hav written...
Edited by sukanyaa - 13 years ago

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