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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
thanks dear😛
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

so r u callin nw? GC is onscreen on sbb @ aaj tak
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 48

Thanks for Likes n lovely comments...😊


The remaining 3 days of Geet Maan's aazadi passed with the magnificent presence of Sudesh between them. Maan cursed him every mili second n Geet was also irritated by him but oblivious to all the mute profanities showered at him Sudesh enjoyed his stay without Krishna to the fullest.

Finally Beeji came back n after pacifying Sudesh n Krishna for like ages, they both patched up n Sudesh went back to his place. Meera also came back 2 days after Beeji's arrival.

It was saturday night when Mahi came to Geet.
Mahi- Saali!! Kutti!! Kamini!!
Geet- Ae gaali kyu de rai hai? What did I do??
Mahi- Not you yaar. That bitch Kiya.
What did she do now??
Mahi- Kya kiya?? She is a curse on this earth. Today she came to my restaurant n with her friends made fun of me. So what if I am a bit fat. (Osheen with raised brow 'a bit???') n I work as a waiteress... Ab mai uski tarah bade baap ki bigadi beti toh nai hu na.
You are right she is... Argggh...!! I also have to settle my scores with that witch.
Mahi- Only one person can help us.
So they both went to devil herself.

Mahi n Geet- Please please pleaaaseee...
Meera- Ok I will help you but
Mahi n Geet- Yeah yeah... We know
Geet- we will do everything you say
Mahi- Haan just help us.
Meera brought a bottle.
Mahi- Yeh kya hai??
Meera- Itching powder!!
Mahi n Geet with slier grin- Superb.

Mahi forwarded her hand for the bottle, Meera slapped her hand away.
Meera- Not the whole bottle idiot, its very precious.
Mahi gave her a wierd look.
Meera-Only small quantity is sufficient.
Geet brought a bowl n Meera gave her half the powder.
Meera- Apply it on her face. 1 spoon will result in itching, 2 spoon in severe itching n 3 will result in itching with white patches which won't go before 5 days.
Ooo... Wow par hum yeh karenge kaise??
Meera- Tomorrow is Sunday n Kiya visits parlour every Sunday.
Mahi suspiciously- Aur yeh tumhe kaise pata hai??
Meera- I know everything.
Saying Meera left.
Mahi- Par abhi bhi... Hum kaise karenge?
Hmm... Leave rest of the plan on me

Maan- Kaisa plan?
Geet hid the bowl behind her back.
Nai wo bas kisi ko sabak sikhana hai.
She smiled evilly looking at Mahi. Maan understood that something fishy was cooking between the two.
Remember one thing those who set traps for others, they themselves falls into it, unknowingly.
Mahi- Haan haan baba Maan Singh Khurana we'll remember your golden double inverted quote.
They both were totally unaffected by his words. Maan shook his head thinking they will repent later.

Geet n Mahi waited outside the parlour n when Kiya entered they both followed her. Kiya asked the parlour girl for her regular facial, manicure n pedicure. Geet n Mahi hid behind the curtains.

Excuse me Ma'am can I help you.
Another parlour girl asked.
Oh! Yes she needs a haircut.
Geet said holding Mahi's head like a basket ball.
Parlour girl- Ok Ma'am I'll arrange for the cut while you decide what kind of cut you want.
The girl went away. Kiya was reading some magazine n no one was with her. They slipped the bowl from the table which had the facepack from behind the curtain. Geet mixed 3 spoons of itching powder in her facepack. Mahi added one more spoon.
Kya kar rai hai?
Mahi- Thats for calling me fat.
Geet also added one more spoon.
N thats for messing with me.

They again placed the facepack bowl on table n parlour girl applied it on her face. Geet n Mahi did a imaginary cart wheel with joy. After almost 5 minutes, Kiya started scratching her face.

Kiya- Oh! Why is it itching so much.
Parlour girl- I...I don't know Ma'am.
She washed her face n appeared an ugly white patched face. Geet clicked her photograph.
Kiya- Aaahh... What are you doing?
Yummm... Revenge is sweet. Geet highfived Mahi n they ran out.

They walked to their car. Kids were playing in garden n the sky was clearer. Their heart was satisfied n the world looked more beautiful. Suddenly one boy kicked the ball in park n they saw it coming towards them. It hit Mahi's hand which had the itching powder. The bowl tossed up in the sky.
Oh! Shit.
Mahi- Save your face!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
nice part... good plan to take revenge...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
oh no!baba MSK ka words sach hone jaa raha hain?
nooo..
but i loved the revenge plan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
part 48
nice plan but poor them...
hope they too dont end up scratching themselves...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
loved it
lagta hai reveng ka plan ulta parne wala hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Superb update.
I loved it.
Next part is gona to be interesting.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesome...superb update...
haste haste pet mein dard hone lage...magar last mein baba maan singh khurana k baat sach ho gaya...he he he...
amazing...
really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

oh shit!!!!!!!!!

itching powder on geet face🤢

dont make MSK words true yaar

geet to dimaag kha jayegi

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