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Shivani

@shivani15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Awesome updates 👏

Just read chapter 1 till 8 in one go.

Your one hell of a writer.

Keep up the good work

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

I had been trying to read your work and some how found your index, am really excited but at the same time sad to see that nearly all of your work is on a protected blog due to plagiarism...

I loved the 8 chapters and the best part was

"Tab bhi nahin agar main tumse kahoon ki woh ghar tumhare bina ghar nahin lagta?"

"Tab bhi nahin agar main tumse kahoon ki woh ghar tumhaare bina mujhe kaatne ko daurta hai?"

"Tab bhi nahin agar main tumse kahoon ki meri aankhen uss ghar mein hamesha tumko dhoondti rehti hain?"

"Tab bhi nahin agar main tumse kahoon ki uss ghar mein tumhaare bina main reh nahin sakta?"

"Tab bhi nahin agar main tumse kahoon ki I love you, Khushi Kumari Gupta. Main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon, tab bhi nahin?"

"Nahin."

beautifully written.

wish i could read more

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Rasagulla_girl

@Rasagulla_girl

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Wow..that was just a super story!!! But was the 8th chapter the last? Won't you continue? Please pm me for your updates!!!

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Just read all 8 chapters, a great FF, sorry it did not continue beyond the 8th chapter,, It was good that Anjali found out the truth early in Arnavs marriage. Payal portrayed as a strong outspoken sister was something the show really should have shown. ... Mission Khushi is in full swing , jalebis - check Nk at Laxmi Nagar - check !!

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Nice conversation between the siblings. Like Anjali in this FF.

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

oh..aab me kya bolun..

came across this story today.. really..

NKs hindi in 8th chapter was funny..kunwaara..

ofcourse khushi is angry and deserves to be respected..

arnav..feel sad for him..

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

UPDATE DEAR - JUST CAME ACROSS YR SS - FAB JOB. PM ME TOO⭐️

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monalisa1234

@monalisa1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Exceptionally wonderful FF. I have been dying to read ur stories since ages dear...If possible please add me to ur pm list and i promise to comment on ur stories on a regular basis...Moreover if possible, plzz give me the link to ur blog since the stories u haven't re-posted yet like this one, could be read by me...

You are indeed an extraordinary writer..

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