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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: Japonica
This is such a sweet story, AT. I really like the way you've portrayed Payal as a sensitive, brave, asssertive and sensible sister and the way Arnav feels for her now. Her plans especially of bringing in NK is smart thinking. Your Khushi is absolutely right in pointing out the tragedy oflove without trust.
Look forward to the next update and the rest of the story.

Thank You so much! :)

I am glad you are liking the story and the characterization! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: pikudika
hi,

just finished reading all of your FFs in one go! You are super talented and you visualise beautifully. You words bring the pictures to life.

this last part, fell in love with the dialogues of NK and buaji... How true to the current track!!

Loved your work and keep up the good work!!

xx

Oh! Okay. Thats a lot of them! Lol! :D

Thank You so much! :)

It makes me feel so humbled when people do that and your words are too kind but I appreciate them! :)

I am glad you like my writing style and this story! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-
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*EDITED FINALLLY*
I adore NK man !!!!!
I mean he plays such an crucial role in the story...I mean ever since he came by, we've got ht ebest of Arnav-Khushi scenes and poor he I miss him so much on the show, He somehow puts a smile on your face in the tightest situations...
And here to I loved the way you made him accept his crush he had on Khushi,I felt like pulling his cheeks and Coochi-Cooing him...And then the came the best part...🤣 Buaji and NK...Oh man this lady gets everyone scared other than ehr secret admirer *Shyam* of course...And poor NK dreaming about I'mu do Nandkishore !! I feel sorry for him at such times man...
And then the way he realises how deeply Khushi loves Arnav and the way he ties to bring out of her that yaa she still does care a lot about Arnav, that her actions differ from her words...I love this guy totally man...And I dont know what he's planned for Khushi now as long as they dont give the poor girl a heart attack Im okay...And Im waiting for the update

PS: Sorry for Unresing it sooo late

Awww! I am glad you like NK! :)

I just love his character and therefore try to utilize him in different ways in my work. :)

@Bold - Hahahahahahaha! I dont think Arnav would appreciate that! ;) :D

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#494

Waiting for the next awesome part of the plan...

please update sooonish.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: jakhushi
Waiting for the next awesome part of the plan...
please update sooonish.

Thank You! :)

Shall update soon.

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Tinu

@007jindal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

Superb going
cont soon
add me in ur pm list

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Nina

@SavyDobrev

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#497

I absolutely enjoyed reading this one too <3 Im hooked to your "in your arms" OS and now this one, beautiful writing

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal
Superb going
cont soon
add me in ur pm list

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: ArShiGurTiKaSh
I absolutely enjoyed reading this one too <3 Im hooked to your "in your arms" OS and now this one, beautiful writing

Thank You, Sanzy! :)

I am glad you like my work.