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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 4

Here' the next part, enjoy 😃
Okay so i continue,

Nimmo , kantaben and kunal went to maturia house. Where everybody welcomes them. Kunal is taken care of extra specially and nimmo looks up and says to God: yeh sub kya hai, merah maan to kar raha hai ke meh sub ko such patadoi, in kiyah to khushia to katam ho dengi. Tum aab bas mujhai apna kam karando, aur merah divorce jaldi si jaldi ho jaha, tum mujha kabi kush nahi honai dogi.
as they are about to leave the house kantaben feels that she wants to stay in maturia house and tell kunal: tum yaad raknah, haat much laanah Nimmo koh, aur yaad rakna keh meray samaan shift kardenah nayah kamrah meh
N and K: Hain kantaben
Nimmo and Kunal drive from the maturia house and on the way home Nimmo spots a pani puri alah, Nimmo eating pani puri and asks Kunal if he wants any.
Somebody from behind replies: eww pani puri, no way. I neva thought Kunal Segal ka itnah bhi burah vakt ayaga.
Nimmo and Kunal look around and find an attractive looking girl standing nearby, Kunal looks the other way and says to himself this cannot be happening to me 🤢
Nimmo looks aroung at Kunal and says : Kunal wat are u lookin that way, ladki yaha peh hai. Nimmo looks amused 😆
Girl: Kunal yeh kya hai, tum yahan par kaisai?
K: Hi, Meetah. Haan woh actually... he looks around, looks at Nimmo who seems to be enjoying the drama and eating her pani puri. He grabs Nimmos plate and puts it down. He smiles down at Nimmo and then says: Meetah, yeh meri biwi hai, Namrata. Hum actually outing kah lian ayi hai 😉 , you know how it is newlyweds. Nimmos trying to get away from Kunal
K: Yeh kya hai Nimmo, humari shaadi bhi ho gayi aur ab bhi tum itna sharmati hoi
Nimmo looks at Kunals face then at Meetah , shakes her head slightly
K: Actually Nimmo i think thats why i love you sooo much 😃 tum itnah sharmati ho. Actually Meetah, he looks round at Meetah with his arms around Nimmo. Thats wat i find so hot about her.

Nimmo splutters at this and stares at Kunals face 😲 M: Oh to yeh tumhari wife hai, she gives Nimmo a very dirty look.
K: Hain, Kunal looks at Nimmo and puts his arms around Nimmo tighter, yehi meri wife hain
N: Actually... Metah , right?
M ignores Nimmo completely and stares at Kunal. and says You know Kunal some of us were going to the paradise club and mayb if u drop ur wife, looking nimmo up and down, at home then u can meet me there 😈, u know we had soo much fun last time
This time Kunal is the one to splutter, Nimmo looks at him in amusement
N: Hain Kunal yeh tum...
Kunal grabs Nimmo's arm and tells Meetah: One minute

Kunal and Nimmo are a little bit away from Meetah,
K: Yeh sub kyah hai, meri madat karnah ke ilavah tum to...merah keema banana hai kya?
N: Kunal, its a contractal marriage u can do anything u want i wont stop u she says smiling 😈
K: Nimmo ab tum mujhai istamal kar rahi ho, u realised that i dont want to see meetah and instead of helping me tum bhi merah kilaaf ho. Nimmo tum to meri dost ho, meri please madat kar do. Yeh Meetah to bus ek leech ki tarah hai, yeh to merah koon choos legi. Yeh ladki pagaal hai please mujhai pachalo 🤓

N: tumharah yeh kam karnah matlab tumhari madaat karni isah mujhe kya milah ka
K: Nimmo, he looks at Meetah who seems to be getting nearer to them waiting for an answer
K: Nimmo tum to meri dost hoi, tumhai jo kuch bhi chahiay mai donga, please meri madat kar do

Okay thats it for now and see u next time hope u enjoyed the story and thanks for the compliments, oh yeh the precap:
N: Kuch bhi
K: Hain Nimmo Kuch bhi
N: Mujhe.... 😈

okay guys enjoy and bye ❤️
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW Starcity, that was amazing 👏 👏 👏 keep posting............ cant wait to read the next part, jaldi post karna 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh yeah, ek baat kahoun? mind nahin karna.......... tum apni yeh script Ekta ko bhej do, i wud luv to c it acted out 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u gotta cont soon plz plz
its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow..it's gr8 😉 ..well done 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 5

Thanks for the positive feedback and the career advice (princess angel 😆) Heres the next part:

Okay let me replay, kunal and Nimmo at pani puri alah and kunals old girlfriend Meetah is there, Kunal want Nimmo to get rid of Meetah for him.
N: Kuch bhi
K: Hain Nimmo Kuch bhi
N: Mujhe... bed chahiay
K:BED 😕 , tumhe bed kisliyah chahi aiye. Meetah gets closer. Okay dont worry u can get any bed u want, just help me out Nimmo
N: Kunal mujhe lagrahah hai that ur not getting my drift. I mean i want to sleep on the bed, in... our room
K: Tum bhi na Nimmo kuch achah mang lehna ta, woh menah tumhai kub rokahta. Ur helping me out, sure u can sleep on our bed
N: Kunal i dont think ur getting my hint. I want to sleep on the bed and u can sleep on the sofa
K: Sofa magar... Meetah is getting closer so Kunal says,okay... yah sure wateva Nimmo just help me out

Meetah is closer still and says: hey kya kusoo, pusoo hoi rahi hai, come on kunal...
N whispers to Kunal: Okay i'll help but u have 2 choices, number 1 i help u and meetah will neva come near u wen i am there or the 2nd is that meetah will neva come near u eva, which one?
K: Im giving u the bed so meri ma number 2, she should neva come near me ever again
M: Kunal come on ditch the wife, and we can go have fun 15.gif , Hum bohat maaza karah kai, Meetah looks at Nimmo again giving her a dirty look and reaching out for Kunal

Nimmo steps forward and looks very angery 😡 ,she slaps Meetah,
N:Miss Meetah, tum andi ho kya? tumhari akay nahi button hai kya? Tum dekh nahi sakti kah meh aur meri PATI apas meh baatan kar rahin hai. Tumhai mangalsutar merah dakay nahin deta, aur meri mang meh sindoor.
Nimmo turns around to look at Kunal: God sweety tum aisai loko ko jantai 😎. Wat a 😉 loser .
Nimmo looks at Meetah again and says: itnah sub sun kar tum yahan hi ho, tumeh koi bhi akal hoti to, tum kab ke chalchati. Do i have to spell it out for u me and my pati want u to go away, we're trying to get rid of u
Meetah is dumbstruck, no one in her entire life has spoken to her in such a way, she turns and looks at Kunal
K: Hain meta, this is another thing i find so sexy about Nimmo, shes so possesive.
Kunal turns and hugs Nimmo, he has his hand around Nimmo and says: u beta go Meetah u dont wanna end up like the last girl that tryed to flirt with me...
he whispers to Meetah: and that time Nimmo wasnt even with me, but she still found out...
he talks louder: Hain Nimmo hum chal tah hain
N: Bye Meetah 😈

Kunal with his arms around Nimmo turn around and walk to their car and drive away, Meetah is still standing there in shock 😲
Kunal and Nimmo are in the car
K: Thank u so much Nimmo, u are such a good friend
N: and Kunal baby (she says slyly) i hope u remember ur vaada too 😉
K: yeh, yeh u get the bed. But God Nimmo where did u get to learn to act like that?
N: Apni kanta masi hain nah, uskah saat rahtay rehtay so mein sub kuch seek gay ti
K: U were like a woman possessed Nimmo, wow at least Kantaben comes in handy sometimes

Okay thats it for now, i'll write sum more after i finished revising (lol, got exams coming up) prob this after noon. Hope u guys liked it and next install is gonna be really funny, precap:
Everyone is at the dinning table eating breakfast. Kunal comes in yawning 🥱
varsha chachi: kya huwa Kunal kal raat Nimmo nah tumhai sonnah nahi diya, everyone looks at Kunal who looks half asleep and then Nimmo who is blushing like mad 😳
K: chachi....

Okay hope evryone liked it ❤️
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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keep the posts cumin starcity 👏 and all the very best for ur exams 😃 inshallah u'll pass with flying colours 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 6

oaky so im bak (finished revising, for today), heres the next part
Replay, Nimmo gets rid of Meetah for Kunal and ther on their way home.
As Kunal and Nimmo got into their room after dinner Kunal turned on the TV and Nimmo looked around wondering wat on Earth shud i do, luckily she was called downstair and dadaji told Nimmo how much her being their bahu meant to him. As Nimmo came back up again into their room after all the excitement (Kunals cousins had grabed her and wanted to know everthing about their new bhabi and how Kunal and Nummo started to love each other), Nimmo is feeling really guilty, she looks around the room and Kunal isnt there. She goes out to the balcony and talks to god: ab tum mujse kitah choot balaoh gai, kabhi to bus karo. 😔

She feeling very tired and comes bak into the room again and finds Kunal ready to go to sleep on the sofa,
K: Thanks again Nimmo, ur great!
N: No problem. With that she gets ready to go to sleep and she gets into her bed. Kunal switches off the light and Nimmo thinks about all the lies that she is telling everyone and how disappointed everone will be wen her and Kunal get a divorce. Kunal is fidgetting on the sofa trying to go to sleep.
K: Nimmo mujhe neend nahin arahi hai
N: Toh mein kya karon
K: Yeh sofa bohat uncomfortable hai, tum yahan kal kaisa pah gay ti?
N: Majboori ti meri, aur aaj tumhare majboori hai 😈
Kunal tosses and turns sum more and gets up
K: Nimmo i cant sleep here
N: So wat shud i do? its not my fault. Bacha pampered Kunal cant go to sleep on the sofa 👎🏼
Kunal grabs his pillow and the sheet and walks around the bed. Nimmo gets tense
N: Yeh tum kya kar rahah ho
K: Dikay nahin dayta, mein apni bed me sonah ja rahan hoin
N gets off the bed: No way, u cant do that. u said Kunal... u promised
K: Magar Nimmo mujhe...
N: I said it before Kunal not my fault. u have to sleep on the sofa 😉 Kunal turns around again with the cushion ansd sheet in his hand. He's in a huff and he lays bak down on the sofa. Nimoo turns around on the bed and goes to sleep immediately 🥱

Everyone is at the dinning table eating breakfast. Kunal comes in yawning
varsha chachi: kya huwa Kunal kal raat Nimmo nah tumhai sonnah nahi diya, everyone looks at Kunal who looks half asleep and then Nimmo who is blushing like mad
K: chachi aur kya,Kunal doesnt register wat chachi is implying to
N:Nahin woh... Nimmo looks daggers at Kunal 😡
K gets wat chachi is implying to: Nimmo toh mujhe kabhi sonah do deti nahin hain, all the younger kids at the table splutter, the elders are just looking at each other, Nimmo gives kunal another one of her i'm gonna kill u then eat u looks
rishab: Kya kahan... rushab splutters rather awkwardly and not believing his ears
K: U know raat par soaps dekti rahti hain, Kunal adds sweetly. Everyone turns bak to their own food, after getting over the shock.

Kunals cousin: Yahan par aoh bayai, Nimmo bhabhi ke pas betoh. His cousin vacates his seat for Kunal. kunal sits down,
dada: chal Nimmo apnai pati ko kuch tum kilah do
N who is eating her toast looks at the others, she thinks to herself god ab mujhe iska naukar bhi bana parah ka she gets an idea and grabs the karela juice off the table fills up a glass and looks at Kunal
N very sweetly says: yeh lo Kunal i know how much u love karela juice 😉, everyone else does a double take and Kunal takes the juice off Nimmo and smiles at the others 😊, he starts smelling the juice and looks at everyone else who are all just looking at him he slowly, steadyily takes a sip of the juice like its contagious or something 🤢 , Nimmo then grabs the celery and carrot stick and dip and give them to Kunal
N: Here u go Kunal, breakfast
Paminder: Honeybuns, yeh sub celery,etc humarah Kunal kata nahin hain
Kunals cousin says: Yah he says its rabbit food
N looks around at the others, smiles sweetly 😊 , and says: hey sub hi to Kunal aaj sah kahay ga, usnah mujhe kaha ta ke woh diet peh hain. She looks around the table and lowers her voice: U know, mota bohat kogaya hain after all the shadi ka kaana.

Kunal looks around the table and then to himself, he think fat, me no way 😎 , he gets a brilliant idea and starts munching on one of the carrot sticks. Nimmo sits down and carries on with her toast
K: Yah sub kya hain Nimmo, he takes the toast off Nimmo. everyone else at the table are looking at the pair (husband-wife, 2 man circus 😆 )
K: Tumhain yaad nahin hain, tumne to kaha ta key tum ek no carbs diet pe ho. He hand Nimmo a celery stick and says: aur yeh get up mein tum kyoun ho,he looks her up and down
N: in caproh mein kya burai ain 😕
K: Vasay caproh mein to koy burai to nahin hain lekin tum neh to kahan ta ke aaj se tum merah saat merah 10 mile run kah liya jao ki

Everyone else on the table looks amused,
Dadaji: wah kaisi jodi hain, abhi sa saat saat jog ke liyay jaingay. Ek dusri ki pasand aur napasand abhi sai jantah hain 😃
Kunal grabs Nimmos arm, stands her up and says: aoh Nimmo hum ab jog keh liyan jatan hain, aur aadah gantah mein bapas ajain gai
Nimmo thinks to herself 10 miles mein to kabhie ek mile bhi nahin jog kahi hain 😕

Nimmo and Kunal set out for their jog
K: Nimmo ajoh, Hurry up. Ur soooo slow. i wud have finished this jog by now if i hadnt brought u along, hurry up Nimmo
N:Teek hain Kunal tumhari hi to fault hain, key hum is jog geh leyen ayah teh

Okay thats it, the next precap:
Dadajiis very angery:Kunal tumhain Nimmo ka kyaal rakna chahiya ta na, aur bachari Nimmo. Usah dekoh, tumhari bachari biwi ki toh....
Mathurias rush into the house
Anand: Nimmo koh kya hua 😳
Dada: Nimmo koh actually...

Okay then hope u enjoyed it and bye
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please write more. it's so good.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 7

Thanx alot for the comments guys, i'll write the next part now
Replay: Nimmo and Kunal are on their 10 mile jog.

next part :
Dadajiis very angery:Kunal tumhain Nimmo ka kyaal rakna chahiya ta na, aur bachari Nimmo. Usah dekoh, tumhari bachari biwi ki toh....
Mathurias rush into the house
Anand: Nimmo koh kya hua?
Dada: Nimmo koh actually...

Everyone looks at Nimmo
N:Papa... meh... meri
Dadaji: woh actually Nimmo ki ankle torah sprain hua hai
Pam: Are u sure honeybuns, i mean i not swollen or anything.
Varsha and dadaji give pam a dirty look
Daddi speaks: Parminder, she looks stern : yeh tum kya keh rahi ho
P taken aback that mumiji is telling her off
P: Sor..., pam cant say the word sorry and says to herself i'm pam seghal i shud never have to say sorry to anyone. Pam smiles at Nimmo, says: Hope u get better, and then walks out of the door
Anand: Nimmo tum teek to ho na?
Swati: ankle bohat tok to nahin rahahay?
Kantaben whispers to Kunal: Meh ek din Nimmo ko chad kah gay ti... she looks at Kunal as if to say this better not be ur fault or else
KB: Yeh sub kaisay huwa ta?
Dadaji: woh actually Nimmo aur Kunal aaj jog kah leyah gay tai
Nimmos family look at her and think jog! Nimmo never goes on jogs,
Swati: yeh Nimmo ko kya hogai hai? Woh to kabhie nahin jog par jaati hain, and the others continue discussing this
Whilst Naina is getting jealous with all the attention Nimmo is getting, Soeone if fluffing her pillows, got some ice for Nimmos ankle or basically helping Nimmo, Naina thinks to herself, wah shadi seh pehle jab Nimmo ko chot ragtiti toh sab kehtaytah keh yeh sub kuch bineh hain.aur shadi kay baad itni uski saava kar rahai hai. I really need to get married soon to get pampered like Nimmo. 😉 ,
Neetah: Ab yeh sub kya hain, yeh pati patni koh hum ukalah chor deengah
Dadi: Lekin aaj raat ko to reception party hain, Nimmo ko teek honnai hoga 😳
Dada: Preet bachari larki to gar tur kar aa nahi saki ti, aur tum party ki baat kar rahi ho, aaj party hain legin Nimmo teek nahin hain to hum ek aur party rakange Nimmo ke teek honnai ke baad
Nimmo thinks to herself, thank god i got away with that 😉

Everyone exits the room, Nimmo and Kunal are left in the room
K: Tumhai apne ankle zaroor sprain karni ti 😡
N: Yeh bhi meri fault hain, yeh sub tumhari fault hain! Tumneh to kaha ta Nimmo mereh saat 10 mile jog keh liyah aayeh gi she says immitating Kunal 😈
K: Hain lekin tumseh kisnah kahan ta ke tum mujhain karela ka juice denah
N: Menah tumhain karela ka juice hi diyah tah. Tumhari laat tornah ki koshish nahin ki ti 😡
K: Hain, woh... okay i'm so.. sor...
N: The word is sorry Kunal, wat? are u not used to saying it?
K: Hain wohi to meh keh rahan ta, he turns and about to walk away
N: Kya? tum kya keh rahay tai Kunal, Nimmo says slyly wanting to hear Kunal say it
K: I said..
N: wat did u say Kunal?
K: I said sorry, happy! He thinks to himself God i've never said sorry to anyone in my life and for the 1st time i'm saying it to my contractal wife.
Kunal is about to walk away
N: Tum kahi ja rahain ho 😒
K: Mein toh..
N says really loudly: aohhh, ohh my ankle. Kunal looks at Nimmo and turns around aab kya?
N: Mujhain book lag rahin hain! 😭
K: Tumhare laat book ke vajah sah hurt hoin rahin hain kya? Kunal looks Nimmo up and down again thinkin is she acting
N: No, my legs is hurting and i'm hungery tooo. Get me some food Kunal
K: I'll call someone up
N: Ohhhh...
K: Aab kya? 😵
N: I need my pillows fluffed 😉
K: Fine, Kunal walks to Nimmo and fluffs her pillows

Nimmo has Kunal catering to all her whims by blackmailing him and reminding him that she has sprained her ankle thanks to Kunal.
KK comes in and tells Kunal that dada says that Nimmo and kunal dont have to come to the party and that they'll have a reception party after Nimmo gets well
K: Is the party called off?
KK: No its too late to do that sir, but tum donoh koh nahin jaanah parehga.
Kunal looks at Nimmo and says no way am i staying here and doing all Nimmos jobs for her. Kunal runs out of the room and convinces dadaji that he will go to the party,and tell him that Nimmo said that atleast one of us shud go.

Kunal gets ready to go whilst Nimmo is one the bed looking bored
N: Fine i'll stay at home, i mean it was obviously my fault for spraining my ankle
K gets out of the bathroom looks at Nimmo and says: Your emotional blacmail is not gonna work anymore Nimmo. I'm going to the party
N: u know u have to take kantaben with u too, according to the contract
K: No prob woh toh wahin par aanah wali hain
N: Fine 😛
K: Fine. tumhare saat KK hogah, kunal is feeling guilty and then adds: yah tumhain kuch chahain to KK ko batah denah

Okay thats it, and the
precap:
Kunal comes to home and walks up the stairs, he looks really angery and says to himself, KB bhi nah, sarah merah maaza barbad kar deti hain, issah acha to mein Nimmo koh apnah saat legaar jatah. Nimmo toh soh rahi hogi, mujhain Nimmo keh saat yeh sub nahin karnah chahiyah tah, Kunal opens the door very lightly thinkin that Nimmo is asleep.
The lights are of and Nimmo and KK are on the bed and they are....
What are KK and nimo doing?? Tan...tan..tah

I know guys cliff hanger, 😈 But i couldnt resist it 😉, i'll cum bak l8r and update ❤️
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago

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