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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for the comments guys, they make me wanna write more, keeps writing comments to know whether u like the story or any suggestions. Its nice to hear that ppl appreciate your hard work. Anyways here goes

Chapter 22

Replay: Kunal in hurt and dadaji has a plan up his sleeve

Today:
Kunal gains consciuos and is whispering only one name
K: Nimmo....Nimmo...
Dadaji who is at Kunal's side opens his eyes and looks at the clock, it's 11.00pm and Kunal has finally gained conscious, dadaji runs out to call the doctor.
The doctor tells dadaji to stand in the coridor as he checks Kunal over. The doctore comes out with his head lowered.
Dadaji worried: Doctor, kya huwa? aap aisay...
Doctor: Actually mr segal, there seems to be some complications, it seems that after the heavy blow to Kunals head he has no brain dammage, yet...
Dadaji: yet what doctor?
Doctor: It seems that Kunal has short term amnesia
Dadaji confused: Short term amnesia?! Is ka kya matlab hain?

Doctor: This means that Mr Kunal has forgotten the last 1 yr -6 months of his life. It seems that the patient doesnt realise that we have moved on in time he still seems to think that we are 6 months back in time
Dadaji: Legin doctorji, if Kunal has forgotten... then how does he remember Nimmo's name, they have only been married for 4 months
Doctor: Actually although mr seghal is saying the name he has no idea who Nimmo is. All he knows is that the name holds an importance to him. Aap andar ayeh aur aap koh sab patah chal chaiay ka.

The doctor and Dadaji walk intp Kunal room and question Kunal, they realise that all Kunal remembers of the last 6 months of his life is the name Nimmo and does not even realise who Nimmo is

Dadaji and the doctor go back out again
Doctor: ab aap ko samach ayi mr seghal, do you realise what i was talking about.
Dadaji: thank ypu doctor, i'll take the situation from here

Dadaji finally back at Kunal
dadaji: aur yehi tumhari aur Nimmo ki prem kahani hain.
Kunal reflects on everything that dadaji has just told him
Whilst dadaji thinks to himself that 'i have explained everything to Kunal and he seems to believe me to, ab toh koy bhi nahin kuna aur nimmo ko alag kar sakay ga'

Whist back at the seghal house:
Dadi is shouting orders: aur yeh dhi saaf karoh, aur woh wahan par nahin!! Merah Kunal ghar arahaa hain aur tum lok sub kuch saaf hona chahi ye...
KB whispers to Nimmo: Lagta hain jaisay Kunal nahin legin Queen Vistoria anay wali ho.
N: KB please, mujain toh kushi ho rahi hain keh Kunal finally ghar arahaa hain, legin dadaji phone par bata rahain teh ke koy complications hain
KB: Kaisi complications?
N: Wohi toh Mehnay unsey poocha tah aur unho nay kahan ke jab woh ghar ayeng ke toh humay sub pataa chal jaay ka

KB: Yeh dadaji bhi na baat toh aisay kartay hain jaisah woh FBI hoin
N: KB!!
kb: Aur kya itni suspense
Pam chachi starts to yell:Chup, chup. Kunal arahaa hain

The door opens Kunal and dadaji walk in
Kunal has a bandage on his forehead, as Nimmo looks at it she starts to feel guilty once again, if she wasnt holding that surf bard then none of this would be happening

Kunal comes in and starts to greet everyone, he greets pam, dadi, aniket with a little apprehension, samar backs up as Kunal goes to greet everyone else very enthusiastically, he even hugs and takes the ashirwaad of shrada and varsha, he meets all his cousins also. Then as he gets closer to KB and Nimmo, he looks confused and seems to be thinking hard.

At this point dadaji steps forward and says: yehi toh KB hain aur tumhari pyaari biwi Nimmo.
Kunal stops looking confused, smile and then bends down.. and touches KB's feet for ashirwaad. KB who is amazed at this jumps back.
KB looks confused at Kunal: Huh? yeh sub...
Dadaji: KB aap Kunal ko ashirwaad nahin dogi?
KB looks around, dadi and pam seem to be in shock
KB: Hain, hain zaroor... jeetay raho

Kunal finally looks up at Nimmo, gives her a cute smile and hugs her, Nimmo who is awkward just stand there and before Nimmo can react Kunal gives her a kiss on the cheek.
Nimmo stands awstrucken as do the other family members, KB looks like she could kill Kunal
K whispers to Nimmo: I missed you sooo much... sweety

Nimmo looks around to see who Kunal is addressing, maybe oscar came down stairs at some point. But no, nobody was there and Kunal was looking straight at Nimmo, he doesnt seem to be joking or acting and has an honest look in his eyes

Dadaji: hain aur bachara Kunal neh Utay huwa hi pehlay Nimmo ka naam liya tah

Okay that's all for now. But as if u guys will remember i actually started off the story saying that one of my characters would get amnesia and it finally happened (if u dont remember then read it again,lol). Anyways here's the precap.
Precap:
N: Oh my God Kunal what are u doing?.
Nimmo and Kunal look straight at each other
K: Giving my beautiful wife a hug and a kiss, dadaji told me how you

PS. Wow Nimmo was looking good in todays programme, how long do u think she will be maintaining the look? But come on Kunal wake up!!! Some times i feel like shaking the guys i mean is he blind! he can blatently see that naasha is usung him 😡
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was rocking part .lovedt it but plz don't hurt nimmo anymore.i m happy u r continuing ur fic at such a time 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Okay so today I'm in a good mood and I was late so I'm writing 2 long chapters

Chapter 23

Recap: So Kunal has woken up and everyone finds out that Kunal has Short term amnesia, Kunal comes home and greets everyone with enthusiasm

Today's:
Dadi is watching all the greetings in suspicion
Dadi: Legin Kunal toh.. who.. mera matlab hain.. why is he acting so strange??
Dadaji: actually the problem is…
and dadaji explains the situation about Kunals Short term amnesia and yet conveniently leaves out parts of the story and does not tell anyone about what he has told Kunal, about dadji's own version of events.

Kunal is upstairs freshening up whilst the family members are talking about Kunal's condition and dadaji tells everyone how they should not stress Kunal as his mind is getting used to things abd that Kunal shall remain at home for a little while, as he should fully recover

Nimmo goes upstairs into her and Kunal's bedroom, she goes to open the bathroom door and realises that it is locked as Kunal is taking a bath. She sits down on the vanity table and thinks about the turn of events. She thinks about their marriage, about their honeymoon… about Natasha… Natasha!!! 'Oh my God' she thinks to herself' Natasha where could she be? What will the poor girl be thinking?' Nimmo and KB had left without telling Natasha anything. They had been in such a rush and forgot such a vital thing. ' Oh no wat will happen to Natasha and Kunals prem kahani?' Nimmo thinks to herself

As Nimmo is in deep thought, Kunal comes out of the bathroom. He looks at Nimmo and then thinks to himself' strange how 6 months ago Kunal seghal was always avoiding marriage and now I'm married, a love marriage..that's wat dadaji had said. Dadaji said that we got married because we were, ah, are in love. Do I love Nimmo.' He looked at Nimmo and thought again ' she's such a seedi saadi girl, it must have been love at first sight.. why else would I have goten married to such a simple girl. But I don't feel any type of love for her… now. I feel a type of fondness, but love? If only I can remember what has happened in the last 6 months, but dadaji has told me everything and '. Kunal looked Nimmo up and down ' Nimmo is pretty, in her own way, without the ponytail she would be better, am I feeling fondness for her or love , this has to be love.' Dadaji had told Kunal that in the past 6 months Kunal had fallen head over heals in love with Nimmo and had demanded to get married to her immediately, however because of the class and caste issue there had been some misunderstanding between husband and wife. Ddadaji had even told stories about Nimmo and Kunal's relationship. I guess I'll soon remember everything and things can only get better after that. But for now I'll try my best to keep Nimmo happy

Kunal looks up at Nimmo again, she is still lost in thought and looks very serious yet completely in her own world. Kunal comes behind Nimmo and suddenly hugs her, Nimmo jumps and Kunal kisses Nimmo's cheek again, once again Nimmo jumps and feels very awkward
N: Tum kya kar rahay ho Kunal?
Kunal lets go of Nimmo. Nimmo and Kunal look at each other straight on

K: I'm giving my beautiful wife a hug and a kiss. Dadaji told me how you stayed by my bedside at the hospital, all the time and how u took great care of me, thanku sweety.
Kunal goes forward once again to give Nimmo a Kiss but Nimmo backs up, she looks him up and down and thinks to says ' you must have completely forgotten everything', I should remind him. That's the least I can do after all it was all my fault that Kunal forgot his yardash in the first place.

K: My sweet wife why are being so modest the doctor told me how it was me who wacked your surfboard, u didn't do anything intentionally sweety
Sweety? Nimmo looks around the room to see whether Kunal was acting for anyones sake, no just the 2 of them
N: Kunal you need sleep so why don't u sleep in the bed and I'll take the sofa
K: Sofa?! No need honey we'll sleep together
N: No, no, no, I'll be fine you go to sleep
K gave in and went to bed
Nimmo was relieved that at last KUnal seemed to be getting back to himself, but what was with the honey's and sweety's?
She watched him sleep on the bed and turned around and went to sleep on the sofa



Chapter 24

Nimmo woke up with a smile on her face feeling warm and comftable, she snuggled closer to the source of warmth, then felt an arm around her.
Instantly she jumped
'Wat?... This?... 'she thinks to herself she looks around and realises that she is on the bed, with Kunal. She jumps off the bed and thinks to herself ' how on earth did I get there?'
She looks down and sees Kunal sound asleep. She turns to the bathroom and decides to ask Kunal later how she had gotten on the bed from the sofa.
As Nimmo dried her and came out of the bathroom and goes and sits on the vanity mirror

She instantly jumps when someone puts their arms around her, turns around and looks at Kunal.
N: Kunal wat's wrong with u? u almost gave me a heart attack
K: Nahin toh meh toh sirf apni biwi she romance kar nah ki koshish kar raha tah, I love u sweety
Sweety!!! Oh now she wanted to do something intentionally what was with Kunal, she had to tell him everything.
N: KYA?! Tum teek to ho na Kunal. Tumain amnesia hain lekin tum toh aisay act kar rahai ho, as if u love me.Oh come on Kunal snap out of it, ur not acting are u? Our agreement ke mutabik, no touching, no kissing and definitely no sweety's!!

Whilst Nimmo is saying this Kunal just keep's staring at Nimmo as though he didn't hear a word
N: Kya?! Why are u looking at me like that, is there something on my face?
K: Nahin toh, I'm just looking at my gorgeaous wife. Nimmo cringes and Kunal continues: Look Nimmo I don't know about this agreement and no I'm not acting, why would I ? But i do know that… we obviously had problems in our married lives dut dadaji told me everything and plus Kunal seghal always says that he'll only marry the person he loves, so I love u!
N: Huh?
K kisses Nimmo on the cheek and says: I said I love u!
N: You said… wait a minute, what did dadaji tell you?
K: Dadaji told me everything
N: Everything! I'll tell u everything, I'll tell u the truth! This marriage of ours is a faade, this is a contract marriage
K: Oh come on Nimmo, such lies! I love u and u love me, it's s obvious
N: then u obviously need ur eyes checked!
K continues: Just because there were ups and downs in our marriage doesn't mean that you can say all this. Don't try and take advantage of my situation
N: No because someone already has
K: Wat do u mean by that? No… forget it. K walks up to Nimmo and gives her a hug! And says: You are mrs Kunal Saghal and always will be

Nimmo gets out of the hug and replies: No way, I'm your contract wife for a year!
K looks at her and says: Fine where's the contract tehn
N: The contract, she walks to the cupboard, she turns it upside down looking for the contract and then remembers how Kunal had taken the papers and told her that he would put them in a safe place
N: You put them somewhere
K says sarcastically: Yeh obviously, I put them in a safe place, right?
N:Yeh, you said… you said that…
K cuts her and said: yeh sure Nimmo

Kunal holds Nimmos shoulders lightly and looked her in the eyes, he said: Nimmo we've had our ups and down with this marriage because of all the difference between us, I've put u through a lot in the last 4 months. But I promise I'll correct my mistakes and we'll be together for ever
Nimmo gets caught up in Kunals word, she finally snaps out of it and thinks to herself 'wat is wrong with me, acting like that… as if I'm in love with Kunal seghal of all ppl, NO WAY!'

N: I have evidence, KK. KB and Rishab…
K: Nimmo evidence can be created. All that matters is that we are finally together, u are my wife Mrs Kunal seghal. You are my love
Nimmo thinks how nice it would feel for someone special to care for u, as Kunal thinks he does for Nimmo. He's lost his memory yet I have still have mine there is no way I'm gonna take advantage, I've got to make him remember.

KB: Usneh ka kaha?
N: hain! Who kehta hain that he loves me and that i…I love him
KB goes into a coughing fit, KK passes her some water and she gets back to normal
KB: Usnay!... Meh usay abhi dek ti hoin
KK: KB, santi rakiyeh. Sir ki yardash chalgay hain. Kunal sahib bhi wohi sochan kay jo unhain bataya jay ka
KB is going crazy and making hand movements: Legin usnai kaisey himmat ki kay… Meh to usay zinda hi mar…
KK hold KB hand, she looks at him and he lets go
KK: I'm sorry legin Kunal sahib…
N: Don't worry KK. Humain gusah nahin honna chahiyeh. Ab hum sub ko Kunal ki yardash bapas laaneh ki koshish kar ni chahiyeh, usay sab yaad dilana parayga… who contract labnain parayga

Will Nimmo, KK and KB plan succeed, will they make kunal remember everything. Let me know if you liked it. Dont worry soon they'll be some romance between Nimmo and Kunal

Precap:
N: Nahin kuch nahin hain meray pair
K: Kuch to zaoor hain, let me see, he takes hold of Nimmo's foot and…



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Posted: 18 years ago
wow, so sweet of kunal to love his wife so much. Man this dadji is a superdadaji, cheers for him. A well written part. 👏 👏
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thanks, watch out for the next part i'll update in the night but here's a trailer coming up, its the entry of someone

We see a girl walking out of the plane we see her eyes, her mouth, her body as she is walking through the airport. A guy gets in her way 'damn u must be tired'
The girl: huh?
Guy: u were running through my dreams all night
girl: G...R...oss
Guy: Huh?
Girl: u r G.R.oss. ur gross
she walks away and we see her back as she walks through the airport. All eyes are on the girl
Some one calls out her name, she turns with a smile, we see her face and the promo ends

Hope u guys liked it, the promo will take part after a couple of chapters
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Chapter 25

recap: Nimmo tres to explain to Kunal that they have had a contract marriage yet Kunal does not believe her. Kunal is continually saying 'i love u' To Nimmo which is irking Nimmo 😆

Today:In the next few days Nimmo, KK,KB and Rishab tried as hard as they could to make Kunl remember, however that plan didnt go very well infact it earned Rishab a slap and Kunal giving him a lecture that he shud respect his Bhabhi😉, after which KK stayed away from that topic 😆

They then tried to find the contract papers, they all searched high and low. Rishab and KK evern searched in the office, but it was as if the papers had just vanished. 😕

Finally they all thought up the idea that if they put Kunal in the same situations as he had been in within the 6 months then mayb his memory would come back, yet KB begged to differ

KB: Yeh ek fool proof plan hain, filmo meh bhi aisehi karte hain. Humain bas Kunal ko Phir se surf board ke saat saar par marna hoga 😉
KK: nahin K, aisay to halaat aur bigar saktey hain, hum kya kareing ke ya sir ki full yardash chal gay 🤢
Rishab: Vaisay he baat bhi say hain. Kunal bahia ke short term amnesia toh full term amnesia ho sakta hain 🤢
KB: Teek hain merah plan maat istamal kar na. Legin kamal hain meineh so socha ta ke yeh sub to filmo me hi hota hain... Legin yeha toh... Wah kya film hain, aur iss keh ticket bhi nahin chahiay. 😆

KK: Madam, mere paas ek idea hain
KB: Idea tah to pehlay bol na ta
They all gather around and KK tells them his plan
N: Wah kya solid idea hain KK😃

Nimmo goes into her bedroom, Kunal is busy looking through some files
N: Kunal... 😃
K: Ji Darling
N cough, sh was getting really tired of all the sweeties, honey's and now darlings, yet she continues:Meh humari shaadi ki film lekar aeey hoin. We'll watch it together
K: Alright Honey
N gives Kunal a look and puts the film in

They both sit side by side at the sofa and watch the film. As the film goes on Nimmo continually points out the awkward and negetive part.🤢 But Kunal keeps pointing out all the positive parts👍🏼. As the end of the film drawns on Nimmo cant wait for it to finish. No matter how hard she tried Kunal was still looking at the film as though they had been in love, nimmo's awkwardness looked like shyness 😕and KB blabbering looked like concern😕, she had just given up with this plan
K: And look at the end of the ceremony i kiss you and u look so suprised
N: Yeh I sure was suprised, cos it wasnt in the contract
K: Tumnay kuch kahan
N: Nahin toh,and then she whispers: tum kehnay ka moka kab detay ho😊
K: Wah Kya film hain, We should watch it again together
N shouts:Sure, we'll watch our fake marriage again, with that she storms out of the room.😡

After some time Nimmo comes back to the bedroom
Kunal hugs Nimmo and says: Are u OK? I looked for u everywhere, i couldnt find u, plus u were alone and angry i dint know wat u would do. Dont ever do that again Nimmo, I got sooo scared 🤗
N: No problem, She thinks to her self that she could use Kunals attitude to her advantage. So she starts pouting and goes all teary eyes: I' m so sooorry Honey. I was just sooo upset with myself for giving u such a hard time over that contract marriage joke, their could neva be a contract between up, I love u sooo much. She turns around and smiles to herself thinking Kunal will definately buy this drama 😈
N: But all these arguments....
K turns Nimmo around, wipes her tears and says: No need to worry now sweety. We've finally gotten over all the arguments. He hugs Nimmo and Nimmo hugs him back and says: sure we're over that. But she smile behind his back. Thinking to herself 'wow he definately brought that' 😉

That night Nimmo ahd to willingly sleep with Kunal otherwise he would have gotten suspicious. Anyhow everytime that Nimmo went to sleep on the sofa, she would always wake up in Kunal's arms, when she asked Kunal he had said ' ur my wife, so u'll sleep where i sleep plus i can see that ur not very comftable on the bed. So i pick u up and but u on the bed'( aww how cute and sweet is Kunal). Nimmo had known that if she argued Kunal would start using physical affection again like hugs and kisses. So she hadnt argued. 😆

Okay that's all. Hope u guys liked it leave some comments about whether u liked it.and here's the precap:

KK: Sir... Sir Kunal wakes up🥱
K: wat's wrong KK
KK: Actualy Nimmo madam nai aapko bulaya hain
K gets up and looks at the clock, it's 6.00am. Wat would Nimmo want at 6
K: Nimmo nay iss time par ku bulaya, uska jagra to nahin hua hain kisi ke saath.🤢
KK: Nahin sir. Madam said... (tun tun tuh)😆

Okay now u have to guess wat did madam say?? Why is she making him get up at 6 for???. Give me some good and creative suggestions. Humour me 😃 For every good sugestion i'll post a longer part, i might even post 2 parts if u make me laugh. 😛
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I'm updating tomorrow afternoon (UK time), so guys start thinking.
and guys i've also got a new fanfic called Kangan, it's a KZK fanfic and i hope u guys can check it out, just follow the link below:
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Here's the next part

Recap: Nimmo waking Kunal at 6.00

Chapter 26

KK: Sir... Sir Kunal wakes up
K: what's wrong KK
KK: Actually Nimmo madam nai aapko bulaya hain
K gets up and looks at the clock, it's 6.00am. What would Nimmo want at 6
K: Nimmo nay iss time par ku bulaya, uska jagra to nahin hua hain kisi ke saath. 😕
KK: Nahin sir. Madam said... that you and madam are going jogging 😆

K: JOGGING! 😕
Kunal gets ready fast and gets downstairs to look for Nimmo, who is already in her jogging gear
K: Nimmo come on lets go
So they both set off, Nimmo thinks to herself 'I hope this jog ends up jogging Kunal's memory back', but the plan didn't seem to be working as Kunal seemed over the moon with a 'fresh morning jog' as he put it 😉

Although Nimmo tried hard to keep up with Kunal's running, she knew that she was never cut out to be the athletic type, yet she kept running and hoping she didn't get any blisters. 🤢

As Kunal and Nimmo got home, Nimmo ran straight up to their room to look if there was any damage to her feet. She took off her trainers and looked at her feet and realized that she thought right, there were blisters on the soles. 'God' she says to herself why does this always happen to me, no matter what shoes I wear I always end up getting blisters, she looks up and says 'I bet that was another way for u to make me suffer, right'👎🏼.

She runs the hot water in the bath tub and hopes to steam her feet, ' hopefully that should help', gets up, opens the door and goes into the bathroom.
At that moment Kunal also comes into the room, noticing that the bathroom door is open and the water running, hoe goes in to examine it.😃

As Kunal walks into the bathroom he sees Nimmo with one foot in the bathtub and examining the other blistered foot 😳
K: Why is that women always end up hurting their feet? Ever heard of the word comfortable 😉
Nimmo glowers at him, but Kunal goes to look at Nimmo's feet 😳(awww)
N: It's not my fault, It's my mums!
K gives her a strange look: Huh? How is ur mum related to ur feet?
N: Cos she has feet exactly like me, they get blistered easily 😉

Kunal puts his arms around Nimmo and before she knows it he picks her up 😳
N: Wat are u doing Kunal?
K: I'm looking after my stupid wife, if u knew that ur feet were gonna end up in blisters then why did we have to go on the jog anyway, U could have told me whilst we were on the jog, we could have gone home😡

Nimmo has a flash back:
Kunal and Nimmo jogging last time, complaining about her feet. Then Kunal forcing her to kep going and finally twisting her ankle.

K: Nimmo why on Earth are u looking at me like that for?😕
N: No.. nothing, bas tum badal gay o Kunal 😳
Kunal who is still carrying Nimmo turns off the tap and carries Nimmo through to the bedroom, he puts her down on the bed
N who is shocked at Kunal acting so different asks: What are u doing Kunal? 😳
K: I'm going to help!(awww)

N: Help?
K: Yes, just keep watching Nimmo. He turns around and takes a tube out of one of the draws, Nimmo has another flashback:
Nimmo asks Kunal for the medicine, Kunal quickly tells her where it is and bails out fast saying that he needs to go to the club

Nimmo snaps uot of it and notices that Kunal is ready to apply the ointment to her feet
N: Wat are u doing Kunal? I can do this myself. Pass it to me😛
K: No Nimmo, I'll do it. Like u said I've changed
Kunal finishes applying the ointment and says: Okay now u rest ❤️
N: Legin Kunal meineh to cook ko chuti di hain. I thought I'd cook myself today, varsha chachi aur shradda aunty bhi ghar pe nahi hain 😕
K: Teek hain, to aaj kitchen meh samaal to hoin 😃
N: Tum?! 😕
K: Hain Meh, Don't underestimate me Nimmo. If I can control a business empire then what's the kitchen😎
N: Pach taoh gay tum
K: No I wont, cos u can supervise 😊

Kunal picks Nimmo up again and takes her downstairs, sits her on the kitchen table and says: Chaoh orders shurooh karo 😎
N: Teek hain

Whilst we also see that dadaji is smiling at the turn of events, and Paminder who is also watching all of this from a distance says: I'm gonna have to tell mumiji about this 😈

Hope u guys liked it and dont forget to check out my other fanfic , here's the link
My fanfic: Kangana 😃

Precap:
Kunal gets closer still. Nimmo stops breathing and just looks into Kunal eyes, as if mesmirised
N speaks in a whisper: Kunal…?

That's wat u have to look forward for in the next chapter
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Hey guys, i know i made u wait a while, so i'm posting 2 chapters today, hope u guys enjoy😃

Recap: Whilst we also see that dadaji is smiling at the turn of events, and Paminder who is also watching all of this from a distance says: I'm gonna have to tell mumiji about this 😈

Chapter 27

Dadi comes storming into the kitchen and shouts "Kunal!"
Kunal who is covered in flour, is wearing an apron, he turns around: hain dadi
Dadadi: Tum Kya kar rahai ho Kunal, Humaray pas yeh sab kaam ke liya naukar hain (she gives Nimmo a look)
K: No dadi I'm enjoying this, it's… fun
Dadi: Fun! Kunal what has gotten into u, yesterday u never even stepped foot in the kitchen and all of a sudden ur cooking, Nimmo tumai nahin pata ke…
Kunal cuts in: Dadi I'm doing this cos I wanna not because anyone is forcing me, apnay ghar kaam karney me kya sharam

Dadi gets upset as this is the 1st time has disobeyed her orders and she leaves the kitchen. Dadi is seething in her room 'how can Kunal and Nimmo become so close, what happen between them?they are suppose to hate each other. Paminder had told me that she had put differences between them, their both… How?' "Paminder!!!PAMINDER!!!" dadi yells

Whilst in the bedroom, Kunal and Nimmo have their childhood photos out
Nimmo is laughing and says: Baas Kunal... Tum … and bursts out laughing😆
K: Yes really Nimmo, even ask dadaji, he can testify to that. But what about u, what kind of child were you?
N: Meh, Kunal not very different to now actually. The funny thing is that I should have had a ward named after me in the hospital. You see I was always there, always breaking bones or hurting myself. Papa used to soo worried, But it was so funny the doctors and nurses knew me by name! 😆
Nimmo turns around to look at Kunal who seems to be staring at her
N: Kya? Is there something on my face, she feels self conscious😳
K laughs: No. Then suddenly he stops laughing and looks serious

Kunal gets closer still. Nimmo stops breathing and just looks into Kunal eyes, as if mesmerized😳
N speaks in a whisper: Kunal…?
K: Nimmo meh tumain ek baat bataoh? He puts his finger on Nimmo's cheek and carries on speaking: Tumhare baal pony ke begair zaiada achay lagte hain. You should leave ur hair out more often😛

Kunal smiles and removes his hand and continues with the stories, as Nimmo laughs at Kunal's jokes she still agonises over everything that had just happened between them. 😕
'With Kunal so close, what if he had kissed her? Would she stop if he did?...No, she wouldn't' Once again she snaps out of her thoughts thinking about the contract and says to herself ' Nothing will happen between us'

Two weeks later the situation still hadn't changed Kunal still couldn't remember the contract, none of his memory had come back.

Pam and dadi were getting more frustrated by the situation 😡
Dadaji, varsha and shradda were very happy 😃
But the person with the biggest dilemma was Nimmo, Kunal had been so sweet and romantic, even when she fought, he still wouldn't get angry😳. He was always telling her how much he loved her😳, but Nimmo was scared and confused, she didn't want to fall in love with Kunal. But little did Nimmo know that she was already in love 😉

Whilst in dadi's room, Pam smiles at dadi: Acha plan hain na mumiji
Dadi: Bohat acha, iss bar toh Kunal aur Nimmo ke rishta koy bhi nahin bacha sakta 😈

Chapter 28

We see a girl walking out of the plane we see her eyes, her mouth, her body as she is walking through the airport. A guy gets in her way 'damn u must be tired'
The girl: huh? 😎
Guy: u were running through my dreams all night
girl: G...R...oss
Guy: Huh?
Girl: u r G.R.oss. ur gross 😵
she walks away and we see her back as she walks through the airport. All eyes are on the girl
Some one calls out her name, she turns with a smile, we can't see her face and a card with her name on it, all we see of the card is the name miss malhotra
Driver: Madam Mrs Seghal aap hi ka intazar kar rahi thi
Girl: Lets go 😎

Dadi is at home, shouting at the naukar's: Nahin wahan par nahin. And remember that nothing should be out of place, and madam ko koy taqleef nahi honay chahiyai
Whilst Nimmo, Kunal and KB come downstairs
Kunal asks: Dadi yeh kya hain? Yeh sub kiss lyai
Dadi: Meri saheli ki poti aa rahi hain, from London 😃

KB whispers to Nimmo: Ek aur nautanki 😆
Nimmo quieten's KB and all of a sudden there's a bell on the door
Dadi: Woh aa gay!!!!
KB whispers sarcastially: sunah Nimmo, Karishma Kapoor aa gay 😉
The door opens and standing at the door is… Natasha!!! 😲

Kunal and Nimmo are in shock, KB seems happy and dadi walks up to her: Natasha meri darling.. welcome, tumhari dadi kaisi hain?
Natasha smiles: Woh to teek hain. She turns to look at the house and stops still.
Nimmo and Kunal are standing there, still also
Then dadi asks: Kya tum Kunal ko janti ho beta? 😈(there's a pause)

Pam smiles thinking 'this is gonna be an amazing showdown'
Natasha looks upset and Kunal says: Hain, meh Natasha seh pehli baar London me milay ta 😊
Natasha: hain meh Kunal ko jaanti hoin, aur.. Nimmo ko bhi. Mujain who Mauritius me milay te
Pam: toh tum Kunal ko honeymoon par bhi mili ti?
Natasha looking upset says: Hain
Kunal looks confused trying to remember, yet nothing seems to be coming back to him

Later on, Nimmo thinks about the turn of events and realizes that she needs to tell Natasha everything, she turns to leave the room. As she gets outside of the room she hears voices inside, he voices are of… Natasha and Kunal
what are Natasha and Kunal discussing??? Why are they in one room?? Will Kunal realise that he loves Natasha???😕

Hope u guys liked that, i know i'm leaving u guys in suspense and here's the precap:

KB; Meh baghwan ki nahin, Kunal ki baat kar rahin hoin, Pyaar karti ho na tumse?N smiles and looks at KB: Yeh aap nay kaisay socha, Kunal aur mein… No way. Nimmo turns away from KB, a tear slips down her cheeks KB comes and stands in front of her: Kissay seh chupa rahi hoin? Mujseh? Yeh KB ko sab kuch pata hain. KB wipes aways nimmo's tears and says:....

What will Nimmo say? Does she love Kunal???

Edited by starcity - 18 years ago

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