ArHi FF: Highway to hell-3, last Ch. pg 89

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

One of the best FFs <3 am so glad I came across it !
Wonderfully written and gripping storyline.. loved it entirely !

xoxo

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arshi1992

@arshi1992

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

can u tell me the link for the last chapter. 47??

i cant seem to find it...

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#693

LOVE THE ENDING Vidhya!!

i seriously loved it! such a cute ending! aww, two little babies!!

thanks a ton for the PM

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#694

I know tis a little late in the day as the story was completed a while back and i found it sometime mid-way and followed it till the end. Never commented cause i was not a member of IF but eventually i did succumb to it (inevitable it seems now in hindsight 😊) so am able to say what i wanted to. This is one FF that stands apart. The two main protagonists, their journey, their growth as individuals through their travails and eventual emancipation of both Khushi and Arnav is heart warming. I simply loved the Arnav of this story - aiming to learn from his mistakes, evolving into a sensitive man who is not threatened by the independence of the woman in his life but truly stands by her shoulder to shoulder. Loved the adoption of the two girls by a single mom and how Khushi triumphs over adversities and emerges as a battle scarred yet caring mature woman.

I think you had posed a kostin somewhere else about how important or not is the reference to sex in FFs. Well when a story is finely crafted and deals with deeper, important issues in life such references do not carry much importance. If such scenes are seamlessly woven in and carry the tale forward it's great and seem to have some value but all those who put in these heavily laboured panting para's that don't do much for the progression of the tale are at times actually laughable. But then some writers also succeed in writing a sensual tasteful love making scene. So essentially there are as such no absolutes in this. Why i am mentioning this here is cause your story is perfect as it is and with characters that emerge primarily from the same background as in the serial the manner in which you have taken them forward is par excellence.

In response to another kostin - while reading an FF the language sans grammatical mistakes and ease of expression are very important. Writing that has innumerable spelling mistakes, grammar gone for a toss and the wrong usage of words is simply a no read.

Other kostin me no remember now (swear this english is deliberate😊)...maybe will find that post to refresh memory.

Edited by citi - 13 years ago

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

awesome ff !!! loved it !!!!

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

just finished reading this FF

it was an amazing journey of Arhi and i enjoyed a lot :))

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

Read all the chaps . Thats what ive been doing since a day and a half and i loved it. Was quite sad at nita's death. Like really sad cz wasnt expecting it but oh well.

Lovely ff. all the relations so beautifully explained.

Fell in love with each and every character.

Khushi, arnav, nita, sheila, malena, freddy, nigel, aadit, anjali, akash, payal, nani, garima, buaji till she was there in the ff, lavanya, even peterfor killing that monster!

The comedy, the intensity, romance, dark pasts, relationships, loved it all!

In short, Amazing ff😃 ekdum jhikaas! 😉

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MentalExotica

@MentalExotica

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

res no sex but rock n roll

i am done with H2H and I need some H20 to write you a long one.

Cos this ride and you deserve it.

Much love and many more kisses and naughty things.

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princess_avani

@princess_avani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

love your ff...gosh gal...you are amazing...can't wait to read more of your work!!!!!👏👏👏

cheers...!!😊😊😊

keep writing and rocking!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Direwolves

@Direwolves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#700

this was a beautiful ff

i will never forget it

especially malli arnav relationship, aadit anjali, nigel freddy

not to forget u\our beloved ArHi!!!!!

please write a new ff