SS:CAN WORLD APART US ch 8at 27

naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#1


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


Created

Last reply

Replies

149

Views

62.7k

Users

79

Likes

959

Frequent Posters

naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#3

prologue

Arnav came to know about Shyam and khushi he asked khushi to meet him at the back temple .


Khushi you called me

Arnav: just didnot turn towards her " you want your jiji to get married right"

Khushi: smiled yes off course you call me to ask this question

Arnav: answer what i am asking you KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA?

Khushi was shaking her bangles to attract him she just freezed

Arnav: this our last meeting , if you want your jiji to stay in RM as a married woman , you never enter or show me your face ,never in life again .he just closed his fist , wore his sunglasses , and walk to his car .he does not have courage to look at her .

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Chapter 1

After 2 days

Akash enter RM he was alone

Mami: hello hi bye bye your wife left you

Akash: maa i am not in mood of joke

Arnav: just look at him he saw him asking OP where is nani and Anjali

Op told him they are in Nani's room he walk up

Arnav: just walk to his garden area and started doing gardening .

Nani: how is she?

Akash: alive

Nani: why you are saying like that?

Akash: what to say she is just breathing ?

Anjali: did you took her to Dr

Akash: i have taken a appointment i have to i came her to tell you both if they admit her i will not come.

Anjali: huwa kya ha

Akash: she bang her head with a rock nothing else

Anjali: got what he is pointing at ?Akash did you talk to her?

Akash:DI iss ko hosh kahan ha she is like a dead , it took hour to convince her to take two sip of milk even that his ..he paused .

Nani: nazar lagai ha

Akash : pata nahi kya huwa ha , her lips are seal , her eyes are close , aik tou bauji aur NK ko bhi abhi jana tha.

Nani: she was fine in shadi

Akash: payal and her amma is saying she is missing payal that is why

Anjali: you bring her here .

Akash: Di she is not in a state to take care of her self

Anjali: hum ha she saw a shadow near window she knew who he was .

Akash: she will not come payal asked her

Anjali : you are taking her to hospital right one way back you bring her here .

Akash: Di she will never trust me again

Anjali: i will say i asked you , her environment will change she will be fine

Akash: who every had hurt her will never live in peace never as that person has broken heart of an orphan , who had just lost everything in life when she was only 8 , why people do like that ?

Arnav: just drop his pot .

Anjali to which Dr you are taking her ?

Akash: Family DR di .

Anjali look out she saw the shadow walk away .

Akash: i have to go


Arnav drive to the hospital he parked car very far and walk to the parking lot to wait ..he was not getting words what to say to him self he just walk restlessly. she saw Akash parking car he open door and hold her hand to come out , hand came out it still has those bangles she came out she was pale as if she has no blood in her body she placed her first step she was about to fall Akash hold her . Arnav look at his hand his hand was in air to help him he just closed his fist ..he look at her she was looking here and there as she walked in

comment soon if you need more

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
-aparna- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Di what u hv done
see
i mcrying
;(
naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: aparna5293

Di what u hv done
see
i mcrying
;(

forum is full of such topics mein kya karo kuch positive kaisa likho
sruthirishi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
interesting ...

do continue ASAP😃
Siaa_Rickman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
What an interesting start!! Poor Khushi..she's all broken...

You have to continue soon :D Me waiting eagerly to read the next :D
virens thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Lovely start...plzzz do continue soon
naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#10

Payal: what are you looking for khushi?

Khushi just shakes her head .

Dr examine her and gave her medicine and ask them to bring her in morning for test as it was alarming why her temperature was not decreasing . Akash ok he relaxed as now he can take her home. they left hospital.

Arnav walk in to the Dr

Dr: hi Arnav

Arnav: sorry i could not make up in time ,what happen did you check her ?

DR: yes i did check her , her temperature is not decreasing, plus she is getting weak daily ,why dont you take her to a psychiatrist as her mind is stuck some where..

Arnav: anything else

DR: she can have nervous break down too if she does not speak up .as her sister was saying she is in some kind of shock or what .

Arnav: thanks he was about to go DR

DR: yes Arnav

Arnav: she will be fine right

DR: yes she will be but she needs over attention and over care , as you must be knowing that a person who make everyone happy is over sensitive . and she is she smiles to hide her inner pain .

Arnav: hmmm please dont tell any one i came here he just walk out . he drive back home he recollected what happen that day he was upset as he saw Shaym listening his and Khushi private conversation , he didnot liked ,he was waiting for khushi at the door when he saw her coming almost running ,he just wanted to ask her but didnot get chance ,next day Anjali asked him to go to drop few things at GM ,he was very happy to go there he was parking car when he heard two women talking .

one to other " how can buaji ji made her nice to get married to brother in law of the the same guy who hand betray them ,

other: khushi is adopted they dont care for her if she was her own niece she had never let her elder sister to marry that cunning lawyer Shyam jha .

Arnav just sat back in car and drive straight to home he saw shyam making anjali sit in car he gets out and ask drive to take his car as it is out of order he hold shyam hand and sat in the other car " tell me what you want to go away from my DI and Khushi life "

Shyam was not expecting this from him

Arnav: bang on the steering

Shyam: you step out of khushi life i will go away from your DI life deal

Arnav: look at him

Shyam gave a cunning smile ..

Arnav done ...in anger he said


present

he hit hard on steering "i save DI but i hurt her how could i do that" FB " he drive from temple to a hotel and ask Aman to drop car at RM , he was not in a state to face everyone , he just wanted to be alone . it was night he was restless "he does not harm her"he called for a cab and drive to her home ask the driver to park car he stay their till dawn , he repeated same in the next night. today evening payal called him he indeed got scared .as she was crying badly

Arnav: what happen ?

Payal: she is not listening to any one if you come back she may listen to you as she is scared of you .

Arnav: just pack his bag and walk to RM he saw Akash scolding Mami ji and then he heard his conversation .


AT RM

Akash : khushi ji chala

Khushi: just look at RM "Nahi"

Akash had already text Anjali to bring nani .at the door

Nani: khushi beitya hum sub na kya kardiya ha jo aap nahi aarhi ha RM

Khushi: nani ji aap na kuch nahi kya

Anjali: tou chala undar

Khushi: hum nahi aa sakta ha

Anjali: kyun kis na kuch bola ha

(anjali was using her wild imagination as after wedding ended Arnav just made a excuse that he has a meeting in Mumbai and he has to go at once, she had seen him talking to khushi before coming towards her she just assume khushi didnot like him leaving like this that why she didnot enter RM and got sick)

Nani: khushi betiya baat kya huwi ha

Khushi: just heard his car stopping " hum ko ghar chorda "


Arnav: get down he closed his fist and walk to them" Kya huwa why you all are standing here"

Payal aap aagai

Arnav: yes you called me how could i dont come he placed his hand on her head

Anjali look at Nani .

Payal she is not listening

Arnav: move he just bend in picked her up and walked in "jab koi sunta nahi ha tou iss tarah karta ha " everyone followed him .


i have to finish it before 14 so you guys comment quickly if you want more

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".