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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#821

what an update...

this ff of urs always makes me emotional...

it's simple story...but the way u protray the characters...

the way u pen it...incredible...

kushi's monologue was nice...

aryan mom's said love is not abt holding on...fab...

aryan...what a man u r...now i love you more...

loved arnav's and aryan's conversation...

i didnt do it for you...

waiting to see kushi's reaction...

continue asap

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#822

i did not expect this twist... emotional part. looking forward to read more. thanks for the part. continue soon.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#823

Superb update as always.

Aryan is right, life has indeed come full circle. And evn though it is not fair to him, he knows that the right thing to do is back away. He will always have khushi's love but not the kind which he holds for her.

Arnav feels indebted to aryan for returning his khushi back

waiting to see how khushi will react when she finds out

please continue soon

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#824

oh wow..

awesome update..

arnav out of danger..

and them understanding each other...and not expecting anything..

and aryan sacrificing his love cos he knows khushi loved arnav..

very emotional but beautifully written..

many thanks for the pm..:)
continue soon..

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#825

Loved loved n loved it!!! No better way than this wud hv been possible to complete the circle!!!
Eagerly watng fr the nxt updte nw to knw wat happens!!!
Hope there r no more twistz n turns n ArHi finally meets!!!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#826

That was a beautiful and heartbreaking update !!!!!
Loved how you have written it !!!!! Superb !!!!!
The way Khushi was worried about Arnav!!!! The conversation between aryan and his mom !!!!!! Felt sooo bad for him !!!!
Loved the Khushi and Arnav part !!!!!!
And the Arnav and Aryan part !!! One tried to sacrifice his life for Khushi while the other sacrificed his love for her !!!!
The last part was sooo sad !!!! Felt like crying !!!! Beautiful lines in the end !!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!!

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Malnaray08

@Malnaray08

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#827

loved it ... no words to describe ur work Lyraa, thank u Soo much for the pm:-)

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#828

Awesome update Aryan is really very sweet person but hope he comes out of the pain losing Khushi to Arnav

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Akanksha

@akshi_2

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#829

That was BEAUTIFUL :') So glad everything's going to turn out fine!

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#830

oh how i loved khushi unconsiously showed her emotions for arnav. understanding finally dawning on aryan that khushi never loved him like she had loved arnav. its bound to be this way. feeling sorry for him but then am always a sucker for arhi to get together u know.

LOVED the convo between arnav and aryan. it was upto the mark. he just conveyed his point and then out of the way. Awesome..

A new day to begin for all 3 of them. Brilliant job!