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Posted: 13 years ago
i was crying when read this part
i loved it! very much!!!!!!
hope you update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHOTU LYRAA!!! WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING?!

MY CHOTU CHOTU CHOTU BEYBEY! :D

Okay. Sorry for the SPAM-Akraman on your thread. Couldn't be helped. :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh My... I just read your entire FF.. Its damn beautiful.. You've portrayed everyone's feelings sooo beautifully.. Could you pls add me to your PM list.. Pls update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is an amazing piece of work lyraa... Stumbled upon your ff n hv been speechless and quite nervous as I finished reading the 15 th chapter !!!! Mind b lowing!! Let me congratulate you for writing such a. Gripping tale !!! Can't wait o read more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant story! had tears in my eyes! waiting for you to continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I've read all your work but i don't think iv'e commented...maybe once or twice lol...one of the first FF's i ever read was your 'Behind that smile' now that was amazing and beautiful,,..honestly made me feel all sorts of emotions just by the way you write... its so poetic and realistic..you bring the whole story and characters and concept to life...
i've recently caught up with this FF ... and i've gotta say i'm in love with it... it;s so beautiful...the whole story of Khushi's conflicting feelings is so real... to choose the one who as you say is her reason to breathe,... or the one who is the reason she breathes... it makes your FF so original and amazing to read...

I've honestly cried whilst reading your more sad and angsty updates... that's how amazing you write that i actually feel real emotion towards these characters :) you've got a unique sense of writing... i actually look forward to reading more of your sad and tension filled updates rather than happy ones... you just write them with so much more emotions and feeling ... it's beautiful :)

Chapter 15 just had me on the edge of my bed whilst reading it... even though i would loved for her to choose Arnav... i'm glad she chose Aryan... again cos it's so realistic,,, it goes against so much typical scenarios.. which is why your a unique and original writer...

You never cease to amaze me... each update is just as good as the one before :) look forward to many more updates... whenever your ready and are free to give them :) hopefully you can PM me when you write the next update... or you could wait till i carry on commenting a bit more (which i will for sure do now) and then PM me LOL :)

Love this FF... it literally runs all my emotions in a whirlpool...:)
Edited by ChocoBloc_12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBloc_12

I've read all your work but i don't think iv'e commented...maybe once or twice lol...one of the first FF's i ever read was your 'Behind that smile' now that was amazing and beautiful,,..honestly made me feel all sorts of emotions just by the way you write... its so poetic and realistic..you bring the whole story and characters and concept to life...

i've recently caught up with this FF ... and i've gotta say i'm in love with it... it;s so beautiful...the whole story of Khushi's conflicting feelings is so real... to choose the one who as you say is her reason to breathe,... or the one who is the reason she breathes... it makes your FF so original and amazing to read...

I've honestly cried whilst reading your more sad and angsty updates... that's how amazing you write that i actually feel real emotion towards these characters :) you've got a unique sense of writing... i actually look forward to reading more of your sad and tension filled updates rather than happy ones... you just write them with so much more emotions and feeling ... it's beautiful :)

Chapter 15 just had me on the edge of my bed whilst reading it... even though i would loved for her to choose Arnav... i'm glad she chose Aryan... again cos it's so realistic,,, it goes against so much typical scenarios.. which is why your a unique and original writer...

You never cease to amaze me... each update is just as good as the one before :) look forward to many more updates... whenever your ready and are free to give them :) hopefully you can PM me when you write the next update... or you could wait till i carry on commenting a bit more (which i will for sure do now) and then PM me LOL :)

Love this FF... it literally runs all my emotions in a whirlpool...:)


Thank u sooo much... If u r on my buddy list i will surely pm u... comments dont rally bother me much... yea i feel a reader shud comment occasionally but it shudn be an obligation... because many times after reading some FFs., m also lost for words and i dunno what to comment... so no worries... this one is on hold till may...I'll update on the 12th of may... so till then😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lyraa
firstly i read ur completed FF behind that smile and it was beautiful
from end to start
but this FF was just awesome
the emotions ur writing
the way everything happened from prologue till Chapter 15 i was spellbound
and didnt stop till i came to this chapter
the whole FF is written beautifully
chapter 15 left me in tears it was so heart wrenching
my mom is giving me a weird look that i have gone mad looking at my laptop n crying😆

update plzz when u get time
hope u will send me a PM too of your future updates😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such a beautiful part really sooo heart touching ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
we r waiting lyraa,plzz update soon bt yes take ur exam time.

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