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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Absolutely fabulous...👏

God u made me cry right throughout this FF but this chapter was something else... Your portrayal of emotions is simply and purely STUNNING...

Its our khushnaseebi that we are able to read the works of writers of such calibre...

All the best for your exams...

update asap...

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arta

@arta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

it's a powerful emotions part
everyone is right in their may of thinking , the 3 of them are suffering , to much emotions , to much pain , and you have written it so beautifully ...
kudos to you for this

p.s good luck for your exams 😊

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sonudew

@sonudew

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

totally an emotional one... beautifully writtn lyraa...it nevr is easy to choose between two ppl although the intensity of love involved in dem varies a lott...and i can understand y kushi chose aryan...just like u said there is something between our wish and the rt choice...although it is painful it is important to take a deciision...kudos to u...great work dear...

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Haye lyraa
u updted RIB
how sweet of u:)
for this
my god so much emotions at d same time
sometimes i feeel that arnav is right smtims aryan
uff so confused.
But i loved arnavs confession
MY LOVE IS ENOUGH FOR BOTH OF US
I M MADLY DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH U awww
i loved this
but khushi is also right its totally unfaiir to aryan if khushi ends up with arnav bbut what bout arnav yaar
offo u r writer and i m asking u all raaz;)

i was waitng for this dialouge
WE R TWO ENDS OF BANK:(
but i hv doubt coz of ur title of ff
reason i breathe
i.e.aryan
nooo
dont do this like shy(witness protection) and nayika(going home)
u know it when u get smthing then u want more;)
plz updt soon if possible:)

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

hey lyra all these days i had been a silent reader but but wat to say your story has always brought tears in my eyes my heart feels like crying out loud oh such a sorrow such a difficult decision to take

i love your writing it is more than a honor to read your writings i love it

i dont need pms though i will definitely look forward to each and every updates coming your way i will wait

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

that was heart breaking...you picturised the pain so perfectly...even my heart was aching...thank you so much for that wonder ful update...

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Hey Lyraa..frst of all CONGRATULATION'S for winning the award ..u truly deserve it.

I LOVE this story..it's so intense and beautifully written.. feels like im watching a movie, u r blessed wth amazing talent..nvr stop writing. I LOVE reading ur work😊

Thankyou for the pm and ALL THE BEST for ur exams!!!

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Wow...wow...wow...

each and every scene swam infront of my eyes...and i was crying while reading this...amazing writing...she has made a tough choice...chose duty over love...but isn't it unfair to Aryan because she will never be able to love him in a manner she loves Arnav...and Aryan is shown to get restless over this issue...he probably is in a denial mode...he knows but can't accept...he can't ask her because she won't be able to lie to him and the truth will be too much to bear for him...
you don't know how much i was waiting for this update...and you made it incredible with your writing...

loved it...try and update if possible...we will wait...
all the best for your exams...
thanks for the PM :DDD

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

"Hate me as much as you want' I love you enough for both of us."
*sigh*

This was again angsty. Still so beautiful.
That choice must have been so damn painful for Khushi...choosing Aryan over Arnav, duty over love, reason to breathe over reason she breathed, even when her heart said otherwise!
My heart aches for her so damn much! :(
So many 'If onlys...' :(

Congratulations for the winning the Best FFwriter award! :)
And all the best for your exams! :)