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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Lyraa dear,
That was one painful update...hated it...but then loved it to the core too.The complexity of our mind is unfathomable...Khushi is absolutely correct from her angle...as they say...once uttered twice repent...Arnav has committed some grave mistakes and its his time to repent on them...I'm sure by the time these two unite...they will be on the same side of the riverbank...with only love and and unselfish acceptance to adorn them...

All the very best for ur exams hon😊All the wait is only for the best...I do not mind waiting for ur next update.

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larina

@larimel22

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Oh my.
Too much sorrow, too much pain.

And in the midst of ALL that, Snakewa and his mania! :P

I really wanna see something good happen out of this. Personally, I think any girl would've chosen Aryan over Arnav. One who has loved and cared for you when you were a no one to them would love you a million times over when you mean everything to them.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

So intense and beautiful. I have so many favourite sentences in this one despite the sadness of it all...the writing is exquisite! Congratulations on winning the FF award...well deserved. Good luck with the exams and look forward to the continuation.

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Malnaray08

@Malnaray08

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

loved it Lyraa... all the best for exams & pl do update as &. when u have time!

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asumi

@asumi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

i read this and was watching today's episode- where he cried "maaa" in agony, i was reading the line "i love Aryan" !! 😭 it hurts!!!!

keeping aside that - IT was SOO beautiful!! the lines! cant mention them also! too many to be precise!! one that really tugged is "hate me all that you want because i have enough love for both of us"

the past flashes awesome !!!

i understand y you made her choose Aryan - just hope the uninvited guest is NOT shyam! and hope Aryan doesn't die!! i know real life is not all colorful - i mean i know its not always about colorful butterflies and spring breezes !! but umm .. just hoping Aryan doesnt die ( i love that name a LOT! 😳 ) lol . . .

it was incredible!! the emotions words every thing!

despite your busy schedule you update it!! and that too soo beautifully!! thank you sooo much!!! 😊 and ya Congratulations !! for winning 🥳 you deserve it!!!

all the best for preparation!! 👍🏼

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pc17

@pc17

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

firstly good luck for your exams!!!

secondly...I'm not suprised you won best FF writer-it's absolutely amazing, heart-wrenching and beautiful.

thirdly..."Hate me as much as you want' I love you enough for both of us." ***goes crazy*** that was just BEAUTIFUL! sigh...I wish somebody would say that to me, hopefully somebody like Arnav.

fourthly...Shyam makes my blood boil as usual-I'm scared for Khushi

fifth(ly?)...aw poor Arnav man!!!But I know it will all work out in the end so it's all good. I felt the pain though :(

sixth...please do try and update as quick as you can. I'm at the edge of my seat waiting.

FABULOUS!!!

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

that was freaking awesome !!! 👏👏👏👏 ...
All the best for your exams girl !!!

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Wow..tht was a very intense update..!..i had tears in my eyes.. 😭 ..thanx 4 the PM

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

I am once again left in between, I know Khushi did the right thing, Aryan has earned it and for someone who loves as unconditionally as he does who wont. Yet Arnav's love is also so, but its the deeds of both that are now determining. Khushi isnt even caring for what she wants, Oh gosh! its so emotional, i cant even say whose side am on.

As for Shyam i hope he dies with his own gun. Pls Pls Pls let Aryan noe die or be hurt by Shyam, no pls i wont be able to bear that.

See Lyraa you have got me to be emotional once again, Yaar you always do that with your updates.

PS; congrats on wining the best writer