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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG OMG OMG wht an updt...out of dis world...fireworks always when dey r around...and dare d devil just geet can do...n my devil is devilishly awesome...waiting for more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update...poor GEET ...she trapped !!now only time will tell ...what will happen..!!!!!!
...please update soon...I M LOVING IT...!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!! this devil is driving me crazy already...what an attitude "Do you know one thing..? Maan Singh Khurana has never been denied anything..! anything in his life..! and something that is strongly denied is strongly desired by this devil..!!"
and your denial has increased my desire for you..! and it won't be easy because you are devil's desire..!" wow!! anniee just awesome update...u don't need to make any changes dear just continue the way u have thought...its brilliant...i am loving it so much...the devil's game has begin...i wonder who will win...continue soon...muaaahhh!!😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...
Should i continue?is it a question to ask... Well then the ans is don't you ever think to stop it
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Posted: 13 years ago
first m truly sry yaar i didn't reply on d first part so dis is for both first n second...
now oh my good lord wat a deadly combo u thought of a complete beleiver of love and a man who doesn't beleive in d mere existence of love...our devil juz knows arrogance n power...
oh lord here comes our second devil oozing out arrogance n attitude oh how cud a girl save herself from falling from his persona bechari angel bhi phas hi jayegi deny kar kar k...but abhi to i luved d way maan ne us despo sameera ka katta kiya...thnks for dat Annie it was fab...
ae lo devil ki nazar angel p n angel apni hi duniya mein magan phas gayi devil k saath...
oh no how shamelessly dis devil was asking her to go to room bechari angel was shocked...
sachchi mein dis devil is really shameless but haye main to iski is ada pe bhi fida ho gayi hes so evil...
bechari geet so sincerely answered him d difference between love n lust but can a devil comprehend it no so he laughed it n nxt moment oh my gosh he actually kissed her in front of dev...n bechari angel kept waiting for her knight but her expected night is a big tym loser i must say he just went off saying he didn't luv her n oh god ab ye usko apne room mein le gaya n how shamelessly he started opening his buttons n bechari geet...waise me wondering how is she resisting d hot devil wo bhi wid shirt off haye...but yaar dose paying words were too insulting any girls hands wud automatically reach to slap n o lord wen she expected him to b harsher our unpredictable devil is in mood to hv a new bet...wow...
but i luv his idea 6 months oh gosh m sooo excited to c wat will happen nxt...:D
fabulous job annie u truly rock...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...devilish update di!!!
me loved it!!!
n yeah maan is devil..no comments on that!!!!!!!
will save it till the last 😉
n abt precap..lemme think n tell u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear.
maan is so cruel.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di u updtd ds also m so hpy...nw d rl gme startd...i wsh it l b geet who il win...bt hr m going 2 fst want 2 knw n rd these 6 mnths geet ka suffr ;)..cntinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum prt dear
superb
wow 6 months time
wtng fr next dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi congrats on thread 2 ! Thanks 4 da pm for part 2 n saw u updated part 3 as well. Read both nw! Sorry 4 late lieks n comments! Superbly written. Poor Geet. Dev is so stupid! Maan proved to Geet tht there is only lust nt love ! He wants Geet to go with him! Geet shocked with Dev. Geet holds her ground! Maan wants her! Geet relents ! Maangives her 6 months! Wil she find her love! Well written. The game begins! Cannot wait! Update soon

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